刘老师您好。我是录播课的学生，刚刚开始听课。想问一个课上讲的词汇题。 She argues that since these writers were born in Cuba and consider themselves Cuban writers, they should not be ignored, and maintains that they represent a new phase of Cubanness, one that is expressed in the language 【comfort...... 查看全部
Two different positive integers x and y are selected from the odd integers that are less than 10. If z = x + y and z is less than 10, which of the following integers could be the sum of x, y, and z ? Indicate all such integers.
老师，我写了篇issue，想让您帮我看看有没有什么问题 Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be made available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
老师您好，我写了篇issue,能否麻烦老师帮我看一下呢？题目是As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 我先写的让步段，不知这样是否奇怪？语言上和论证上还有哪些问题呢？我一直觉得我的语言上有些弱。谢谢老师~ [b...... 查看全部
先写让步没有什么问题。但要注意一个问题：关键词的定义。题目中说的是 the ability of humans to think for themselves。但是第二段你先提到了 the ability（指前句提到的 handle trifles？），后边又提到了 our ability to tackle problems，再往后又提到是 the ability to solve general problems。「解决问题的能力」和 think for themselves 的能力是一回事吗？写的时候最好统一一下，以防自己写跑了。
I admit that our ability to tackle problems independently that can be handled by technology is deteriorated.
that 从句修饰 problems 对吧？但读起来有点怪。可以考虑换个说法，比如：
For those problems that can be solved by technology, it is true that we don’t need to put a lot of effort into them and thereby our ability to solve these problems will deteriorate.
后边也能自然地接上你后边的：However, what about problems that technology cannot solve?
Without the Internet, we could hardly attend lectures from many top universities in home, such as Harvard and Stanford.
such as Harvard and Stanford 是对 top universities 的修饰，最好放在 top universities 后边，双逗号隔开作为插入语，或者括号括起来也行。这里 in home 也不太对，「在家」不是 at home 么哈哈。
看书自然是会有用的。但就你现在的情况来看，很有可能出现「看了书依旧不知道写什么」的情况。除了看书少之外可能还有一个问题就是思考得少，这两个原因加起来就会导致「想到一个理由后不知道如何阐述」。建议你先把题库中的题目装进大脑里，然后平时多思考、留意平时的所见所闻和这些话题之间的关系，这样才能更好地建立看书或其他积累素材的方法和写作文之间的联系。关于看什么书可以看这里有海龙老师整理的 GRE 读物书单：https://www.douban.com/doulist/665211/
Yet no evidence exists that any indigenous North American plant species became extinct as a result of competition from new species could mean that such extinctions take longer to occur than scientists initially believed or, alternatively, that extinctions are rarely caused by competition [br...... 查看全部
这句话的主干是 no evidence exists，that 后面的所有内容是其同位语从句，这个从句的主语又是一个句子 any indigenous North American plant species became extinct
as a result of competition from new species，could mean 是从句谓语，that A or that B 是宾语从句，充当宾语。
在学术论文中，no evidence exists that ... 是一个常用的句式，可以翻译成「没有证据表明……」。
老师，冲刺课的第二篇文章第一题的选项： It was not generally addressed by critics before the 1970s. 它说这个矛盾没有被在1970s之前的评论家所解决。这个时间点明显和原文不符合啊。原文第一句话说： Before feminist literary criticism emerged in the 1970s, the nineteenth-century United States wr...... 查看全部
Job failure means being fired from a job, being asked to resign, or leaving _voluntarily____ to protect yourself because you had very strong evidence that one of the first two was impending. 老师，这个题，答案是voluntarily，但是我对另一个选项knowingly有些疑惑，因为这两个词给我感觉都是你的一...... 查看全部