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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 15# 【作业一】
近来,中国的许多大学都似乎进入了一场军备比赛,有的大学修建了新校区,图书馆,有的大学聘请了国内外著名的教授。这个现象引发了人们的热议。对于大学来说,花钱雇佣著名教授更重要还是改善学校设施更重要。我认为花钱雇佣著名教授更重要。
雇佣著名教授对培养优秀学生起到更关键的作用。众所周知,大学的本职工作之一是培养优秀学生,学校应该努力培养优秀学生。从这个角度来讲,如果雇佣著名教授对培养优秀学生起到更关键的作用,那么对大学而言花钱雇佣著名教授就比改善学校设施更重要。事实也确实如此。50年前,虽然东南大学的学校设施简陋,依然能够培养出那么多优秀的人才,这与优秀教授的辛勤传授知识脱不开关系。由此可以看出,培养优秀学生的关键在于名师,而不是教学设备,雇佣著名教授对培养学生会起到更加关键的作用。因而,对大学而言,花钱雇佣著名教授比改善学校设施更重要。
与改善学校设施相比,雇佣著名教授对开展科研活动更有帮助。毫无疑问,做好科研工作是大学应该做的事。著名教授钱学森,回国后在设备落后的情况下,他带领中国的科研人员研发了中国第一颗原子弹,震惊全世界。这个例子正好说明了著名教授对科研起到了更重要的作用。所以,我认为花钱雇佣著名教授比改善学校设施更重要。
有人认为花钱改善学校的设施对学校更重要。因为这些设施可以为师生提供很大的便利。但是改善设施是要在师资力量的基础之上,如果没有好的老师,再好的设备也不能帮助学校培养出优秀学生和进行深奥的科研活动。
通过以上讨论,花钱雇佣著名教授比改善学校设施更重要。因为著名教授不仅关系到优秀学生的培养还关系着科研活动的开展。
【作业二】
In recent years, many universities in China seem to enter an arms race, some of whom build new campus, library and laboratory while the rest of whom are willing to hire famous professors at home and abroad. This phenomenon raises a heated debate: for university, which is more important, hiring famous professors or improving school facilities? As far as I am concerned, I think it is more important to spend money on famous professors. I will illustrate my point of view with the following reasons and examples.
Hiring famous professors has a more vital role in cultivating excellent students. One of the university’s tasks is to foster outstanding students, from which perspective if the famous professors play a more crucial part in fostering excellent students, hiring famous professors is more significant than improving facilities. That is indeed the case. 50 years ago, even though the Southeast University was equipped with poor facilities, it still cultivated a large number of outstanding students, which wasn’t irrelevant to the efforts of famous professors. Therefore, the main key to cultivate excellent students is on the basis of famous professors rather than adequate equipment.
Compared with improving facilities, hiring famous professors is more helpful to do research projects. There is no doubt that research projects are what the university should do. Famous professors hold the essential technology. For example, after QianXuesen who was a famous professor and physicist in the United State returning back, he successfully led Chinese researchers to develop the first atomic bomb without advanced equipment, shocking all over the world. This example shows that famous professors play a pivotal role in doing research projects. Therefore, hiring famous professors is more significant than improving facilities of the university.
Some people claim that there are some advantages in spending money improving the facilities of the university, for which can provide more convenience for teachers and students to undertake professional projects. Sometimes, poor facilities may lead to the failure of researches and experiments. However, the improvement of facilities is based on faculties. If there are no professional teachers, only good equipment cannot help the university foster excellent students and carry out deep scientific research projects.
From what has been discussed above, we can conclude that it is more important for university to spend money on famous professors than school facilities, because famous professors are closely related to cultivating excellent students and developing the research projects.
