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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 4# friendly and outgoing personality only is one face of a coin. I mean, there are other personalities need business man who has a big dream to pursue. The most important I want to point out is coordination ability, since no one can embrace success without social resource, including funds, manpower and social connection.
Say, my friends, once he held an exhibition to attract more customs. He not only mobilized his co-works to pitch up in, but gained sponsorship fee form other departments. Because of the activity is received very well, he was promoted by his leader. So I think the ability of coordination is also important
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2017-12-07 09:59:06 来自 口语喵
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esfuerzos
协调能力更重要。
there are other personalities need business man who has a big dream to pursue。语法上似乎有问题。
有pitch up in吗，如果正确的话麻烦和我讲下。
because 没of
2017-12-07 16:58
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-李不二-
评论 1 楼： 谢谢，是我记错了pitch in参与
2017-12-07 17:05
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杜川老师

friendly and outgoing personality only is one side of a coin. I mean, there are other personalities business men need who has a big dream to pursue. The most important I want to point out is coordination ability, since no one can embrace success without social resources, including funds, manpower and social connection.
Say, my friends, once he held an exhibition to attract more customers. He not only mobilized his co-workers to pitch in, but gained sponsorship from other departments. Because of the activity is received very well, he was promoted by his leader. So I think the ability of coordination is also important.
逻辑
首先，同学你跑偏了。
题目问，你同不同意容易相处和外向的性格是重要的。没有问你觉得哪个性格是最重要的。
不管你同意与否，都要去点说容易相处的性格的好坏。
这种口语逻辑问题，一来可以看口语课，二来可以去多和写得好的范文去比对，网上的范文很多。

语音
发音不准确，上面标黄的要重点看。单词要去查字典，查发音，尤其是/v/。
这个音标读不准，可以去听口语课，可以去听语音课，要多多跟读练习。
重读读错了，没有在该连读的地方连读。

语言
语法错误较多，但是能运用到一些高级词汇还是不错的。
最明显的是：不该倒装的地方却倒装
2017-12-07 17:07
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-李不二-
评论 3 楼： 老师我看不到哪是黄的呀~- -
2017-12-07 17:14
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杜川老师
personality
coin
ability
resources
manpower
activity
very well 不好意思啊，就是这些单词。你的/e/,/v/,要注意学习
2017-12-07 17:27
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-李不二-
评论 5楼： 非常感谢，我下次注意！
2017-12-07 17:30
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NO9
大家都好关心俺队友，哈哈哈哈。
friendly and outgoing personality(personalities) 

题跑了， 有时间把这篇重新带回来哈
2017-12-07 22:11
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-李不二-
评论 7楼： 队友很伤心
2017-12-07 22:13
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From my perspective, I strongly agree with the statement, it’s important to have a friendly and outgoing personalities, in order to run a successful business.[br]As we all know, leadership is essential for organisations to achieve their goals, and to manage their employees in the process. And friendly and outgoing personalities are indispensable part of the leadership, which is especially important to have a successful business. Obviously, the leader and the funder of facebook, Zuckerberg is a good public speaker, and he is positive and outgoing all of the time. These personalities prompt him to have such amazing successes. I actually enjoy having these kind of personalities.
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I strongly believe in the statement that it’s important to be outgoing and friendly to run a successful business. [br]First of all, a businessman must be able to actively show the advantages of his product to customers. A person with a linguistic advantage can do this more easily than a shy introvert. [br]And then, it’s easier to be a good leader for an extrovert. He can get along well with his staffs and also make them convinced. After all, excellent teamwork is much more important than a good leader.[br]Even so, some other qualities are also essential for a businessman, such as integrity and kind-hearted.
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Agree that having friendly and outgoing personalities is significant to a successful business.[br]1.      depends on what kind of business you are running, but generally to be outgoing is much more welcomed to run a business. Because it means that you are able to communicate better with partners at work. And a good communication will solve a lot of problems.[br]2.       A friendly personality will bring many friends around you. To run a successful business, a large social circle is vital and you may get more opportunities to expand your business to achieve your target and to enlarge your influence in your professional field.
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I believe that friendly and extroverted personalities are vital for a successful founder.[br]Firstly, a person with such traits can have a better communication with suppliers, clients and employees, which is essential for building a strong relationships with them, especially at the beginning of a new business.[br]Secondly, this kind of person is also able to relieve stress more quickly and be ready to start all over again after experiencing failures because they have more close friends and are more willing to talk about their work-related concerns with their friends.
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Friendly and outgoing personality is key to success in business.[br]If you are a businessman, you need to sell your products to people with different ages. [br]And the first step of selling is to communicate with them, and represents the features and advantages of your goods.[br]Only with outgoing personality, you are willing to talk to them confidently, otherwise you will be too shy to do nothing.[br]Also, a serious man will easily make peoplekeep distance from them，not to mention communicating. So being friendly is welcomed by all people which can eliminate the gap between people and talk with them more freely. In this way, more employees and cooperators are eager to work with you.

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