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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 10# There exists a permenant phenomenon that some people need help from others, especially those rich men. A heated debate about whether people in current day are more likely to help others is still on the rise. Somebody take it for granted that people in the past performed better than today because of tradition custom. However, in my opinion, we public are more willing to help others in comparison with past years. There are several reasons and examples to illustrate my point of view.Obviously, as we enjoy the high quility of life, we can distribute much more money than old days, using in charity field. Long gone are the days when we only had limited income that could not even make a living for the whole family. UNdoubtedly, nowadays, we are free to exploit our cash remains to help those people in need, which have less influence on our daily life. The person who has achieved financial freedom can give a hand to poor people even without thinking. Here is a concrete example. Jack Ma, who is the most richest bussinessman in Chinese, used to do a lot of unprofitable projects and said that we live in a society that need to share love with others. He is just the tip of this iceberg but is the mirror of the modern society, a loving society.With the ever-accerlarated developing of the technology, we are living in the enbironment that the information transport faster than before, which denotes that if you help the people with emergency, you can easily get fames and receive a unique reputation that will help you in the future. Dating back to 20 years ago, there was not any quick media at that day and people who help others can not be knowned in public and could not have the same motivator as today's, except a few people who have valuable nature sense. A research conducted by some reporters reveals that eighty percent of companies prefer the employee who have a good reputation in public, even with more poor ability than others. It shows that people today maybe more willing to help others in order to get good fame.Admittedly, people lived in the past have better nature sense than today. Nevertheless, I believe this advantage pales in comparison with what I mentioned above.In a nutshell, I reiterate my standpoint that people today are more wiliing to help others. It is not only because of this information society, but because we have more money
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社会快速发展,发生了许多重大变化,于此同时人们也一样。有的人认为现在社会中,人与人之间的关系变得淡漠,不像过去那样热心温情了。然而在我看来,我认为现在的人比起以前更加愿意帮助陌生人。[br]近几年来,来自个人的捐款比过去更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最直接的表现方式,它在一定程度上体现了人们对帮助陌生人的热心程度。在如今的互联网时代,许多公益活动能够轻松进入人们的视野,捐款明细也都会公开在网络上。大量的数据都表明,如今的个人捐款数越来越多了。比前过去,现在的人们显然更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。好人好事越来越多,媒体才有了跟更多的报道素材,这也就意味着愿意帮助的别人也越来越多了。如今,各种善举的故事随处可见,不管是在网络上还是传统媒体中。例如大学生到偏远地区支教,辛勤老人每年存钱捐助希望小学,陌生人冒险解救溺水者等等。在媒体日益占据人们注意力的今天,他们所报道的内容很大程度反映了社会现实。显然,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]不过与此同时,也有一些利用人们的爱心、善心骗取钱财的骗局出现。有的人会觉得这让人们不敢再相信、帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性不代表他们不愿意帮助别人了。这也使得相关部门和组织对慈善组织更加严格,更加可靠。在找到可靠的途径之后,人们还是很愿意奉献爱心,帮助陌生人的。[br]综上所述,不管是现在与日剧增的个人捐款数量,还是越来越多的好人好事的报道,都清楚表明现在的人们比起以前更愿意帮助陌生人了。[br][br]As the society develop rapidly, it has a number of tremendous changes over decades. And so have citizens do. Some people think that comparing with the citizens in the pass, today they are less warm-hearted or enthusiastic. And the relationship between people becomes more and more indifferent. However, in my opinion, I believe that people today are more willing to offer help for strangers.[br]In recent years, the donations from individuals have been more than ever before. Donation is the most direct way for citizens to help strangers. To a certain degree, it demonstrates the extent of people's readiness to help strangers. In today's Internet age, people can access to public service activities easily. The detailed information about how to contribute can also be found on the Internet .The large number of data indicates that nowadays, the amount of personal donation becomes increasingly larger. Compared with the ones in the past, people are more willing to help strangers nowadays. [br]There are more and more stories about good behaviors being reported. The increasing number of good deeds provides media with more stories to release. Nowadays, various good deeds can be found everywhere, no matter on the Internet or in the traditional media. For instance, university students became volunteers in remote areas; a diligent old man donated his hard-earned savings to a hope primary school; a stranger risked his life to save a drowner. Today, media catch a majority of citizens' eyes. The contents) reported by media reflect the social reality to a great extent. Without doubts, current people have more readiness to help strangers than they used to do.