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【作业一】[br]最近几年,中国的很多大学似乎都进入了一场“军备竞赛”。有的大学修建新校区,有的大学修建图书馆、宿舍等等。这个现象引发了人们的热议,对于大学来说,到底花钱雇佣著名教授更重要,还是花钱改善学校设施更重要?从培养学生和开展科研活动来讲,我认为对大学来说花钱雇佣著名教授更重要。
[br]雇佣著名教授对培养优秀学生起到更关键的作用。学校更应该给学生带来的是思想的启迪和教化,而非身体上的优越感受。众所周知,很多历史悠久的大学往往有着破旧的校舍和狭小的校园,但却沉淀着浓郁的学术氛围。而很多年轻的大学有着现代化的设备与校园但却缺乏思想的碰撞与学习的热情与渴望。在古代也有很多大师在简陋的条件下培养出了非常优秀的学生,比如柏拉图,他给予亚里士多德更多的是思想的启迪。[br]与改善学校设施相比,雇佣著名教授对开展科研活动更有帮助。毫无疑问,做好科研工作是每个大学追求的目标之一。而雇佣著名教授是科研工作开展的重要保障,这就意味着雇佣著名教授对大学更重要。前加州理工学院著名教授钱学森,回国后在设备明显不如国外的情况下,他带领中国的科研人员研发了中国第一颗原子弹、氢弹和人造卫星,震惊全世界。这个例子正好说明了著名教授对科研起到了更重要的作用。所以,我认为花钱雇佣著名教授比改善学校设施更重要。[br]有人认为花钱改善学校设施对学校也有一些好处。比如改善学校设施可以方便师生的教学和生活。但是,这些只是次要的方面。大学真正需要的是雇佣著名教授来培养优秀学生、开展科研活动,这是改善学校设施比不了的。所以我认为花钱雇佣著名教授更重要。[br]
总之,著名教授这不仅关系到优秀学生的培养,还关系到科研活动的开展。因而,对于大学来说,著名教授的作用比学校设施更加重要,大学在考虑资金预算的时候,应该更注重雇佣著名教授。[br]【作业二】[br]Recently, it seems that plenty of universities are step into an arms race.Some are constructing the new campus and others are building the libraries, dormitories and so on. This phenomenon gives rise to a grave concern about whether which has more priority between spending money to employee prestigious professors and improving facilities.Having considered the fact that cultivating students and scientific activities, I think spending money to hiring professors is of greater importance for universities.[br]Hiring a prestigious professor have a more vital role in cultivating excellent students than spending money to improve school facilities.The school should bring terrific enlightenment to the students, rather than superior feeling of the body. As we all know, A plenty of historical universities usually bearing ropey old buildings and incapacious campus while they always suffuse strong academic atmosphere. Many young universities is equipped with advanced facilities but lack of ideological collision and enthusiasm of pursuing knowledge.And even in ancient times, there were many masters who fostering outstanding students in tough conditions, such as Plato, who gave Aristotle much more inspirement.[br]Compared with improving facilities, hiring prestigious professors play a more helpful role to carry out academic activities.There is no doubt that doing researches well is one of aims of universities devoted to accomplish. Moreover, hiring renowned masters is an important guarantee of doing a good scientific research, which means it is more vital to hire famous professors for universities. Former California Institute of Technology professor Qian xuesen, returned to his motherland China and led scientific researchers to develop Chinese first atomic hydrogen bomb and satellite in a rather harsh situations where equipments are significantly inferior to abroad, which socked the whole world. This instance demonstrates rightly that hiring famous professors is essential to do researches well. Thus, I believed that spend money to employee well-known professors is more pivotal to universities than improving facilities is.[br]It is true that spending money to improve facilities is conducive to universities.It must bring us much convenience for teaching and life.However, this is a significantly minor aspect for universites. What universities really need is to hire outstanding professors to cultivate excellent students and conduct scientific activities, which outweighs improving facilities. So I believe that spending money to employee professors have priority over improving facilities.[br]To put it in a nutshell, famous professors is not only concerns cultivating of excellent students, but also the development of scientific activities.Thus, renowned professors is more important than facilities.Universities should pay more attention to hiring famous professors when considering budget.[br]
