刘纸巾 楼主
11-15
口语喵第 35 期 Day 13
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 13# Indeed, it's much enjoyable for a person to spend life in a relaxed or unhurried way.
There are various options to choose in our life. Slow down could help us think over what exactly do we want.
many businessmen devote most of their life to their career to make money or be a successful individual. but finally, they find what they eager to is just a simple happy life.
It's only once we could live. so don't be so hurry that forget to appreciate and enjoy the moments in our life. it's fabulous to spend time in having a walk with family, listening a song carefully, basking in the sunshine casually and sort of relaxing things.
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2017-11-15 11:08:14 来自 口语喵
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what exactly do we want 我觉得没必要倒装- -怪怪的~
be a successful individual这里应该是BEING 吧- -devote to+ing~
happy貌似读成happle了
后半段写的蛮好的~
2017-11-15 22:48
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