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口语喵第 35 期 Day 10
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 10# From my perspective, I think the sense of responsibility is one of the most important characteristics that a teacher should have. Here are the reasons as follows: firstly, what the future like depends on what the nowadays students will be. And teachers can influence on students directly. So they have to have the sense of responsibility. Secondly, students lack of the ability to tell what is right and what is wrong, which needs teacher to guide them so that they won’t be bad people. Plus, teachers are responsible for their study. That means that teachers not only need to have profound knowledge, but also have to be responsible people.
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2017-11-10 21:02:41 来自 口语喵
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语音:听不见声音还是
1.what the future like depends on what the nowadays students will be.这句话怪怪的
   我的理解是:what the nowadays students are results in what future they will have.
   老蟹的语序的话:what prospect the students will have depends on what they are at present.
2.So they have to have the sense of responsibility.这句话给的有点敷衍,没有解释清楚为什么前面的原因会推出这个结论
   我的建议是加上一句类似这样的话(当然我的这句逻辑也不是很好,就是类似啦):所以,只有老师有了责任心,能够更好的教学,同学们才能够拥有美好的未来。
3.lack用作动词的话,后面就不需要加of啦,直接用就好啦
4.teachers或者the teacher
5.be最好改成become,体现一个grow up的过程

2017-11-13 16:29
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语音:提个小建议,下次录的时候出现and的地方,就把那个d的音虚掉,叫什么来着,失爆?忘记了,但是强烈建议
2017-11-13 17:39
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