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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 13# I absolutely favor this statement, having relaxed and unhurried life Is best way for person.
A slow pace of life for a person is detrimental to one’s family harmony. Well, family is a place where everybody takes care of each other, by listening, talking, if family members is quite busy. You can imagine such a picture, a wife is asking advice for his husband about changing job, but her husband seemly becomes aloof and indifferent. Later she finds out that her husband has his mind stuffed with his work leaving no room for listening her inner voice.
Also, if I have a relaxed life, which means that I have many spare time. So I could do something I want, like travelling, reading favorite books and having party with family.
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2017-11-15 15:06:01 来自 口语喵
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2017-11-15 15:13
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2017-11-15 15:25
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I absolutely favor this statement, having relaxed and unhurried life Is best way for person.
A fast pace of life for a person is detrimental to one’s family harmony. Well, family is a place where everybody takes care of each other, by listening, talking, if family members is quite busy. You can imagine such a picture, a wife is asking advice for his husband about changing job, but her husband seemly becomes aloof and indifferent. Later she finds out that her husband has his mind stuffed with his work leaving no room for listening her inner voice, which makes the woman very angry.
If his husband has a relaxed life, I think their family will full of happiness
2017-11-15 19:42
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评论 2 楼: 标题的写错了
2017-11-15 19:42
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having relaxed and unhurried life Is best way(of life) for person. 感觉还是要把of life 加上句子才通顺。
A fast pace of life( for a person 去掉) is detrimental to one’s family harmony. 
Well, family is a place where everybody takes care of each other, by listening, talking, if family members is quite busy. 
(这句状语从句到底是跟哪的呀?😂)
You can imagine such a picture, a wife is asking advice for his husband about changing job, 
(ask sb. for advice......比较少用进行时)
but her husband seemly becomes (seems to become) aloof and indifferent. 
(seemly:adj. 适当的;有礼的;好看的
adv. 适合地;得体地)
Later she finds out that her husband has his mind stuffed with his work leaving no room for listening her inner voice, which makes the woman very angry. 
(这句略复杂了,尽量简化吧)
2017-11-17 16:38
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评论 5 楼: 好详细,感谢!!
2017-11-17 16:59
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