【作业一】[br]随着政府对各高校的支持力度加大,尤其是财政方面,怎样合理地利用资金成为了新的难题。现今,一个现象引发了热议:对大学来说,投资基础设备和硬件设施更重要,还是满足员工的需求更重要?每个人都有自己的看法。在我看来,投资基础设施和硬件设备更重要。我的观点建立在以下原因和例子上。[br]大学投资基础设施和硬件设备可以为学生提供好的学习环境。大学最重要的职责就是培养优秀的学生,良好的硬件设备条件为更好地开展教学工作提供保障。在我刚上大学的时候,刚好学校建立了新的实验中心,里面有很多先进的仪器,还配有咖啡厅和个人休息室,良好的实验环境为实验地顺利进行提供了保障,也激励着更多的同学进入实验室学习,我们学校整个科研水平都提高了。学习环境的好坏和学习效果很大程度上受到了学习设施的影响。如果学校愿意投入资金到基础设施和硬件设备上,学习环境就会大大改善,更容易体现大学的存在价值。[br]大学投资基础设施和硬件设备可以为老师提供好的科研环境。大学的另一重要作用就是致力于科学研究来解决现实中存在的一些问题。现在科研成果的更新换代特别快,很多大学不能做一些前沿的研究,限制了学校本身和科技的发展。科研工作对设备的精密度要求很高,而这些设备大多需要进口,需要学校进行大量的资金投入。就像普通的学校无法做一些精密的实验,得出好一些的结果的一部分是由于实验条件无法达到理想的状态,这也造成了师资力量的缺失,形成恶性循环。世界上一流的学校能够不断突破新的研究成果的背后,是大量资金投入在基础设施和硬件设备上,给老师提供了非常好的科研环境。[br]诚然,有的人认为大学应该遵循以人为本的原则,将资金投入到老师的生活需要方面,提高教职工的福利待遇,以此吸引更优秀的老师加入。但是,在我看来,优秀的老师不会只满足于生活的富足,他们更倾向于追求精神的富足,而这体现在他们的学术追求方面。在基础设施和硬件设备上投入大量的资金可以吸引更多优秀老师的加入,因为这不仅仅满足了他们一方面的需求,而且这也可以为学生提供更好的学习平台。从长远来看,对大学的自身发展而言,投资基础设施和硬件设备更重要。[br]总体来说,与满足员工的需求相比,大学将更多的资金投入到基础设施和硬件设备,既可以为学生提供良好的学习环境,又可以为老师提供更好的工作环境,以此吸引更多优秀的老师。所以,我们可以得出一个结论:对大学来说,更重要的是投资基础设施和硬件设备。[br]【作业二】[br]With the government’s support for universities increased, especially financial support, how to allocate these resources appropriately has become a new puzzle. This phenomenon gives rise to a grave concern about whether excessive investments on infrastructures and hardware could bring more benefits than meet needs. As far as I am concerned, investing infrastructures and hardware undoubtedly is more conductive to the college. My standpoint is based on the following reasons and examples.[br]Equipped with infrastructures and hardware, the college is able to create good conditions for students. After all, the most important duties of a university is to cultivate excellent students. And wonderful hardware conditions can provide security for better teaching. When I first went to college, my university just established a new experimental center which included a batch of advanced instruments. And not just that, each laboratory was equipped with coffee shop and lounge. That’s no doubt that admirable and comfortable environment is the foundation of ideal experimental results. Moreover, it could inspire the increasing of students to practice in laboratory. Since then, the whole research level of my school has been raised. So we are easy to draw a conclusion that the environment and consequences of studying are greatly effected by infrastructure and physical plant. It’s not difficult to understand that if the university is willing to offer more money on hardware, the learning conditions will be sharply improved,and then the value of the university can be well presented. [br]Investment on infrastructures and hardware devices can provide professors with ideal experimental conditions. After all, another important function of the university is dealing with realistic problems by doing research. Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology, some colleges fail to study the most cutting-edge scientific research, and then, in this circumstance, their own development would be limited. Besides, it’s universally acknowledged that high precision requirements for equipment are indispensable in experiment. Unfortunately, those kinds of equipment need to be imported, which means that a large sum of money is suppose to be supported for research. For example, ordinary universities don’t have the ability to do some sophisticated experiments since experimental conditions can’t satisfy their needs, causing the lack of wonderful professors and vicious circle. Because there’s no wonder that excellent professor can’t stand doing research work in poor conditions for a long time.The reason why top universities in the world are able to breakthrough continuously is adequate financial support which is positive to professors’ work.[br]Admittedly, someone holds that universities should obey the principle of people-oriented, which means that the college is supposed to invest excessive money on areas where the professors’ demands on lives will be satisfied. In that way, the welfare of the staffs will be raised, and then the increasing of outstanding teachers will be eager to work in this school. However, from my perspective, those excellent teachers not only have the pursuit of material lives, but they prefer to have spiritual satisfaction which is well illustrated on advocating for the academic. Moreover, abundant investments on infrastructures and hardware conditions undoubtedly will attract more perfect elites since they don’t just derive the kinds of satisfactions from their work . Not to mention, they also help them have higher happiness and meaning-of-life scores . In a long run, for the university, infrastructures and hardware conditions are supposed to be placed first.[br]To put it in a nutshell, compared with satisfying staffs’ needs, investments on infrastructures and hardware not only can create better environment for students to study, but make sure that the teachers will have more comfortable working circumstances to attract more outstanding professors. So, we are able to safely draw a conclusion that for the university, making more investments on infrastructures and hardware is of more significance.