[br]But meanwhile, there are some frauds taking advantage of people's kindness for money. Some people might think that it makes individuals unwilling to trust and help strangers any more. However, becoming vigilant does not mean being reluctant to offer help. And as a result of the frauds, some related apartments and organizations are more strict with the dependability of charity, making it more reliable. With credible organizations, people still love to show their kindness to strangers.[br]In sum, no matter the increasing amount of individual donation, or the good deeds reported more frequently, clearly reflects the fact that citizens today are more willing to help strangers than before.[br][br]
【作业1】近年来,慈善活动越来越多。网上出现了一个热议:现在的人是不是比过去更愿意去帮助陌生人。针对这个问题,大家说法不一。我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人,我的原因和例子将在下面阐述。[br]社会捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的一种方式,近年来,中国社会捐款总额持续增长,表明现在越来越多的人愿意帮助陌生人。据统计,2016年中国社会捐赠总额已超千亿元,当年志愿者从事志愿服务时间有16亿个小时。虽然没有统计具体的捐款人数,但是从捐款的总额,志愿服务的小时数就可以看出人们越来越热衷于公益事业,更加愿意帮助那些需要帮助的人,即使他们并不认识那些人。[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有了更多的报道素材。而好人好事增多了,说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。当人们打开微信时,会经常看到这样的新闻:市民建设孤儿院收养孤儿,明星建立筑梦基金……每隔两三天,人们所做的好人好事就会被推送出来,成为热门头条。我们都知道,微信是大众最常用的社交平台。微信新闻也逐渐成为人们获取资讯、了解社会热点事件的主要媒体。可以说,微信新闻很大程度地反映了社会现实。当前,越来越多的好人好事在诸如微信新闻这样的媒体上得到报道,这个现象说明好人好事在增多,从而进一步表明,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]的确,现在很多人因为骗子太多而不敢盲目帮助别人,但这是一种警觉,是对自己人生和财产的保护。如果人们可以找到靠谱的慈善机构,他们便会毫不犹豫地献出自己的爱心。慈善机构聚集的大量爱心捐助加速了慈善事业的发挥,现在的人们比以前乐于助人。[br]综上所述,鉴于近年来个人的捐款数量逐年递增,以及越来越多的好人好事得到了媒体的报道,我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【作业2】[br]As volunteering activities increasing dramatically, a debate goes virus on the internet: if persons nowadays are wiling to assist others even they do not have any relationship than before. Two main opposite methods have grown rapidly, for some hold a kind of answer of ‘Yes’ while others respond to ‘No’. As for me, I think there really has been a increasing number of individuals or corporations who would like to help strangers than before. My reasons and examples are given below.[br]Firstly, social donating is one normal kind of aids to those strangers. Recently, the total amount of Chinese’s donations coming from citizens is increasing dramatically, which signs that there is a growing sum of good people who want to do their best to help those poor persons. According to a new report released by China Daily, Chinese volunteers had assembled an appreciable number of money, over 10 million yuan and more than 1.6 billion hours totally spent on volunteering activities,2016. Even though we do not receive an exact number of loving persons, we still can calculate the huge rate of people’s enthusiasm to public welfare and witness their strength loving willing of helping others who eager assistance, although they do not know anything about each other.[br]In addition, recently, there has been more and more materials about good people and personal aids reported by media. As the number of news about loving people and assistance grow, the media has more stories to release. So I regard that more people nowadays would like sparing no effort to help strangers than before. When we open the software WeChat, plenty of stories can be seen, such as citizens construct an orphanage to adopt homeless children, a famous actress has established a charity foundation to help children with congenital heart disease. Every three or two days, different volunteers and their activities will go virus on the internet and be set as the head news. We all know WeChat has been the most popular social platform to community and is also becoming the main media to get information and news across the world. It no doubt that that app can reflect a really fact of our social. As we debate above, the true of more good individuals will to help strangers than before has been released by the phenomenon of increasing stories reported by media. [br]Admittedly, loving persons are unwilling to give the aid for a great number of cheaters. But, it is just a alter of protecting themselves and their procession rather than their really desires. Once they find sound charity corporations, they will have no hesitation to donate for strangers. In recent years, the enormous number of donations assembled by charity organizations accelerate the speed of volunteering development. Nowadays, citizens would like assisting strangers than past years.[br]In conclusion, in recent years, the number of donations has increased year by year and more good people are reported that past years. So, I think there has been a increasing sum of individuals who would like to give their efforts toward helping strangers.
