Part 1:

1. we are not machine or robot - > we are not a machine or a robot

2. In other words, what we want is work and study efficient. - > In other words, what we want is to work and study efficiently. 以及 some times I just want others leave me alone. -> sometimes I just want others to leave me alone.这个错误要提高注意，表明你的基础语法有问题。副词和形容词要区分开；动词不定式用作宾语；动词的固定搭配 want sb. to do sth.。建议好好去上咱们语法聚焦陪练课以及实用语法教程。貌似提前预约实用语法课会便宜，具体去咨询大师。

Part 3:
1. Only in this way,we can always make progress.->Only in this way can we always make progress.



另外，我听了你的语音。很好听的女孩子的声音，但还是我课上说的那个问题。我建议的练习方法是：有条件去跟着坡叔做练习，具体也是去咨询大师。如果想自己练习，就进行雅思听力真题原文的精听、跟读，尽量做到脱稿。一个星期做 5 篇，建议从你做完了的听力真题中的 SECTION 2 开始，不要用没做过的听力题做口语跟读练习。