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口语喵第 34 期 Day 4
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#口语喵第 34 期 Day 4# I am totally against the statement that children should be allowed to use the computers or other electronic devices as early as they can. Although it has to be admitted that electronic divices are easy to use and can help with some aspects, I have to point out that they are extremely harmful to children's eyes. When I was young, we children played games phisically so we ran a lot. At that time, few kids wore glasses. But you see the children now, how many kids don't wear a pair? That's because they play with electronic devices all the time since they were little. So I disprove the statemen.
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2017-09-28 16:45:10 来自 口语喵
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观点:不同意,小孩过早用电子产品
有对比,无让步
逻辑:对他们绳命有害,危害眼睛,现在戴眼镜的小孩多了
When I was young, we children played games phisically so we ran a lot. So感觉这里没有因果关系,不如LIKE RUNING, JUMPING AND SO ON
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语法:个别单词写错了- -小问题- -

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