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#托福作文咩第 16 期 Day 9# Recently a heated debat arouse wide public concern. Views on it is important to read or watch news presented by different people in different views than by similar views vary from person to person. Some people believe read or watch news presented by different people in different views is more important. But others hold different attitede towards this issue. They believe read or watch news presented by similar views is more important. Personally, I regard know different views form different people will help us a lot. My reason and examples are given below.
2016-11-17 09:48:38 来自 托福作文咩
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Recently a heated debat arouse wide public concern. Views on wheter it is more important to read or watch news presented by different people in different views than by similar views vary from person to person. Some people believe reading or watching news presented by different people in different views is more important. But others hold opposite attitude towards this issue.  Personally, I regard knowing different views form different people will help us a lot. My reason and examples are given below. (我帮你删掉了一句话 有点啰嗦的,细节比之前好些了)
2016-11-17 11:36
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好的,这样看起来是简洁好多!?
2016-11-17 12:31
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