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#文法课第一节&第二节作业# H.W 文法课第一节&第二节
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一、[br]writing & language[br]Improve the expression of ideas and correct errors in sentence structure, usage, and punctuation[br]4[br]44[br]35min[br]Standard English conventions & expression of ideas[br]二、 [br]700+800=1500[br]三、[br]1) Students studying every night for the SAT. [br]修正:students study every night for SAT[br]考点: subject-verb agreement[br]2) Having won gold in the Olympics two years in a row, the Brazilian women's soccer team praised for their athleticism. [br]修正: [br]考点: [br]3) Many people do not like anchovies on their pizza, it is because they think they taste bad and are disgusting as a result. [br]修正:many people do not like anchovies on their pizzas, it is because they think they taste bad and are disgusting as a result.[br]考点: [br]4) To complete the music program, a student must present one vocal performance, one instrumental performance, and composing one original work. [br]修正: to complete the music program, a student must present one vocal performance, one instrumental performance, and compose one original work.[br]考点: parallel structure[br]5) The old maxim “Let the buyer beware” suggests that as a buyer we are responsible for inspecting merchandise for flaws before paying for it. [br]修正: the old maxim “let the buyer beware” suggests that as buyers we are responsible for inspecting merchandise for flaws before paying for it[br]考点: agreement[br]6) Although they were protested by clergy and women, but there were still over 2,000 of them in London in the 17th and 18th centuries. [br]修正: Although they were protested by clergy and women, there were still over 2,000 of them in London in the 17th and 18th centuries.[br]考点: conjunctions[br]7) To assist the team in the timely production of the film, a revised script written overnight by the director and producer. [br]修正: To assist the team in the timely production of the film, a revised script was written overnight by the director and producer.[br]考点: verb voice[br]8) When Marie Curie shared the 1903 Nobel Prize for Physics with two other scientists——her husband Pierre Curie and Henri Becquerel——she had been the first woman to win the prize. [br]修正: When Marie Curie shared the 1903 Nobel Prize for Physics with two other scientists——her husband Pierre Curie and Henri Becquerel——she was the first woman to win the prize. [br]考点: tense[br]9) Ongoing research by several scientists suggest that regular periods of meditation reduce blood pressure and are likely to contribute to other improvements in health. [br]修正: Ongoing research by several scientists suggests that regular periods of meditation reduce blood pressure and are likely to contribute to other improvements in health. [br]考点: agreement[br]10) A form of dance traditional to northern Spain is the Flamenco, it combines rhythmic stamping with emotional intensity. [br]修正: A form of traditional dance of northern Spain is the Flamenco, it combines rhythmic stamping with emotional intensity.[br]考点: sentence fragment[br]11) Norwegian writer Sigrid Undset is like the novelist Sir Walter Scott in her use of historical backgrounds, but unlike his books, she dwells on the psychological aspects of her characters. [br]修正: Norwegian writer Sigrid Undset is like the novelist Sir Walter Scott in her use of historical backgrounds, but unlike Scott’s books, she dwells on the psychological aspects of her characters. [br]考点: pronoun[br]12) Studies have suggested that eating nuts might help to lower blood cholesterol levels in humans and reducing the risk of heart disease by protecting the blood vessels. [br]修正: Studies have suggested that eating nuts might help to lower blood cholesterol levels in humans and reduce the risk of heart disease by protecting the blood vessels. [br]考点: agreement[br]13) The werewolf mailed a package to the vampire full of garlic. [br]修正: The werewolf mailed a package full of garlic to the vampire.[br]考点: fused sentence[br]14) When students apply to colleges, it is important that he or she investigate each school thoroughly. [br]修正: When students apply to colleges, it is important that he or she should investigate each school thoroughly. [br]考点: sentence[br]15) Benjamin’s grandmother taught him to read he attended a one-room Quaker school when the farmwork slowed down during the winter. [br]修正:Benjamin’s grandmother taught him to read when the farmwork slowed down during the winter and he attended a one-room Quaker school. [br]考点: sentence structure[br]16) When Doris Lessing published The Golden Notebook in 1962, it instantly established herself as one of the most important literary voices of her generation. [br]修正: When Doris Lessing published The Golden Notebook in 1962, it instantly established her as one of the most important literary voices of her generation. [br]考点: pronoun[br]17) Psychologists advise that before making any major changes in your life, a person needs to focus on one’s goals. [br]修正: Psychologists advise that a person needs to focus on one’s goals before making any major changes in your life.[br]考点: sentence structure[br]18) Samuel Adams was by no means the first American to espouse the democratic cause, but he has been the first who conceived the party machinery that made it practical. [br]修正: Samuel Adams was by no means the first American to espouse the democratic cause, because he has been the first who conceived the party machinery that made it practical.[br]考点: conjunction[br]19) James Barrie, the author of Peter Pan and other plays, is noted for portraying adulthood as unpleasant and glorified childhood. [br]修正: James Barrie, the author of Peter Pan and other plays, is noted for portraying adulthoods as unpleasant and glorified childhoods.[br]考点: agreements[br]20) Scoring bread in the refrigerator delays drying and the growth of mold but increase the rate at which the bread loses flavor. [br]修正: Scoring bread in the refrigerator delays drying and the growth of mold and increase the rate at which the bread loses flavor.[br]考点: conjunctions[br]21) After seven straight hours of studying, Lisa’s brain was fried. [br]修正: After studying for seven straight hours, Lisa’s brain was fried. [br]考点: sentence structure[br]22) One reason that an insect can walk on walls while a human cannot is that the mass of its tiny body is far lower than humans. [br]修正: One reason that an insect can walk on walls while a human cannot is that the mass of its tiny body is far lower than humans’. [br]考点: pronouns[br]23) Every time a medical students has the opportunity to treat a patient, their his or her self esteem and confidence levels increase. [br]修正: Every time a medical students has the opportunity to treat a patient, their self esteem and confidence levels increase[br]考点: pronouns[br]24) Spread by rat fleas, millions of people in medieval Europe were killed by bubonic plague. [br]修正: Millions of people in medieval Europe were killed by bubonic plague spread by rat fleas.[br]考点: sentence structure

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