口语喵第 36 期 Day 5
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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 5# In my opinion, I believe that online courses have made the greatest influence on students’ lives.
Well, there are several reasons, the first one is that online courses can save more time. Just think of we don’t need going down stairs, waiting for a bus and spending a lot of time on the way to school. We can use the time to relax or study, which is a more efficient way of time utilization.
What’s more, online courses is more convenient than offline courses. I just need to open my computer and choose an appropriate time according to myself to take the lessons. So I can arrange my own affairs more freely. Look, I can have my class either on morning or evening and don't have to think about the time of my teachers and other students.
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2017-12-08 22:27:42 来自 口语喵
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 the first one is that online courses can save more time. (可去掉more,save time即可)
Just think of we don’t need going down stairs, waiting for a bus and spending a lot of time on the way to school. (of后面可以直接接句子吗?我记得好像只能接名词类的)
 I just need to open my computer and choose an appropriate time according to myself to take the lessons. (用turn on computer可能会更好)
2017-12-08 23:59
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