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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 4# friendly and outgoing personality only is one face of a coin. I mean, there are other personalities need business man who has a big dream to pursue. The most important I want to point out is coordination ability, since no one can embrace success without social resource, including funds, manpower and social connection.
Say, my friends, once he held an exhibition to attract more customs. He not only mobilized his co-works to pitch up in, but gained sponsorship fee form other departments. Because of the activity is received very well, he was promoted by his leader. So I think the ability of coordination is also important
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2017-12-07 09:59:06 来自 口语喵
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协调能力更重要。
there are other personalities need business man who has a big dream to pursue。语法上似乎有问题。
有pitch up in吗,如果正确的话麻烦和我讲下。
because 没of
2017-12-07 16:58
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评论 1 楼: 谢谢,是我记错了pitch in参与
2017-12-07 17:05
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friendly and outgoing personality only is one side of a coin. I mean, there are other personalities business men need who has a big dream to pursue. The most important I want to point out is coordination ability, since no one can embrace success without social resources, including funds, manpower and social connection.
Say, my friends, once he held an exhibition to attract more customers. He not only mobilized his co-workers to pitch in, but gained sponsorship from other departments. Because of the activity is received very well, he was promoted by his leader. So I think the ability of coordination is also important.
逻辑
首先,同学你跑偏了。
题目问,你同不同意容易相处和外向的性格是重要的。没有问你觉得哪个性格是最重要的。
不管你同意与否,都要去点说容易相处的性格的好坏。
这种口语逻辑问题,一来可以看口语课,二来可以去多和写得好的范文去比对,网上的范文很多。

语音
发音不准确,上面标黄的要重点看。单词要去查字典,查发音,尤其是/v/。
这个音标读不准,可以去听口语课,可以去听语音课,要多多跟读练习。
重读读错了,没有在该连读的地方连读。

语言
语法错误较多,但是能运用到一些高级词汇还是不错的。
最明显的是:不该倒装的地方却倒装
2017-12-07 17:07
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评论 3 楼: 老师我看不到哪是黄的呀~- -
2017-12-07 17:14
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personality
coin
ability
resources
manpower
activity
very well 不好意思啊,就是这些单词。你的/e/,/v/,要注意学习
2017-12-07 17:27
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评论 5楼 非常感谢,我下次注意!
2017-12-07 17:30
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NO9
大家都好关心俺队友,哈哈哈哈。
friendly and outgoing personality(personalities) 

题跑了, 有时间把这篇重新带回来哈
2017-12-07 22:11
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评论 7楼 队友很伤心
2017-12-07 22:13
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