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#雅思写作方法课第四节作业# In the contemporary age, a growing number of people begin to challenge the practice of allowing women to join the army, the navy, and the air force. They argue that women should not be allowed to join the army because being soldiers should be the work for men. But others argue that we should give women the equal rights to do whatever they want. It is quite natural that people seldom reach any sort of an agreement on such a controversial issue.
People, who approve the idea that we ban women to join the army, the navy, and the air force, list many reasons to support their argument. The first and most important reason, in their opinion, is their limited physical constitution; it is universally acknowledged that physical condition plays a pivotal role in whether you can be a soldier or not be you a man or woman, and comparing with a man’s physical constitution, a woman’s is definitely in an inferior situation.
Besides, traditional idea of a woman’s role in the society also greatly affects their opinion, they think that, as a woman, her most important role should be staying at home to be a benevolent mother and devoted wife, and guarding the motherland and home should be the work left for her husband, or father. Last but not least important, the women are very vulnerable to the dangerous fight. Imagine what should a woman with a slim figure do in front of her enemy, a man with a large build? Could she survive her opponent’s one blow?
Those, who advocate that the women be allowed to join the army, argue that they should be given, at the very least, the equal right with men to do whatever they want—being a soldier in the army, navy, or air force is only one of those experiences. In addition, physical constitution doesn’t play so much an important role in the modern war as in the past now because modern war calls for high technology instead of physical condition. Of course, a woman’s being weak in physical constitution doesn’t mean they won’t lack the ability to stand out in the technological field. Last but not least, women’s joining the army, the navy, and the air force can not only add more color to the life in them, but can broaden their own horizon and enrich their life experience as well.
After some careful consideration, I am in favor of the idea that women should be given the equal rights to do whatever they like just like men and they should be allowed to join army, the navy, and the air force.
2018-01-30 20:16:43 来自 雅思 4.0 方法课作业
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Recent years has witnessed the great progress in gender equality in many fields and women are no longer limited in the occupations such as housewives, laundresses or nurses. However, there is still a relatively small portion of women in the armed forces. Many people still believe that women are not capable to be soldiers as men can do in the army, navy or air force, which I think is quite reasonable.[br]Being a qualified soldier is not only physically demanding but also mentally challenging. Firstly, women are genetically not so strong and muscular as men, which is an obvious disadvantage in the army. They may have to make much more efforts in training just to perform as well as their male counterparts. Besides, one important quality of a soldier is that they need to keep clam under some dangerous and complex circumstance. Compared with men, women tend to be more emotional and irrational under such extreme conditions, which may lead them to make wrong decisions in a military mission.[br]Some people may criticize that it’s sexual discrimination if women don’t share the equality to join the army as men do. I think they are a bit overreacted over this issue. It’s true that everyone has the right to choose their favored occupation, under the premise that they are suitable for the job. Women have so many advantages over men in many fields such as education, nursery, and their natural characteristics such as kindness, patience and empathy also help them to perform much better in many other fields. There is no need for them to prove themselves in the army as they can beat men down in other industries.[br]It is true that there are many outstanding female soldiers in the army and they perform as better as men soldiers do, but they are still take a small proportion. Thus I believe that it would be better for women to take other jobs except for being a member in the army.[br]


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