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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 1# As far as I'm concerned, college students shouldn't be allowed to keep pets in their dormitories.
First of all, keeping a pet in dormitory may disturb others. As we all konw, there are always more than two people in a college dormitory, pet is likely to bring troubles to roommates who don't like animals. For example, once one of my roommate kept a puppy in our dormitory, the little dog always let out a string of roaring barks, which disturbed our daily life.
Besides, we have to spend much money on a pet. If we keep a pet, we will buy pets food and regularly vaccinate our pets, all of these will cost us a lot of money. However, as a student without much revenue, it will be a burden to us.
Admittedly, keeping a pet sometimes can make us feel relaxed. However, considering the disadvantage of keeping a pet, it's better for college to forbid students to have pets.
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2017-12-04 11:42:29 来自 口语喵
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总体:
论点:不同意
R1:打扰他人
R2:花很多钱
让步:养宠物带来快乐,但带来的disadvantages更多
语言方面:
For example, once one of my ROOMMATES kept a puppy in our dormitory, 
超时了一点,让步没来得及说了。可以删一些:As we all know, there are always more than two people in a college dormitory, 开头可以直接说 “I disagree with this idea”。
the little dog always let out a string of roaring barks 这句写得很形象啊,学到了
让步太简单了,However, considering the disadvantage of keeping a pet,disadvantage比较笼统,最好细化一下。
语音方面:
语速可以快一点,语调挺不错。
2017-12-04 12:04
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你的语音超时 打卡不合格
2017-12-04 15:51
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