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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 【作业一】有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为学生可能会因为对实物或者活动过于兴奋而忘记学习知识的目的。但是正是因为这种兴趣能帮助他们更好的记忆这次课的过程,课后也有可能会自己想知道这个方面的知识而自主学习。实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。
【作业二】1. In fact, no data indicates teaching in classroom is absolutely safe.
2.Actually, there is no data pointing to having courses in classroom is absolutely safe.
3. As a matter of fact, having courses in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the evidence of data.
【作业三】Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 09:45:13 来自 托福作文咩
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such[a] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves【感觉有点奇怪】 after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits【你这个词是动词还是名次?】 more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
写得很好,有的地方有点奇怪,但我也不知道怎么表达更好…好心塞

2016-05-11 09:55
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Some people believe that classroom education does【is】 better than field trips. Since they may too【to】 excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is 【缺少介词 of 】such interest 【缺少介词 in】attracting them that can help them to remember the process【of】 leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed【 用词不当 ,应该是打错了 Field】 trips【缺少介词 to】 teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits. 注意一下介词的使用,会让你的表达更精准
2016-05-11 12:59
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however 这句改的好多了,写太长了,后悔了。最后一句的是Field trips teaching 名词修饰名词,不用加介词吧。
2016-05-11 13:05
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评论 1 楼: which benefits 的先行词是teaching 这里是动词 however那句写太长了,后悔了-_-
2016-05-11 13:07
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may [be] too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such [an] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more[不要more因为incomparable就是无可匹敌] incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 19:32
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评论 5 楼: 3Q ^-^
2016-05-11 19:36
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评论 3楼 刚想起来好像有一点我给你说错了,你自己发现可就好,脑抽了不好意思小伙伴……?
2016-05-12 00:05
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【作业一】请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。 有人认为,在教室上课比实地考察更好。因为外出学习要花费更多的金钱,占用更多的时间,而在教室里课与课之间连接紧密,时间利用率高。但我们因为什么而上学?为了学习知识。虽然外出考察要花费更多的金钱,毕竟频率不高,多不出太多,而且这也算是一项积极的投资,是值得的。另外,如果实地考察可以让学生更好地掌握知识,又怎么能否认这样的学习方式不如在教室高效呢。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. 1. In fact, no data indicates it is absolutely safe studying in classroom. 2. Actually, there is no data pointing to us that it is absolutely safe studying in classroom. 3. As a matter of fact, the data hasn't got the evidence that it is absolutely safe studying in classroom. 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 Some people argue that it is better to have classes in classroom because going on field trips will add to the expenses and cost of time. Besides, we can utilize the time with higher efficiency at school , no waste time in running around. But, what on earth we go to school for? For acquiring knowledge, right? It does spend more if we go on field trips, nevertheless it is a worthwhile investment in study and the frequency of going out will not be so high that the actual expense can't increase sharpenly. What's more,it is undeniable that we may still keep efficient as in classroom when we are outside the campus if going on field trips is able to arouse our interest in study.
【作业一】 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育好。因为实地学生容易发生一些事故且无法保证每一个学生都能够跟随老师的带领而不是跑去玩,而在教室学习相对比较完全且能保证每个同学都在教室上课。事实上,在教室上课也并不是绝非的安全,并且在教室上课,即使能保证每个学生都坐在教室里却不能保证每个学生都认真听讲。而实地教学中,能激发学生的兴趣,加深学生对知识的理解,这是教室学习所没有的优点,所以我觉得实地教学对孩子更好。 【作业二】 In fact, no data indicates studying in the classroom is absolute security. Actually, there is no data pointing that learning in the claa is definite safety. As a matter of fact, data hasn't got the evidence that attending class is definite safety. 【作业三】 Some hold the opinion that studying in the class does better than goning field trips since that field trips may occur some accidents and there is no guarantee that every student can follow the teacher rather than playing nearby. So they believe that studying in the class is the best way for students because it's safe and teachers can observe which students doesn't attend class distinctly. Actually, there is no data pointing that learning in the claa is definite safety.and even if students sit in the classroom, they may hard concentrate on what teachers have taught. However, going field trips have some advantages such as arousing students' curiosity and deepening understanding, which studying in the classroom doesn't have. As far as I am concerned, field trips do better in students.
【作业一】 但有些人可能认为教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为实地学习可能发生各种意外,像安全事故或学生走丢等。事实上并没有任何数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。是否安全决定于教师的管理是否得当和提前对安全隐患的排查。如果这两点都做不到的话,那么即使在室内学习也有可能发生各种事故。而与教室学习相比,实地学习能给学生带来的益处不胜枚举,所以我认为实地学习对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 1. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no evidence pointing to that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 3. As a matter of fact, we haven't got the evidence of which staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 However, some are of the opinion that staying in the classroom at school is more preferable to field trips, asserting that emergencies like safety accidents and straying may occur in field trips. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. The comparative safety of children completely depends on supervision and the regular inspection of potential risks and security threats. If these two cannot be managed, emergencies can happen even indoors. Thus, with the benefits mentioned above taken into account, field trips are more advantageous and constructive for children's education rather than staying in the classroom.
【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。写的时候可以包含以下步骤: 1. 指出对方的看法。 2. 指出对方的漏洞。 3. 强调己方观点的正确性。 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为在教室学习学生的注意力可以更集中,对于知识的理解也会更加有效。但是注意力集中只是导致好的学习效果的一个方面,如果没有实地学习增强孩子们对于抽象概念的理解,注意力再集中也对学习知识起不到任何作用。因此,实地学习在教育孩子的过程中更重要。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. 【译】 1. In fact, no statistics indicate that studying in classroom is totally safe. 2. Actually, there is no statistics pointing to it that studying in classroom is totally safe. 3. As a matter of fact, studying in classroom is totally safe hasn’t got the evidence. 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 Some people hold the view that studying in classrooms is better than going on field trips for children’s education, since they perceive students would be more concentrated and have a more effective learning in doors. Concentration, however, is just a certain respect which contributes to a favorable study results. Thereby, being concentrated is not functional in studying knowledge without attending field trips reinforcing students’ comprehension of abstraction. Consequently, going on field trips is more paramount for children’s education.