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打卡，第一个题目[br]Today many countries allow women to join in the armed forces such as the army, navy and air forces, applying the principle that all men are created equal to the construction of the military. Being concerned about their national military power, people are doubting whether women are suitable to become part of the armed forces, since women are considered too fragile to be on the battle field in history. Taking the characteristics and social status of women into consideration, I think only men but not women should be members of the armed forces.[br]Most obviously, women are physically weaker than men. Owing to human nature, women are born with less strength and muscles, which make it more difficult for them to conquer the challenges in trainings as well as on battle fields. All soldiers in the army will have to break through their limits by doing fierce exercise like covering a long distance with heavy backpacks of 10kg, or climbing through complex barriers within 20 minutes. Female soldier, of course, cannot be excluded. However, their physical disadvantages hinder them from achieving these. “Special conditions” like the period makes it even worse. Despite the physical aspect, women are mentally softer. Having stronger empathy and kindness, it’s not rare to see female soldiers appear indecisive when it comes to ending the enemies’ lives. Moreover, their hesitation on unnecessary details may result in failures of significant missions.[br]In addition, women actually have social responsibilities which suit them more. As all employers know, women are preferred in areas of education and, gradually, even economics, for women has the precious ability to be careful and concerned enough, which contributes to the balanced development of the society. This contribution relating to women’s advantages is of the same importance as what armed forces do, then why not let women do the work they are apt at instead of making them part of the army? Besides, women in peaceful environment can give birth to more babies who can be well-raised up, producing a hopefully powerful strength for the country’s future.[br]Overall, although increasing women appear in the armed forces and provide satisfying performance, they are not perfect for being soldiers. Therefore, armies with only men are more reasonable.

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In many countries women are able to join the armed forces now on the equal basis of men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and Air forces. Do you agree or disagree?[br] Nowadays,the female rights is equivalent with the man's,so they also have obligation to join the arms,with their has natural features of chairness and persistence.The raised point that women play a significant role in the military,as far as I concerned ,it accepetable for women to be members of the army.[br] It is evident that Iadies joining the military may bring substantial benefits.History has consisitendly shown women were fully capable of performing well in the armed forces.For instance,the world-renowmed female figures like Joan of Arc and Mulan really put their male counterparts to shame with their outstanding performance in the army.Also,from an enlightened standpoint,female partios should be granted the right to go to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war.Considering the sweeping progress in gender equality, there is really no sense in denying them the right to stand up for their home country when war breaks out.lastly,in the information era,computerization and digitization in the military have made it much easier for women soldiers to operate modern weapons.[br] Even so,allowing ladies to join the military carries certain risks.The most serious one is that this may further drive up the already high crime rate in some armies.The recent series of sex scandals in the US navy would serve as convincing proof of this risk.Futher,the health hazards thatserving in the military may pose to women are very real.For example,research has revealed that on average American women soldiers in Iraq are suffering from more serious and complicated physical and mental illnesses than the American service man in the same region.[br] Overall,even though some servicewomen might be conforted with health risks or even criminal threats,Ladies'rights to join the military should not be denied.