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口语喵第 35 期 Day 2
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 2# the topic reminds m of Chinese traditional festival, Spring festival, a celebration of discarding old and bringing in new .
During this time I will have a long holiday so that they can stay with family n meet friends
What is the most exciting thing is that i will shop for sring goods after the Preliminary Eve which varieties on display cover from traditional snacks and sweets to agriculture products, handcrafts, apparels, you name it, a full spectrum of special delicacies.
When friends n relatives come to my house, they will bring me some gifts with beautifu n profoun long,I really enjoy the time mbolizing happ n prs in the coming new year.
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2017-10-31 11:04:45 来自 口语喵
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内容:总体感觉很好
结构:逻辑结构完整,句式变化很丰富,
发音:发音标准(我感觉你发音很好哦,因为太细节的发音标准我也听不大出来555.。。。)
额。。。。感觉我听不出来啥不足。
2017-10-31 21:17
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