作业一[br]在大街上,不免会遇到行乞卖艺的人。有的人伸手给了钱,有的人却避而不见。针对人心是变得冷漠了还是变的更暖了,大家的说法不一。我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助人。我将以以下理由和例子来说明我的观点。[br]首先,来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的表现方式,个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。中国慈善报告显示,个人的慈善捐款从2011年至2013年连续3年下跌,而从2014年至2016年连续3年大幅度上涨。此报告统计的是国内主流慈善机构和平台的捐款情况,虽然并没有计入其他民间众筹组织的捐款,但是主流的捐款趋势已经反映出个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。这个变化说明了人们比原来更愿意贡献自己的钱财来帮助陌生人。[br]再者,越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有了报道的素材。而好人好事增多了,也说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。在汶川大地震时,有许多的感人的事迹被报道,甚至有人亲自前往灾区为灾民送去财物,作家韩寒就是其中一位。他自己和朋友带着帐篷和物资,每天前往不同的地区发放给灾民。除了专业的救援人员,还因为有如此多的志愿志愿者,救援才能顺利进行,那里的人民才能在短时间内就度过了如此艰难的时刻。还有全国人民都在为灾区人民捐款,人人都献出自己的爱心。微信现在是我们用的最广泛的社交平台,也是许多人获取资讯的一大来源。当前,有越来越多的好人好事,在诸如微信新闻这样的媒体上得到报道,说明好人好事在增多,也进一步表明现在愿意帮助别人的增多了。[br]当然了,也有人认为,由于当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性并不表示人们不愿意帮助别人。当人们找到可靠的慈善组织后,依然会很慷慨地奉献爱心。正如前面的例子中所说,近几年主流慈善机构得到的个人捐款数量逐年大幅上涨。因此,人们是越来越愿意帮助陌生人的。[br]综上所述,鉴于近年来个人的捐款数量逐年递增,以及越来越多的好人好事得到了媒体的报道,我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]作业二[br]Beggars are not rarely encountered in the street nowadays. Some people would like to give money or something, but some others would turn away and avoid it. So there is a controvertible debate that people in current become warm-harted or colder than before. As for me, I believe that people are more willing to help others than before. I will illustrate it with some reasons and examples.[br]firstly, the donation from individuals is more than several years ago. the direct way of people's readiness to help strangers is donation. the number of the donation from individuals demonstrates to what extent people are willing to help strangers. the report of Chinese charity represents that the charitable donation from individuals is decline in three years between 2011 and 2013, but sharply increase from 2014 to 2016. although the statistical data of this report is the situation of mainstream charitable institutions or platform, not including the donation from the other folk organization, the tendency of mainstream' donation has clearly reflected that the individual's donation is pretty more than years before. this change illustrates that people are willing to donate money or clothes to help strangers than the past.[br]secondly,there are more and more good people and their good deeds were reported by journalists. as the number of good people and good deeds grows, media has more stories to release. with the increasing number, it reflects that people are willing to help others than before. after wenchuan earthquake which brought enormous losing and mournful results, but so many good people and good deeds covered in news, even some people personally went to wenchuan to help victims. such as a writer hanhan and his friends, they took tents and some other materials to distribute. besides those professional rescuer, lots of volunteers are also important for the rescue and revival. not to mention the donations from individuals and organizations around the country. you know, WeChat is the biggest social APP in china, and quite a few people like to read daily new in the WeChat. thus, increasingly reported good people and good deeds represents that people have preference to give a hand to strangers more than years ago.[br]admittedly, some people hold that since with a great number of cheaters who defraud money by making use of people's kindness, people are unwilling to help strangers. however, people became alertness is not meaning that they don't like to help others. When people find a credible charitable organization, they are still willing to help strangers. As in the previous examples, the number of donation from individuals has a sharp increase in recent years according to the mainstream charitable organization. Therefore, it is a common sense that more and more people are willing to give a hand for strangers.[br]in a nutshell, according to the increasing number of donation from individuals and more and more good people and their deeds are released by media, I think, in contrast to the past, that people are more willing to help strangers.
