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1·[br]1) Ethos--appeal to credibility 提升可信度[br]Logos--appeal to logic诉诸逻辑[br]Pathos--appeal to emotion激发情绪[br]2)数据statistics 事实fact/example 研究成果research result 个人经历personal anecdote[br]3)选择最能帮助作者表达观点的或者用四步法分析[br]4)不可以,因为是在分析作者的观点[br]2·[br]1)事实,地球绕太阳转是常识[br]2)数据,段落中出现大量百分比[br]3)个人经历,是从“我”本人的角度来写的[br]4)研究成果,段落中已经指明了是疾病控制所的研究成果[br]5)个人经历,是从“我”本人的角度来写的[br]3·[br]1)可信任度:鼓吹自己是xx大学毕业的专业研究人员,表明自己推荐的产品可信。以及提供各种数据和其他使用者的个人经历[br]2)是一则好广告,因为使用个人经历提升了可行度[br]3)用各类环境污染数据以及人们对此的经历提升可信度并激发人们对污染的恐惧[br]4)用数据告诉他们实惠性来获取信任[br]4·[br]1)[br]①数据“90s”,“topped100“ [br]②事实 ”Today Americans use twice as much energy for air-conditioning as we did 20 years ago“[br]③个人经历I’ve long advocated public-health programs[br]2)as the temperature in New York City hit the upper 90s and the heat index topped 100。[br]3)这句话表现了美国气温上升之剧烈,反映了空调带来的环境问题之大,从而支持作者反对空调的观点[br]4)读者会为数据变化之剧烈感到惊讶,从而对环境问题产生担忧,转而支持作者的观点[br]5)So firstly, the writer demonstrated statistics in his article as "as the temperature in New York City hit the upper 90s and the heat index topped 100" to show the severe climate change and the serious problem brought by air conditioning, therefore enhanced his opinion. Secondly, the writer used facts to show the severe condition brought by air conditioning as "Today Americans use twice as much energy for air-conditioning as we did 20 years ago" to indicate the problem of air conditioning has already become a fact, therefore showing how serious it is. Finally, the way of using personal experience is also used here as "I’ve long advocated public-health programs。” therefore making his opinion trust-worthy by using the issue he really experienced.[br]5·[br]1)Service would not be compulsory, but it would be an expectation.[br]2)The call for universal, voluntary service is being championed by retired U.S. Army Gen. Stanley McChrystal, in league with two of the country’s foremost advocates of the cause, John Bridgeland , who served in the George W. Bush administration, and Alan Khazei, co-founder of City Year, one of the nation’s most[br]formidable volunteer groups.[br]3)通过指出这三人的特殊背景使其更具有权威性,使得读者更容易相信其观点,也便是作者的观点。[br]4)会产生自然而然面对权威的信任感和依附感,从而更加信任其观点[br]5)Firstly, the writer used the expert's advice as the three people he listed in the 8th paragraph are from the authority, therefore persuading the readers to believe in the opinion of the authorities by using the intention of trust within the human mind , thus making them believing in the opinion of the author as “The call for universal, voluntary service is being championed by retired U.S. Army Gen. Stanley McChrystal, in league with two of the country’s foremost advocates of the cause, John Bridgeland , who served in the George W. Bush administration, and Alan Khazei, co-founder of City Year, one of the nation’s most formidable volunteer groups.” Secondly, the author also used facts to enhance his personal opinion as “Last week, the Aspen Institute gathered a politically diverse group of Americans under the banner of the “Franklin Project” because the use of facts tend to make up the truth and help the author to win trust among the readers.

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