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1.两篇作文如下[br]Writing 1: women army[br]There is a fact that the female members of the military force to date still account for an absolute minority. Although women have been served as medical soldiers from ancient time, only very few female have been served as combat soldiers. So I share the same opinion with those who do not think that women should be more involved in military affairs.[br]In general, the female body is about 11% smaller than the male. This determines that women are not born for fight. Such as they are less powerful than men, their agility of action is not as good as men and they are less capable of long-distance raids than men. However, these qualities are precisely the key factor in guaranteeing victory in combat operations. Meanwhile, the war is cruel, cruel to beyond imagination, sometimes extermination of humanity, it will not give the weak the chance to win.[br]Read here, may be, you have to give a lot of counterexamples to prove that my point of view was wrong. Is is normal to do like this, and I do not rule out that there are many women fighters in history and they even fight better than men. Needless to say, they are naturally stars that are remembered by people and shine in history books. However, the number of outstanding fighters and generals is innumerable, why they only remembered clearly may be because they are women, they are the minority of soldiers. It is not supervising now, although they are outstanding, they are not the persons most women can imitate.[br]With the development of weapons, the war has evolved into a non-contact warfare, a over-the-horizon war. In the new war model, there are many new combat units use to complete new combat missions. For example, a news story recently reported the story of female soldiers. The report said that more and more female soldiers have joined land air forces to fly armed helicopters. There does not seems to require a strong body or extraordinary power to fight. But does it not be good for girls to do other jobs. Why do they have to do men’s work?[br]In conclude, women should not join the army. There has a saying goes, ‘All people are only suitable to display their talents in the realm of their most gifted’. Women should engage in careers that fit their physical characteristic.[br]Writing 2: Juvenile delinquency[br]If the description of the title is true, I think the old saying ‘The root of evil from poverty.’ telling a truth. A country can punish crimes rely on powerful means, but it must not cure crimes by these measures. The most important way to prevent juvenile delinquency is to find out the root cause of the crimes through exiting criminal cases, and organize the government and other relevant organizations together to discussion and conclude some solutions.[br]Let’s think about what led to juvenile delinquency. The factors that may lead to juvenile delinquency are lack of family education, school teacher defaults, bad social atmosphere and influenced by violence-pornography computer games. It seems that the problem lies in the whole society, and only if we change the whole society can we create a beautiful and harmonious new world.[br]This harmonious new world is not far away from us. The model that can already be seen is the Chinese society, a socialist society with Chinese characteristics. This country is realizing the complete elimination of poverty and the common prosperity of all people. It means that the cause of the vast majority crimes is eliminating. But it is not to reduce all sorts of juvenile delinquency through common prosperity and satisfying the growing needs of the people for a better life. Another extremely important approach is to educated citizens from all through effective education.[br]Effective education will bring many benefits to the development of society. What is effective education? The necessary contacts include universal legal knowledge education, national and social ownership awareness education --- this is to tell the citizens that they are the masters of the country and need to contribute their own strength for the prosperity and stability of the country. These measures may provide some useful references for countries where juvenile delinquency id serious.[br]To sum up, juvenile delinquency is made up of a combination of factors and it is necessary to rely on the support of the entire society to solve this problem. Believe that with these supports, the juvenile crime problem will be radically resolved.[br]2. 已制定计划,每日一篇到两篇写作。

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