【作业一】[br]我们经常会在人流量大的场所看到一些乞丐,比如地铁口,火车站。有路过的人会主动给钱,有的人却完全不在意。针对这种情况,大家产生了疑问:现在的人与过去相比,是否愿意帮助别人了。我觉得不是这样,现在的人比原来更愿意帮助别人。[br]最近几年来自个人的捐款比以前几年多很多。捐款是一种帮助他人的表现方式。个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对帮助陌生人的热心程度。中国慈善捐助报告显示,个人捐款从2014年2016年连续三年大幅度上涨。此报告统计的是国内主流慈善机构和平台的捐款情况,并没有统计民间自发众筹款项。但是仅仅主流的趋势就已经反映了捐款数额比前几年多很多。因此从这方面来看,现在的人们更愿意帮助别人,[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有素材报道。而好人好事的增多也说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。人们可以在社交平台上看到许多乐于助人的新闻。比如某爱心人士建立了孤儿院收养流浪儿,某明星成立了慈善基金会帮助先心病患儿等。类似的事件经常能在网易新闻或者新浪微博上看到。网易和新浪是大众最常用的社交平台,是人们获取资讯和了解社会的主要媒体。这些新闻在很大程度上可以反映社会现实。越来越多的报道说明好人好事增多了,从而说明大家更愿意帮助别人。[br]有些人认为现在也有好多利用别人的爱心谋取钱财的报道,导致人们不愿意去帮助陌生人。但是人们只是变得警惕了,而不是不愿意帮助。民间慈善机构可能不容易让人相信,但是主流的慈善机构仍然会收到大量的捐款。这说明人们仍然是愿意帮助别人的。[br]总之,从个人捐款数额的逐年增长和被报道的好人好事越来越多,我认为与原来相比,现在的人更愿意帮助别人。[br]【作业二】[br]We always see some beggars in crowed places, such as the enter of subway and the railway station. Some people who pass by will give money voluntarily, while others directly ignore them. This phenomenon raises a heated debate: Compared with the past, whether nowadays people are willing to help strangers. As far as I concerned, I agree that people are more willing to help strangers than before. I will illustrate my point of view by following reasons and examples.[br]In recent years, individual donations are more than in the past few years. Donating is a way to help others we don’t know. The changes in amount of individual donations show the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers. The China charity donation report shows that the total amount of individual donations has sharply gone up from 2011 to 2014. The report is the statistics of domestic mainstream charity institutions and donation platforms without public spontaneous fundraising items. But only mainstream current has reflected the amount of donations more than previous years. Therefore, in this respect, people are more willing to help strangers now.[br]Media recently report more good people and good deeds. Because of the increasing number of good people and good deeds, the media have more stories to release. Moreover, the increasing number of good people and good deeds definitely indicates that people are more willing to help strangers. We can read a lot of news about good deeds on the social platform. For instance, a caring person has established an orphanage to adopt homeless children and a star has established a charity foundation to help children with congenital heart disease. The similar events can be frequently covered on the NetEase News or Sina Weibo which are two of the most popular domestic social platform. To some extent, the news can reflect social reality. More and more reports show that the number of good people and good deeds grows, and then make it clear that more people are willing to help others.[br]Some people claim that with a great number of cheaters who take use of people’s benevolence to make money, people are unwilling to help strangers. However, this only shows that people become vigilant to help strangers. It is reported that mainstream charities still receive a large amount of donations more than the past, which illustrates that people are more willing to help strangers.[br]In summary, from what has been discussed above, we can conclude that in contrast to the past, people are more willing to help strangers, on account of the increasing number of individual donations and more news reports about good people and good deeds.[br]
