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口语喵第 35 期 Day 7
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 7# By all means have a break. Firstly, summer vacation is an uncommon holiday for us students. We usually have more forty days to arrange the extracurricular life. As the saying goes"bodies are foundation of the revolution", I can impose holiday to have a break in order to relax my body and adjust it to the best condition. it's indispensable. Secondly, it gives me many opportunities to accompany with my families, especially my grandpa. If I hadn't it, I should lose many chances to approach him. You know, as his ages growing, I must have less time to take care of him. So I select to take a break.
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2017-11-07 17:54:49 来自 口语喵
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观点:have a break  1 relax body  2 accompany with family
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很合适的选词,用了俗语,超级厉害
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一如既往的流利
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今天的感觉很完美了~再接再厉哦
2017-11-07 18:00
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