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#雅思写作方法课第四节作业# In many countries women are able to join the armed forces now on the equal basis of men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and Air forces. Do you agree or disagree?
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提纲:中心论点:不只是男性可以参军,女性也可以。
背景:当今社会应征女兵入伍已经是一种趋势,然而有些人并不这么想。
女性有自己的优势:更仔细,更有毅力,对武器的细微把握更好如操控飞机,理解能力高,有不输于男性的战略眼光。
有女性的军队更像个团体:带来欢乐,男兵更吃苦耐劳为了表现自己,更高效。
让步:男兵的确是主力,但总有男兵做不到的任务而女兵可以完成。

Nowadays,it is a common trend to conscript women into the army forces, not only because female soldiers have their own advantages, but also because they are an indispensable part of a whole army. However, some people still hold the view that women should not enter the army, for they are so weak that could not beat down the enemy. From my point of view, women is necessary to attend the army for couple of reasons.
The advantages of female soldiers is quite obvious, which enable a women to become an excellent member of soldiers. First of all, women is usually more careful than men when doing a complex job, and that is because of the women’s nature. At the same time, when facing a long-term work, women have an unbelievable persistence to do the dulling and repentance work until they finish it. Furthermore, female soldiers have the ability of having an incredible control of weapons, such as airplanes, so many countries have trained female pilots to broaden the air forces. Even female soldiers have a great understanding of how to win the enemy, none to mention they have a long-term vision of the battle strategy, which may better than men.
Only if having female soldiers, can troop feel more like a community. Bringing the happiness to the army, women can let the tedious army lives full of smile and vitality. Besides, in order to attract the attention of girls, one way the boy can be done is taking exercise more hardly, which will definitely promote their body strength. Lastly, if the army without the female soldiers only we can see men’s soldier, it is a waste of social sources. Owning to both of them have their own advantages, let them do the job what they really good at can effiently finished the uneasy jobs.
Men indeed is the main source of an army because of men’s nature, nevertheless, they cannot accomplish all the mission while women can finish it in an easy way. In common, women can be an insignificant role in the army.




In some countries, the rate of juvenile delinquency is increasing. What are the reasons and give your measures to reduce it?
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Recent years has witnessed the great increase of juvenile delinquency. Not only because of the increasing rate of divorce, but also because of some school problems, such as school bullies. Both of two factors pose a tremendous harmful influence on children and teenagers.
The increasing rate of juvenile delinquency can be caused are as follows. First of all, as the rate of divorce is increasing, and because of the increasing number of Single parent family, which can be fully be engaged in domestic violence, children living in such life environment definitely lack parent’s care, love and guidance. Without the correct guidance of parents and family’s love, children may easily have psychological problems for the loneliness. At the same time, most children are the single child of their family, so don’t have brother or sister to share the sadness once they feel frustrated. Furthermore, school can also be a place for children to get negative influence from friends. School bully has been on the headlines for many times. Owning to the exam-oriented education system, most schools only focus on academic performance, ignoring the mental health of children. Even we can see a quality of undesirable contents in media such as advertising and tv shows. These contexts are full of violence, pornography, wrong values as well as anti-social. The children who are mentally immature will indispensable be influenced and imitate the plots, so that’s why children easily go astray and commit crimes.
Something must be done to reduce the juvenile delinquency. Firstly, it is responsible for parents to spend more time with their son and daughter, giving them love and guidance. Government should set up relative laws to protect the children, especially enable parents to follow the rules. Besides, except for the academic performance, schools and parents should more care about their mental health. Meanwhile, schools can invite psychologists to give a class to students.
To prevent the juvenile delinquency and reduce the mental disease, we must rise our awareness of this problem. Only can we reduce it, can we have a better society.
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