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口语喵第 35 期 Day 13
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 13# To be honest, I don’t think relaxed or unhurried life is the best way of life, conversely, it is the struggling one that is the eternal theme of our lives. I mean, in every stage of our lives there must be some goals, big or small, whatever, and in order to achieve our targets, we have to spare no effort to improve ourselves and strive for it. Say I have to try my best to upgrade my GPA and command of English as long as I make up my mind to apply for PhD in the USA when I graduate. It might be the true meaning of our lives. Admittedly, relaxing at suitable time in right way benefits our health, but I still regard struggle as one of the most significant things of our lives.
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2017-11-15 20:07:16 来自 口语喵
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strive for it, it 改为them, 要和前面targets对应,
内容写的可以,lives不必每次都提调,听起来会感觉很奇怪
2017-11-15 21:48
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strive for it, it 改为them, 要和前面targets对应,
内容写的可以,lives不必每次都提调,听起来会感觉很奇怪
2017-11-15 22:04
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