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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 【作业一】 十年树木,百年树人。随着社会变化,教育领域也发生了巨大变化。一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。例如,教室学习和实地学习相比,到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由如下。
【作业二】简言之,实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的,因而对孩子的教育更好。
【作业三】1. There has always been plentiful of debate about enducation.
2.As always, debate relating to education is abundant.
【作业四】
An old Chinese saying goes, 'It takes ten years to grow trees but a hundred years to rear people '.With the remarkable progress of the society, enormous changes have taken place in the field of education. There has always been plentiful of debate about education. For example, which has better influence on children, in terms of field trips or classroom teaching. Personally speaking, it is more reasonable to choose learn things in the real situation. My reasons and examples are given bellow.
In short, field trips teaching helps students to understand the knowledge better. Plus, it is better at stimulating students' delight in information of books to drive learning initiative. All of above benefit the achievement of aim of imparting knowledge, which is confirmed good for kids' development.
2016-05-12 09:28:09 来自 托福作文咩
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写的真好,除了,below一个typo!学习榜样!好多高级词汇,好多语块!!!手动点?!!
2016-05-12 09:38
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小伙伴总结段写的真漂亮。收藏了! An old Chinese saying goes, 'It takes ten years to grow trees but a hundred years to rear people '.With the remarkable progress of the society, enormous changes have taken place in 【可以换成 occurred in ,take place in 感觉用的人有点多】the field of education. There has always been【可以换成这个 has historically been】 plentiful of debate about education. For example, which has better influence on children, in terms of field trips or classroom teaching. Personally speaking, it is more reasonable to choose 【to】learn things in the real situation. My reasons and examples are given bellow. ???
2016-05-12 09:42
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好棒哦!!学习学习!!
2016-05-12 15:54
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An old Chinese saying goes, 'It takes ten years to grow trees but a hundred years to rear people '.With the remarkable progress of the society, enormous changes have taken place in the field of education. There has always been plentiful of debate[s] about education. For example, which has better influence on children, in terms of field trips or classroom teaching. Personally speaking, it is more reasonable to choose learn things in the real situation. My reasons and examples are given bellow. In short, field trips teaching helps students to understand the knowledge better[可以把understand改成gain a better understanding of语法没问题就要开始追求语言啦]. Plus, it is better at stimulating students' delight in information of books to drive learning initiative. All of above benefit the achievement of aim of imparting knowledge, which is confirmed good for kids' development.
2016-05-12 20:45
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评论 4 楼: 嗯嗯 谢谢啦??
2016-05-12 20:47
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【作业一】 Nelson Mandela 说教育可以改变世界。随着社会的发展,科技的进步,人们越来越意识到教育的重要性,教育方式也在不断地改进和完善。一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。例如,教室学习和实地学习相比,到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由有以下两个方面。 【作业二】 简言之,实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,使学生可以感受到学习的乐趣,因而更有益于教育的发展。 【作业三】 一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。 1. There has always been plentiful of A about B There has always been plentiful of discussion about education in society. 2. As always, A relating to B is abundant As always , the topic relating to education is abundant. 【作业四】 As Nelson Mandela saying“Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. As society developing and technology advanced, people become more aware of the significance of education. Increasingly, education mode is change and improvement. There has always been plentiful of discussion about education in society. For example, compared with studying in classroom and going for field trip , which one is beneficial for students? As far as i am concerned, field trip is better for students, there are two reasons to support my claim. All in all, field tips helps students comprehensively understand the knowledge . It could also simulate students interest in learning. Furthermore, students feel comfortable and enjoyable through field trip . So filed trip benefit the develop of education.