In recent years, many universities in China seem to have entered an arms race". Some universities build new campuses, some universities build libraries, dormitories and so on. This phenomenon has aroused heated debate. For universities, is it more important to spend money on hiring famous professors, or is it more important to spend money on improving school facilities? In terms of training students and developing scientific research activities, I think it is more important for universities to hire famous professors for money.[br]For universities, it's more important to hire famous professors than to improve school facilities. Employing famous professors plays a more important role in cultivating excellent students than spending money on improving school facilities. Compared with the improvement of school facilities, the employment of famous professors is more helpful for scientific research activities. Some people think that spending money on school facilities also has some benefits for schools. For example, the improvement of school facilities can facilitate the teaching and life of teachers and students. But these are only minor aspects. What universities really need is to hire famous professors to train excellent students and carry out scientific research activities, which is not the best way to improve school facilities. So I think it's more important to spend money on hiring famous professors. [br]Universities employing famous professors is more pivotal to cultivate excellent students than spending money on providing facilities. Employing famous professors plays a more important role in cultivating excellent students. As is known to all, one of the University's own work is to train excellent students, schools should strive to cultivate excellent students. From this point of view, if hiring famous professors plays a more important role in cultivating excellent students, it is more important for universities to hire famous professors than to improve school facilities. And that's true. For example, when Confucius to teach students, not bright and spacious classrooms, not advanced teaching equipment, but still training a large number of outstanding disciple Zilu, Yan-hui. It can be seen that the key to cultivating outstanding students key is in the famous teachers, not the teaching equipment, and the employment of famous professors plays a more important role in cultivating students' associations. Therefore, it is more important for universities to hire famous professors than to improve school facilities. [br]Another reason is ,compared with improving acilities,that hiring famous professors is helpful for scientific research. There is no doubt that scientific research is what universities should do.In this respect, if famous professors were more useful for scientific research than facilities, then we should hire a famous professor.For example, during the initial post-liberation period ,obviously, the facilities were very poor, but Qian sanqing,who had been a Doctor of French Physics, acted as a famous physics professor after returned home,still fostered a host of scientific researchers.Finaly,under the leadership of Qian asnqing, they manufactured the first A-bomb. The example illustrates that famous professors can play an indispensable role in promoting scientific research.Hence, I think it is more important for universities to hire famous professors than spending money on improving facilities. [br]In a word, famous professors are not only related to the cultivation of excellent students, but also to the development of scientific research activities. Therefore, for universities, the role of famous professors is more important than the school facilities. Universities should pay more attention to the employment of famous professors when they consider the budget of funds.
