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口语喵第 35 期 Day 13
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 13# I don’t agree that having a relaxed or unhurried life is the best way of life for a person. Personally, a relaxed lifestyle is easier to form a comfortable zone for a person. Just like people can be safe and comfortable at home, then they are losing the motivation and creativity of life. Of course, someone would say, life itself is too tough and we should not make it harder for ourselves by attitude toward life. However, I never seen a successful people achieved his goal only by watching soap opera on sofa. I just know Tim Cook (Apple CEO), sending out company emails by 4:30 a.m., the person who is the first in the office and the last one to leave.
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2017-11-15 18:30:41 来自 口语喵
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第二个说理部分有点儿冗长,删减一些精简一点儿我觉得会更好~断句挺好的~
2017-11-16 13:38
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