口语喵第 36 期 Day 2
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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 2# I prefer to be economical when going on vacation. One of the primary reason is that many things sells in the tourists area is useless in our daily life and has poor quality. It's just a waste of money. For instance, once I travel to Dali, I brought some clothes and a pair of shoes with traditional style. However, when I came back home, I found those clothes and shoes not suitable for such occasions in my school life.
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2017-12-05 14:31:02 来自 口语喵
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粘贴错了,这个才是正确的
I prefer to be economical when going on vacation. Because, firstly, many things sells in the tourists area is useless in our daily life. For instance, once I traveled to Dali, I brought some clothes and a pair of shoes with traditional style. However, when I came back home, I found those clothes and shoes not suitable for such occasions in my school life. What’s more, as a college students who without a source of income, we should be economical in traveling. In that way, we can release the economic burden of our parents. Beside, we could use the money to buy some necessary stuff such as books and other study articles.
2017-12-05 14:32
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观点:节约   R1:旅行中买的很多东西是没用的    R2:作为学生没有稳定的经济来源
第二句中主谓不一致,主语是复数,但是谓语是单数。what's more句中,student应为单数~
2017-12-05 14:54
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