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2019-02-20 21:18:17 来自 托福 4.0 方法课作业
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JudyMo
Admittedly, I can’t deny that there are some potential dangers when doing house work as a matter of fact. However, it can’t be the reason to push children away from housework. As you can see, the probability of children to be trapped in risk lowers with age. So, why don’t we leave children housework with the complexity according to the age? And also, it can’t be better if parents could pay a little more attention to their children while doing housework. There’s nothing to worry about.[br]All in all, there’s a necessity for children to grow a habit of doing housework. As the old saying goes, “without doing housework, how can you make achievements?” Not only to release parents’ burden, but also to cultivate a vital skill, courage children to go on housework.[br]
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应该培养孩子做家务吗 应不应该题 理由切入[br]1.培养孩子独立的能力 2.减轻父母负担，家庭更和谐[br]有人认为不应该，因为孩子学习压力大，如果再让孩子做家务，学习成绩会受影响，但是少量家务不会影响到孩子的学业，还对孩子的人格培养以及家庭氛围有好处。[br]总而言之，应该。不仅因为，还因为。[br]Admittedly, we should not deny the advantage that it can adversely impact children’s academic performances, because children are generally under great pressure of schoolwork. If asked to help with houseworks, they will feel more stressed and probably get in bad condition. However, on balance, as long as parents take notice at how long they make kids participate in chores, it won’t negatively influence their study performances and can benefit in both the kids personality development and the family’s atmosphere. [br]To sum up, parents should develop kids’ ability to do chores. It is not only because it can nurture their ability of being independent, but also it can help relive parents’ burden and facilitate family harmony.[br]