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#托福作文咩第 24 期 Day 1# 【作业一】
比如，我的邻居是学绘画的，原本整天坐在画室里反复练习，但她大学时有一次去瑞士旅游，看到瑞士的一些街头艺术和壮观的风景从而受到了启发。她回来后创作水平得到了很大的提高，现在已经是小有名气的画家了，发展的很好。
【作业二】
通过出国旅游可以了解到其他国家的生活习惯，你也能在旅途中看到一些有趣的景象，是增长见识的好机会。比如，我的邻居是学绘画的，原本整天坐在画室里画画，直到她大学时有一次去瑞士旅游，看到瑞士许多有趣的事情和很棒的风景。她回来后创作水平得到了很大的提高，现在已经是小有名气的画家了。她曾经和我说当初差一点就放弃了绘画，因为觉得自己不适合绘画。所以我认为年轻人比老年人更应该增长见识，因为相较于老年人，年轻人更缺少经验和生活的经历【作业三】
Young people crave for opening their mind more than old people do.
Compared with old people,young people lack more experience.
【作业四】
You can learn about other countries living habits through travelling abroad.You also can see some interesting sight during the journey.This is a good chance for open your mind.For example,my neighbor is studying painting.She often draw her pictuer in the studio all day.There is a chance to travel Switzerland until she university.She saw many interesting thing and good scenery.When she came back,her painting ability has been greatly raising. Now she has become a minor celebrity painter.She once told me she almost give up painting before travel abroad.Because she thinks she is not fit for the painting.So i think young people crave for opening their mind more than old people do.Because campared with old people,young people lack more experience and life experiences.
2017-07-04 22:02:54 来自 托福作文咩
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“There is a chance to travel Switzerland until she university.”这句话有点问题——“she university”？
She once told me she almost give up painting before travel abroad.——before traveling abroad
2017-07-05 00:23
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Once she got a chance to visit the Switzerland that she opened her mind.
2017-07-14 15:01
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Miranda_Ma
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儿歌三百首
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FloraNougat
【作业二】[br]对二十几岁的年轻人来说，我们更需要增长见识。出国旅游可以了解国外的风土人情，历史文化，是增长见识的好机会。而二十几岁的年轻人更需要增长见识，了解自己。比如，我的姐姐很优秀，毕业后就在投资银行工作，有非常高的薪水，生活过得很富裕。但年轻时有一次去美国旅游的机会，遇见了不同的人，和他们交谈后，她重新审视了自己的生活状态和自己想要从事的工作。她回来后改行去了比尔盖茨基金会，从事她热爱的慈善工作，现在过得非常开心。她常常感叹如果不是年轻的时候长了见识，自己也许一辈子都要从事别人艳羡自己却不喜欢的工作。所以我坚信年轻时应该走出自己的舒适区，与不同的思想交流，发现自己所爱的事业，这样才能找到内心真正的幸福。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话：年轻人比老年人更需要增长见识。[br]1.A crave for C more than B do.[br]Young people crave for new perspective more than the elder people.[br]2.Compared with B, A lack more C.[br]Compared with the elder people, the young lack more perspectives.[br]【作业四】[br]Admittedly, the twenty-something craves for opening their eyes more than the elder people. Exposure to another part of a foreign country enables them to embrace local culture and history, which is served as a good opportunity for broadening the minds and understand themselves better.Take my sister as an example in the case of foreign travel. My sister stood out from her peers and thus received a job offer from investment banking after graduation with a decent salary and a rich material life. Occasionally, when she took a trip to U.S at her young age, she met a whole variety of different people. After in-depth conversations with those wise people, she is allowed to reexamine her life and explore what truly she wants to do that will excite her. When she came back home, my sister changed her career into Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation as she was very passionate for philanthropy. Still, my sister often said that if it hadn't been for new perspectives to enlighten her, she would have continued to work on the field that she didn't like but others admired. Therefore, it is firmly believed that people shall get out of their comfort zone to increase new insights when they are young. Talk to great minds, dedicate yourself in the passionate career and find true happiness in your life.[br][br]
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Flora澜
【作业一】[br]比如，我姐姐是个商人，她有一次去日本玩，吃了很多日本美食，都特别好吃，特别是寿司。她回来之后就自己开了一家寿司店，引进了日本的厨师，因为寿司特别地道，所以现在生意特别好。[br]【作业二】[br]年轻人比老年人更需要增长见识。出国旅行可以体会到其他国家的文化精华，人文，是增长见识的好机会。而二十几岁的年轻人更需要增长见识。比如，我姐姐是个商人，她有一次去日本玩，吃了很多日本美食，都特别好吃，特别是寿司。她回来之后就自己开了一家寿司店，引进了日本的厨师，因为寿司特别地道，所以现在生意特别好。她常常感叹要不是年轻时增长了见识，自己可能就不能获得现在的成功。在我看来，经历的越多越成熟，我旅行的意义是学校不能给的，这对我们的未来发展都是有利的。[br]【作业三】[br]1.Young people carve for opening the mind than older people do.[br]2.Compared with the aged, the youth lack more experience.[br]【作业四】[br]Young people carve for opening the mind than older people do. The travel of foreign country is a scarce opportunity to experience the other countries' essence of culture and customs. In addition, the young man in their twenties lack more experience. For instance, my sister is a businessman. On one occasion, she traveled in Japan, and she enjoyed plenty of Japanese delicacies, especially the sushi. After she came back, she set up a sushi shop. It is worthy to mention that she invited two Japanese sushi chefs. Her shop becomes the most welcome store in our place on account of the authentic sushi. She always points out the experience of Japan is so rewarding that she could make such a success. As far as I am concerned, the more situation we come though, the more mature we will be. The Journey's meaning is too extraordinary to gain in the school, and it will benefit our later future.