【作业一】[br]随着社会的发展,人们也越来越重视教育了。所以大学也有更多的钱来提升他们自己。然而,如何用钱这个问题引发了广泛的讨论。有人认为应该花钱雇佣著名教授,有人认为应该改善设施。在我看来,花钱雇佣著名教授比改善设施更好。[br]雇佣著名教授对开展科研活动有帮助。除了培养优秀的学生,大学还应该做好科研活动,为科学做出贡献。著名的教授有很强的能力做科研,所以他们对于开展科研活动是必不可少的。建国初期,中国科研设施落后,但是由于一些著名教授回国,带来先进的科研技术,为中国的科研事业做出了巨大贡献。这个例子很好地说明了著名教授对于发展科研活动的重大作用。所以我认为花钱雇佣教授比改善学校设施更重要。[br]雇佣著名教授对培养优秀学生起到更关键的作用。众所周知,大学的本职工作之一是培养优秀学生,学校应该努力培养优秀学生。从这个角度来讲,如果雇佣著名教授对培养优秀学生起到更关键的作用,那么对大学而言花钱雇佣著名教授就比改善学校设施更重要。在过去,虽然希腊没有先进的技术以及现代的设施,但是苏格拉底还是培养出了柏拉图,柏拉图也培养出了亚里士多德。这些伟大的人物被认为是现代哲学的奠基者。由此看出,培养优秀学生的关键是著名的老师而不是教学设施。因而,对大学而言,花钱雇佣著名教授比改善学校设施更重要[br]诚然,花钱改善学校设施也有一些好处,比如让学校看上去更好看,老师和学生生活更方便。但是大学真正需要的是雇佣知名教授来培养优秀学生、开展科研活动。所以我认为花钱雇佣知名教授更加重要。[br]总之,著名教授不仅关系到优秀学生的培养,还有助于到科研活动的开展。因而,对于大学来说,著名教授的作用比学校设施更加重要,大学在考虑资金预算的时候,应该更注重雇佣著名教授。[br]【作业二】[br]With the remarkable improvement of people's living standard, everyone pay more attention to education. So universities have enough money to improve themselves. But a question about how to use money draws public discussion. Some people think universities should use money to hire famous professors, while others hold the opinion that universities should use money to improve facilities. Personally, spending money on hiring famous professors is better than on improving facilities.[br]With help of famed professor, university can develop scientific effort well. In addition to foster outstanding students, university is supposed to be engaged in scientific effort to make contribution to society. There is no doubt that famed professors are great ability of scientific effort, so they are indispensable. In the early days of New China, there were only few advanced scientific equipment. But thanks to some famous professors from foreign countries, they gave Chinese scientists a hand to develop rapidly scientific research and contributed to soceity, which strongly shows that famous professors play a significant role in making a progress for science. So i believe hiring famous professors is more conducive than promoting facilities. [br]Hiring famous professor plays a more vital role in cultivating students than spending money on improving school facilities. We all know it is imprtant for university to cultivate excellent students. From this point of view, if famous professors are mroe conducive to cultivate students, we could say that hiring famous professor is more impotant than spending money on improve university's facilities. In the past, there were not advanced teaching facilities in Greece, but the exsitence of Socrates, Plato and Aristotle who are known as the greates philosopher shows that the key to cultivating outstanding students is well-known professor. So as for univerisity, hiring well-known professor is more significant rather than cost money to promote installation. [br]Admittedly, there are some advantages in spending money on the improvement of university facilities. For instance, university looks better as well as teacher and students live mroe conveniently. However, the real need of university is hiring well-known professor to foster outstanding students and develop scientic reserch well. Because of this, i believe employing well-known professors is more conducive to university than spending money on improving facilities. [br]In a word, well-known professors are closely related to the development of excellent students and scientific effort. Therefore, as for universities, well-known professors play a more important role in the development of universities than nice facilities, and they should focus on employing well- known professors when they consider how to use money.

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