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#托福作文咩第 29 期 Day 1# Nowadays, it is very common to find a cinema crowded with audiences coming to watch the newly launched movie telling a story written by a famous author. Someone hold the point that as for the films adapted from a book, people should watch the movie first. However, in my mind, it is more meaningful for people to read the book on which the movie is produced before going to the theater. I would like to elaborate my reasons and examples in the following paragraphs.
In the first place, reading the book ahead of time is of great help for us to understand the drama of the movie. In my opinion, discerning the movie’s story line is really important for me, which is the premise of enjoying the whole movie. Take Tiny Times written by Jingming Guo as an example. If audiences haven’t read the book before, they can hardly understand those behaviors of these four young girls and feel puzzled at the complex relationships between so many roles. It is not difficult to find that this example is not an anomaly, through reading the original book, we could definitely know the background and the personalities of the roles in the movies better.
2017-12-04 18:16:00 来自 托福作文咩
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2017-12-04 18:19
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好巧,用了同样的例子。但是要向你学习很多。你没有用一些套路,而是很自然地用流畅的语法正确的语言表达了自己的观点,而且句子有长有短,变化多样。
没有发现语法错误。

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