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#托福作文咩第 24 期 Day 2# 【作业一】
去年过年的时候，母亲带奶奶去日本玩。每天的行程都很充实，母亲走了一天也不会感到疲累，但是奶奶到了下午三点的时候就想回酒店休息了。
【作业二】
尽管出国旅游虽然好玩，但是很消耗体力。年轻人体力充沛可以尽情玩一天，老年人容易感到疲惫。比如，去年的时候，母亲带奶奶去日本玩。每天的行程都很充实，母亲走了一天也不会感到疲惫，但是我的奶奶下午就感觉累了。所以相较于老年人，年轻人拥有更多的体力和精力做他们想要做的任何事情。所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
【作业三】
Although travelling abroad is of great fun,it will consume a lot of strength and energy.
Interesting as it is, travelling abroad will need consumption of strength and energy.
【作业四】
Although travelling abroad is of great fun,it will consume a lot of strength and energy.Young people have enough strength can play all day.But old people easy to feel tired.For instance,my mother took my grandma to travel Japan last year.There are a lot of plans in Japan everyday.My mother had enough energy to play all day.But my grandma felt tired in the afternoon.So I think compare with old people,young people can have enough strength and energy to do anything.In conclude,I prefer to travel abroad when i was young.
2017-07-04 23:13:53 来自 托福作文咩
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“stamina ”作为体力可能更好一点。
“.So I think compare with old people”这句话有点问题，再改改
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作业一：[br]去年，我和奶奶去迪士尼公园玩，里面有很多娱乐项目对年龄和身体状况有要求，比如过山车。我奶奶虽然有一颗想要尝试的心，但因为很多老年人都有的高血压而只能坐在休息椅上，偶尔拍照，我却可以玩很多刺激的项目。[br]作业二：[br]其次，出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游对自身体力精力有很高的要求，为了能够快速适应当地环境，和解决突发事件。所以年长的人可能不太方便。去年，我和奶奶去迪士尼公园玩，里面有很多娱乐项目对年龄和身体状况有要求，比如过山车。我奶奶虽然有一颗想要尝试的心，但因为很多老年人都有的高血压而只能坐在休息椅上，偶尔拍照，我却可以玩很多刺激的项目。对我来说，一些具有当地特色的极限运动非常吸引我，如果年轻时不做这些事，老了恐怕没有能力参与这样强度的活动了。所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]作业三：[br]1：Although travel to foreign countries be of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.[br]2：Interesting as it is, travel to foreign countries will need consumption of physical strength and energy.[br]作业四：[br]Secondly, traveling to foreign countries require good health. Although travel be of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy which is for get use to local environment and deal with unexpected situation. Hence, it may not be convinient to older people. For instance, last year, my grandmother and i went to The Disneyland, most of the entertament infrustractures have limitation of age and physical situation about the candidates, like roller coster. My grandmother has a young heart persue attempt, but her blood pressure doesn't agreeing with this activity. I'm able to enjoy a variety of items, however my grandmother only could sit in a blender and took photographs. General speaking, some local extrem activities are attractive to me, so if i wait until retired age instead of undergoing those travels when i'm young, i'm afraid my body is not available any more. so i prefer traveling in younger age.
Miranda_Ma
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TOEFL20
作业一：去年暑假的时候，我和妈妈带外婆去迪拜游览观光。当地地处热带沙漠地区，气候比较炎热干燥。由于外婆的身体不太好，无法适应当地的环境，就取消了许多户外活动的行程。[br]作业二：再者，出国旅游需要一个好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿，但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩，年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。去年暑假的时候，我和妈妈带外婆去迪拜游览观光。当地地处热带沙漠地区，气候比较炎热干燥。由于外婆的身体不太好，无法适应当地的环境，就取消了许多户外活动的行程。在年轻的时候出国旅游是一个好机会，当你老了，身体状况不如从前，无法尽兴的去玩耍。因此，年轻的时候出国旅游是一个更佳的选择。[br]作业三：[br]1. Although traveling to foreign countries is of great fun, it will consume stamina and energy.[br]2. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of stamina and energy. [br]作业四：Furthermore, traveling to foreign countries need a good physical condition. Although traveling to foreign countries is of great fun, it will consume stamina and energy. You can eanjoy yourself when you are young while it’s not convenient if you become older. Last summer vocation, I and my mother took my grandmother to Dubai for traveling. Local is located in tropical desert areas, the climate is hot and dry. Because my grandmother’s condition is uncomfortable, she couldn’t adapt the local environment, canceling a lot of outdoor activities. Traveling abroad is a great chance when you’re young, the older you are, the worser condition you have. This will result in losing the chance to enjoy yourself to the all. Therefore, Traveling abroad is a better option.[br]
Flora澜
【作业一】[br]去年我们一家人去泰国玩，东西很好吃，风景很美。但是奶奶因为年纪大了，忍受不了泰国的温度，不能吃酸，不能吃生鲜，也没有那么多精力，错过了很多美景和美食。[br]【作业二】[br]其次，出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿，但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩，年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。去年我们一家人去泰国玩，东西很好吃，风景很美。但是奶奶因为年纪大了，忍受不了泰国的温度，不能吃酸，不能吃生鲜，也没有那么多精力，错过了很多美景和美食。年轻的时候身体更好，更能适应不一样的环境，也更能接受比平时多一些的运动量。等我老了，即使我想做做很多很好玩的事，但我做不了，会成为遗憾。所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅行。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话：出国旅游虽然好玩儿，但是也很耗费体力和精力。[br]1.Although travel to foreign countries is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.[br]2.Interesting as it is, travel to foreign countries will need consumption of physical strength and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]Secondly, travel to foreign countries requires great health.Interesting as it is, travel to foreign countries will need consumption of physical strength and energy. When we get older, we are too old to enjoy the journey. Last year, my family went to Thailand. Thailand is a marvelous country. But my grandma can not bear the temperature ,sour food and the quantity of motion. She spent most of her time in rest. when we are young, we can adjust dissimilar surroundings, we can endure more amount of exercise. When I get old, even though I want to experience, I can not enjoy it by my infirm body. Accordingly, I prefer to travel to foreign countries when I am still young.
胡好奇
其次，出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿，但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻人可以挑战各种新奇刺激的运动，但中老年人不能。我们一家出去旅游时，为了防止外婆摔倒或者受伤，一家人都避免参加人多的活动，只是逛逛公园看看表演。而我和我姐姐就可以去攀登假山，到处玩耍。我时常会想，世界这么大，那么多需要体力与精力的新奇项目还没尝试过，到年纪大了可能真的不能再尝试了。因此我更喜欢年轻时旅游。[br]what's more, a healthy body condition is needed for traveling abroad. although it can be of great fun, it consume quite a lot energy , which indicates that the young can challenge new activities and sports while the old can not. when my family travel though the country, for fear of my grandma fall down or get hurt by crowded people, my parents never step in those bustling places and they just watch the shows performed in park and stroll around. meanwhile my sister and i can climb the mountain and enjoy the beautiful scenery. i cant help wondering since there are so many unknown and exited things in the world which can not be experienced once one get old, it may be better for me to travel while i am young.