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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 1# I am afraid raising pets in the dorm is a bad idea.
Keeping pets distracts students from their study, while students are supposed to invest their time into courses and homework. To raise a pet, you have to be concerned about lots of things, like feeding it, playing with it or cleaning its body, which will take some time and efforts.
Besides, the behavior may be a disturbance for roommates. Sometimes young animals are energetic and make noise at night. It is hard to have a good sleep in that environment, right? In addition, there are some pets carrying various bacteria and virus, which is a threat to the health of roommates.
2017-12-04 11:41:59 来自 口语喵
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2017-12-04 12:25
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@查查哈哈
2017-12-04 12:29
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论点:不同意 
R1:影响学习,浪费时间
R2:打扰他人,
发音很棒,但是语气感觉有点太刻意。句子逻辑,语法没有问题,句式多变,向你学习。第二段的right?很有特色,最后的in addition和第二条原因关系好像不太密切
2017-12-04 18:19
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