【作业一】[br]请根据周一到周四的训练,认真修改之前的内容,写一篇完整的中文作文。作文可以包括一个背景段、两个理由段、一个让步段和一个总结段,也可以包括一个背景段、三个理由段和一个总结段。[br]漫步街头时,我们时常会遇到行乞卖艺的人。有的人伸手给了钱,有的人却视而不见。这一现象在公众间引起了有关人们是变冷淡了还是温暖的广泛讨论。我认为,现在的人其实比以前更愿意帮助陌生人了。[br]来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的表现方式,个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。中国慈善报告显示,个人的慈善捐款从2011年至2013年连续3年下跌,而从2014年至2016年连续3年大幅度上涨。此报告统计的是国内主流慈善机构和平台的捐款情况,虽然并没有计入其他民间众筹组织的捐款,但是主流的捐款趋势已经反映出个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。这个变化说明了人们比原来更愿意贡献自己的钱财来帮助陌生人。[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有了更多的报道素材。每当人们打开报纸或新闻APP,会经常看到这样的新闻:市民为乞讨者送上一碗热汤面,将其送至救助站。人们为素不相识的犯病而又没钱的人送上救命钱。年轻人义务反顾去偏僻的山区支教。这些字眼每隔几天就能在新闻上看见。这个现象说明好人好事在增多,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]也有人认为,由于当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性并不表示人们不愿意帮助别人。当人们找到可靠的慈善组织后,依然会很慷慨地奉献爱心。正如前面的例子中所说,近几年主流慈善机构得到的个人捐款数量逐年大幅上涨。因此,人们是越来越愿意帮助陌生人的。[br]综上所述,鉴于近年来个人的捐款数量逐年递增,以及越来越多的好人好事得到了媒体的报道,我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【作业二】[br]请将你写的中文作文翻译成英文,完成后注意仔细修改文章。[br]Waking on the street, we usually meet someone who beg or perform for a living. Some people give them a hand, and the others chose not to see. This phenomenon arouses wide argument about people turn to indifferent or warmth among the public. But in contrast to the past, I think people are more willing to help strangers.[br]During this several year, personal donations are more than the last few years. Donation is the exceedingly common way of help strangers. The change of personal contribution show the extent of the public’s readiness to help strangers. The China Charity Report show that the personal donation was constantly reduced during three years, from 2011 to 2013. But it continue to increase drastically from 2014 to 2016. The report contain the statue of contribution of the main inner charity institutions and platforms. Although the donation of other NGO are not included in the report, but the main trend demonstrate that personal donation are more than the last few years. This change shows that people are willing to help strangers than before by donation.[br]Nowadays, Lots of good deeds are reported by media. As the number of good deed grows, media have more stories to release. Every time opening newspaper or news’ app, we always can see some news like this, citizens send a warm noddle to beggar and send him to relief station; people donate to a stranger that is poor for curing his disease, the young go to remote mountain area for volunteer education. These words can be seeing in news every few day. This phenomenon show that good deeds are increasing now and people more willing to help stranger than before. [br]Admitted, some people claim that with a great number of cheaters who take the public’s kindness to get money and it will cause that people are unwilling to help strangers. But, increasing vigilance is not mean that people are unwilling to help others. When they find some secure charity institutions, they will still donate by this kind of organizations generously. As the example above, the main charity institution receives the donation increasing each year. Therefore, the public is more willing to help strangers.[br]In a nutshell, the personal donation is increasing year by year and a growing number of good deeds are reported by media. Therefore, I think people are more willing to help strangers than before.[br]

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