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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 4# friendly and outgoing personality only is one face of a coin. I mean, there are other personalities need business man who has a big dream to pursue. The most important I want to point out is coordination ability, since no one can embrace success without social resource, including funds, manpower and social connection.
Say, my friends, once he held an exhibition to attract more customs. He not only mobilized his co-works to pitch up in, but gained sponsorship fee form other departments. Because of the activity is received very well, he was promoted by his leader. So I think the ability of coordination is also important
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2017-12-07 09:59:06 来自 口语喵
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esfuerzos
协调能力更重要。
there are other personalities need business man who has a big dream to pursue。语法上似乎有问题。
有pitch up in吗，如果正确的话麻烦和我讲下。
because 没of
2017-12-07 16:58
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-李不二-
评论 1 楼： 谢谢，是我记错了pitch in参与
2017-12-07 17:05
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杜川老师

friendly and outgoing personality only is one side of a coin. I mean, there are other personalities business men need who has a big dream to pursue. The most important I want to point out is coordination ability, since no one can embrace success without social resources, including funds, manpower and social connection.
Say, my friends, once he held an exhibition to attract more customers. He not only mobilized his co-workers to pitch in, but gained sponsorship from other departments. Because of the activity is received very well, he was promoted by his leader. So I think the ability of coordination is also important.
逻辑
首先，同学你跑偏了。
题目问，你同不同意容易相处和外向的性格是重要的。没有问你觉得哪个性格是最重要的。
不管你同意与否，都要去点说容易相处的性格的好坏。
这种口语逻辑问题，一来可以看口语课，二来可以去多和写得好的范文去比对，网上的范文很多。

语音
发音不准确，上面标黄的要重点看。单词要去查字典，查发音，尤其是/v/。
这个音标读不准，可以去听口语课，可以去听语音课，要多多跟读练习。
重读读错了，没有在该连读的地方连读。

语言
语法错误较多，但是能运用到一些高级词汇还是不错的。
最明显的是：不该倒装的地方却倒装
2017-12-07 17:07
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-李不二-
评论 3 楼： 老师我看不到哪是黄的呀~- -
2017-12-07 17:14
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杜川老师
personality
coin
ability
resources
manpower
activity
very well 不好意思啊，就是这些单词。你的/e/,/v/,要注意学习
2017-12-07 17:27
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-李不二-
评论 5楼： 非常感谢，我下次注意！
2017-12-07 17:30
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NO9
大家都好关心俺队友，哈哈哈哈。
friendly and outgoing personality(personalities) 

题跑了， 有时间把这篇重新带回来哈
2017-12-07 22:11
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-李不二-
评论 7楼： 队友很伤心
2017-12-07 22:13
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To this thing, my stand point is affirmative. These traits will increase one's social connections. I mean, at present, friends are significant resource, especially in business. A friend of mine, Peter is a very extrovert person, which enables him to know people in different fields. When he was carving out a business, but lacked initial funds. Thus he resorted to his friends, he quickly get the loan only with a couple of phone calls. In addition, to some extent, the leader's personalities determines the extent of his or her business popularity. That's why we all love Jack Ma and that's why Alibaba is so successful, right？
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Agree that having friendly and outgoing personalities is significant to a successful business.[br]1.      depends on what kind of business you are running, but generally to be outgoing is much more welcomed to run a business. Because it means that you are able to communicate better with partners at work. And a good communication will solve a lot of problems.[br]2.       A friendly personality will bring many friends around you. To run a successful business, a large social circle is vital and you may get more opportunities to expand your business to achieve your target and to enlarge your influence in your professional field.
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I definitely agree that it’s important to have a friendly and outgoing personalities to run a successful business. Since a friendly and outgoing personalities can make others feel the passion, in other words, that can attract more customers. And also a good personality can maintain stable relations of cooperation. For example, my aunt run a restaurant for ten years. Due to her friendly character, her partners have never been replaced and have friendly cooperating relationship with her. If a businessman with a cool character, he will not cooperate with others and not attract customers.
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In my perspective, it is important to have a friendly and outgoing personalities to run a successful business.[br]Business needs a host of communication work, to be friendly is the fundamental requirement for businessman in that people tend to be more likely to talked with that kind of person. Imagine there are two kind of person, one is rude with a lot of argot, another is a gentlemen. Who will you choose? Surely, you must will choose the latter.[br] [br]Outgoing is the another significant personality for businessman. As we all know, extroverted individuals seem to have more friends than the introverted one. Since connection is the crucial factor to be a successful businessman, so outgoing people tend to be more successful.[br]
西梅粥
I agree with the statment that to run a successful business, friendly and outgoing personalities are necessary. Because I think the most important thing in running a bussiness is communacation. [br]On one hand, there is no doubt that almost everyone likes to talk with a kind people. If your conversation goes well, it's a good procondition for talking about a deal. Who wants to talk with a person full of aggressiveness.[br]On the other hand, an outgoing personality will help you have a large friend circle, which is important in bussiness. Nobody knows who will help you when you in trouble, but its possibility will be more if you have more friends.

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