sasunaru 楼主
12-04
口语喵第 36 期 Day 1
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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 1# I don’t think this is a good idea.
if students keep pets in their dormitories, they have to share some time and energy with their pets.
Students must spent time to feed and bath their pets, and play with them.
Students in the college already have heavy assignments to follow, distracting attention to the pets that is not of a wise move.
You know, the pets always need their hosts’ attention, so there will be a little time for students to attend other community activities. The pets keeping in the dormitories could disturb other roommates.
Moreover, students will have to spend a lot of money on pets.
Pets like dogs, cats, they need food, proper care, and they should be vaccinate. These cost too much for a student.
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2017-12-04 22:05:12 来自 口语喵
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细节做得很好,
下次可以尝试少些一两个观点,写一个让步句
还有到后面可能太着急了,一些单词的音没发清楚,
期待进步~
2017-12-04 23:06
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