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#雅思写作方法课第四节作业# 1. In many countries women are able to join the armed forces now on the equal basis of men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and Air forces, Do you agree or disagree? [br]Today many countries allow women to join in the armed forces such as the army, navy and air forces, applying the principle that all men are created equal to the construction of the military. Being concerned about their national military power, people are doubting whether women are suitable to become part of the armed forces, since women are considered too fragile to be on the battle field in history. Taking the characteristics and social status of women into consideration, I think only men but not women should be members of the armed forces.[br]Most obviously, women are physically weaker than men. Owing to human nature, women are born with less strength and muscles, which make it more difficult for them to conquer the challenges in trainings as well as on battle fields. All soldiers in the army will have to break through their limits by doing fierce exercise like covering a long distance with heavy backpacks of 10kg, or climbing through complex barriers within 20 minutes. Female soldier, of course, cannot be excluded. However, their physical disadvantages hinder them from achieving these. “Special conditions” like the period makes it even worse. Despite the physical aspect, women are mentally softer. Having stronger empathy and kindness, it’s not rare to see female soldiers appear indecisive when it comes to ending the enemies’ lives. Moreover, their hesitation on unnecessary details may result in failures of significant missions.[br]In addition, women actually have social responsibilities which suit them more. As all employers know, women are preferred in areas of education and, gradually, even economics, for women has the precious ability to be careful and concerned enough, which contributes to the balanced development of the society. This contribution relating to women’s advantages is of the same importance as what armed forces do, then why not let women do the work they are apt at instead of making them part of the army? Besides, women in peaceful environment can give birth to more babies who can be well-raised up, producing a hopefully powerful strength for the country’s future.[br]Overall, although increasing women appear in the armed forces and provide satisfying performance, they are not perfect for being soldiers. Therefore, armies with only men are more reasonable.
(1)Nowadays, women are playing a more vital role than before in the society. And I tend to believe women are capable of handling these masculine jobs as men do. So in my opinion, I think women should be allowed to attend in the army in order to provide different efforts.[br]In the begining, women are physically weaker than men. Owing to human nature, women are born with less strength and muscles, which make it more difficult for them to conquer the challenges in trainings as well as on battle fields. All soldiers in the army will have to break through their limits by doing fierce exercise like covering a long distance with heavy backpacks of 10kg, or climbing through complex barriers within 20 minutes. Female soldier, of course, cannot be excluded. However, their physical disadvantages hinder them from achieving these. Special conditions like the period makes it even worse. Despite the physical aspect, women are mentally softer. Having stronger empathy and kindness, it’s not rare to see female soldiers appear indecisive when it comes to ending the enemies’ lives. Moreover, their hesitation on unnecessary details may result in failures of significant missions.[br]Moreover, women actually have social responsibilities which suit them more. As all employers know, women are preferred in areas of education and, gradually, even economics, for women has the precious ability to be careful and concerned enough, which contributes to the balanced development of the society. This contribution relating to women’s advantages is of the same importance as what armed forces do, then why not let women do the work they are apt at instead of making them part of the army? Besides, women in peaceful environment can give birth to more babies who can be well-raised up, producing a hopefully powerful strength for the country’s future.[br]All in all, although there are many flaws of women in physical health, its plus points outweigh the minus points, As a result, females join the army should not be denied.[br](2)For nowadays, juvenile delinquency is playing an indispensable part in our life. A vast majority of people begin to realize the significance of teaching youngsters. However, as far as I am concerned, the juvenile delinquency can be occurred due to variety of reason, and there are loads of precautions in order to prevent this scenario.[br]To start with, juvenile delinquency can be indicated from the family issues. For example, parent divorce can affect children when they were young thus may causes further problem on their mind, because those children who lacks of parent’s care and guidance. Besides, bullies, frequently observed from schools, can also exert influence on children’s mind. Therefore, children’s mind can be distorted from their experience, and ultimately go astray. Thirdly, massive information from the internet can be misleading to juveniles due to their naive, immaturity, and even witless.[br]Furhermore, school has to give the right guidance towards to youngsters since they cannot totally get rid of distractive information. Schools can give the appropriate instruction by opening psychological classes, or even separate naughty students from classes if it is necessary. Moreover, parents have to take their responsibilities by spending more time with their children. In the other aspect, censorship departments have to lodge their policies to block negative information from the internet in order to create a better environment online.