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#托福写作第四节# 还是要自己好好花时间去内化为自己的东西，从提高构思能力，语言能力，积累词汇语句方面扎扎实实的复习，提高自己的能力

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Anna77

孩子应该做家务

ljk22042

1.让步段，比较容易写的是通过提出解决方法实现堵漏，难写的是从次要性方面堵漏，总之还要多练习，按照老师的套路逐渐提升自己的写作技巧。[br]2.结尾段，最好实现的就是重申观点+归纳理由。而对于升华主题，感觉要靠积累。[br]

某小咩

语言水平还有待提升啊～～

zwbai

造句需要灵活优化

Steven-J-Shi

Admittedly, we should not deny the disadvantages of children to do housework. For instance, children may hurt themselves when doing housework and they may also spend so much time on it that they cannot have enough time to study. However, as long as children manage the accomplishments of doing housework suitably and handle their time, they can not only successfully gain ability of living alone, but also improve their study for they acquire skill in govern their time.[br]From what have been discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that it is significant for children to do housework. Just as an old Chinese saying says:” What would a man govern if he cannot even govern himself?” By doing housework children gain the ability of govern themselves, which is important for them. [br]