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#雅思写作方法课第四节作业# 在提纲的基础上面已经列出自己的基本想法,但是写的时候论点扩充有待加强
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The bad temptation of society to teenagers is growing since undesirable information could affect them in more ways,including the internet . In some countries these bad influences caused the juveniles more likely to have criminal tendency because they do not have enough self control,then lead to more serious social disruption.generally,good education and rigorous laws could prevent and stop these threat.[br]Bad people always have diverse methods to attract young guys' attention.They could spread bad information to teenagers through books,videos,brochures or websites.Although most of the adults will not be fooled,whereas,those vulnerable juveniles would be very easily to rise in the bait because of the curiosity.The criminals usually find what these teenagers are interested in and give them some rewards.Then these teenagers would be willing to do the illegal things.[br]A good education must include both family and school,since the adolescents may not have strong will power to self control,as their parents,should pay attention to their sons or daughters' odd behavior to prevent them get in the wrong way.The parents should teach their children to make a clear distinction between the right and the wrong in their early age by a soft way.Let them boycott the temptation and at the same time do not make them feel disgusted. However,the schools'education seems more important that the students spent more time in the campus,so the teachers should play the role to teach them learn how to protect themselves.If both families and schools did what they should do,the teenagers would not be easily to trapped.[br]Through help the young guys to learn self-protection could decline the rate of juvenile crime,but that cannot crack on the criminals , strict laws could threaten the criminal effectively. If those offenders could receive forceful sanction,other guys who also have malice would be warned.Therefore,make useful laws and add more police power to beat the crimes is very necessary.[br]Overall,reducing juvenile delinquency is not just the police's responsibility,that's a society's duty.Not only the parents should give the teenagers education but also the schools should carry out more courses to help them learn the harm of crime.At last ,wish that all the teenagers could learn how to control themselves.
[br]The opinion that women should join the army or be police as equally as men is popularly held amongst some egalitarians recently. They tend to believe women are capable of handling these masculine jobs as men do. [br]In some extent, of course they are right. All along we clamored for equality. Since we have achieved a marvelous progress, for example, women now have the right to vote as men do. Then why can’t we put forward the success to the military level? After all, as another part of our nation, it’s thus reasonably for women to shoulder the responsibility of protecting our country and guard the security of our society. [br]Nevertheless, it’s necessary to remember that the equality between men and women means the society should not discriminate women in terms of citizenship rights, working capability, family roles and so on, and by becoming a police or soldier isn’t the rational way to demonstrate equality. [br]The truth is that there are differences in men and women, thus leading to their different choices toward career. Jobs like teacher, nurse, advisers are featured as more feminine thus can generally be done better by women; while soldiers, police are more suitable for men. In fact, without any external forces, men are more likely to choose to be the breadwinner of families over to staying at home looking after children whereas women appear to act the exact opposite way. [br]Another relevant point to remember is manual work is not designed for women. Even if the government compulsorily get equal number of women on army list to men. This would only end up bringing down the overall strength of the army. [br]In conclusion, we should remember that equality is compatible with difference. Only when we take the right attitude toward equality can it plays the most significant role in our society[br]
In many countries women are able to join the armed forces now on the equal basis of men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and Air forces. Do you agree or disagree?[br]1.女人和男人享受同等权利的同时也需要付出相对的义务,权利增加的同时也是需要付出代价的。[br]2.女人是有能力参军的,古代时女人们都不参军,因为她们在古代是男人的附属品,不是独立的人(国民),但是现代女性有很多的商业精英,人中豪杰,所以女人么有毅力。[br]3有人认为女人不行。[br]Nowadays , women have the same rights as the men do as the society develops. With the basis of the equal rights , the responsiveness of women should be the same as the men's .Some of us don't think women are strong enough to be a member of military since the somatotype of women is usually smaller than men's and they cannot bear this .But I consider that let women join the army is a necessary since they have the same social state as men.[br]Women join the military can show the powerful faces of a country .Whether in medicine , biology , physics or chemistry and the other miracle realms ,women elites are everywhere .Many famous discoveries are found by females , a great deal of researches are in charge by women .To handle events like these , women should be as smart as men .The most hard training can be done by women , The most difficult problems can be solved by women , surely it mean that the things like study can be done by them. Therefore women join the military shows that people in this country are strong in any side not only the part full of men.[br]Females can be stronger by being a solider.They are shorter and thinner than men because of the gene , but enough training can make up for it . The behaviors of women in Olympics can perfectly show that . The scores of sportswomen who had joint the army usually get more and more excellent which presents the stronger bodies of women today is a necessary to win the sports games to get honor for their countries .[br]But the join of women in the military can bring some problems - many jobs that usually are done by females like nurses may be not enough to do their job .Fortunately the men can fill the hole that this decision caused they can be as patient and careful as women to do these work. So the advances for women to join the military is more than the dark sides . [br]Above all , let women join the army is a good event.

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