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#口语喵第 36 期 Day 1# Well, as far as I am concerned, keeping pets in students' dormitory is so ridiculous and I disagree with that. First, the reason of denying that is pets will have bad effects on your roommates, because it maybe make some noise so that the roommates cannot have a good rest. In addition, keeping pets will disperse students' energies, leading to the consequence that you cannot get absorbed in the class and feel very tired. Someone holds that keeping pets can relax students themselves, but you can have another choice to have a relax, such as watching the situation comedy, the Big Bang, which can always let me get bad emotion and pressures out of mind.
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2017-12-04 10:41:50 来自 口语喵
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1. First, the reason I disagree with is that pets …
2. In addition, since keeping pets will disperse students’ energies, you will feel very tired and even cannot get absorbed in the classes.


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1. 有点吞音现象:roommates, effects, themselves

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论证和例子感觉没有什么大问题,还有让步的部分,很赞0.0! 要向你学习~
2017-12-04 15:38
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评论 1楼 感谢萌新!!(•̀⌄•́)确实这个语法有些问题,自己本来想that指代上文的观点。但是后面的从句就忘了写引导词。
那我感觉自己已经成了balabalaba,导致了什么什么结果的思维定式。。。以后多变一下句型!

这个语音发的我真是很尴尬,希望自己能念得再流利一些!谢谢萌新!

2017-12-04 16:12
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评论 2 楼: 噗 hhh =。= 话说Sean-Meng 并不是 萌新的意思啊喂~ 不过萌新这个昵称也蛮好听的=-=
2017-12-04 16:13
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