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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 10# 【作业一】
我们经常会在人流量大的场所看到一些乞丐,比如地铁口,火车站。有路过的人会主动给钱,有的人却完全不在意。针对这种情况,大家产生了疑问:现在的人与过去相比,是否愿意帮助别人了。我觉得不是这样,现在的人比原来更愿意帮助别人。
最近几年来自个人的捐款比以前几年多很多。捐款是一种帮助他人的表现方式。个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对帮助陌生人的热心程度。中国慈善捐助报告显示,个人捐款从2014年2016年连续三年大幅度上涨。此报告统计的是国内主流慈善机构和平台的捐款情况,并没有统计民间自发众筹款项。但是仅仅主流的趋势就已经反映了捐款数额比前几年多很多。因此从这方面来看,现在的人们更愿意帮助别人,
越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有素材报道。而好人好事的增多也说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。人们可以在社交平台上看到许多乐于助人的新闻。比如某爱心人士建立了孤儿院收养流浪儿,某明星成立了慈善基金会帮助先心病患儿等。类似的事件经常能在网易新闻或者新浪微博上看到。网易和新浪是大众最常用的社交平台,是人们获取资讯和了解社会的主要媒体。这些新闻在很大程度上可以反映社会现实。越来越多的报道说明好人好事增多了,从而说明大家更愿意帮助别人。
有些人认为现在也有好多利用别人的爱心谋取钱财的报道,导致人们不愿意去帮助陌生人。但是人们只是变得警惕了,而不是不愿意帮助。民间慈善机构可能不容易让人相信,但是主流的慈善机构仍然会收到大量的捐款。这说明人们仍然是愿意帮助别人的。
总之,从个人捐款数额的逐年增长和被报道的好人好事越来越多,我认为与原来相比,现在的人更愿意帮助别人。
【作业二】
We always see some beggars in crowed places, such as the enter of subway and the railway station. Some people who pass by will give money voluntarily, while others directly ignore them. This phenomenon raises a heated debate: Compared with the past, whether nowadays people are willing to help strangers. As far as I concerned, I agree that people are more willing to help strangers than before. I will illustrate my point of view by following reasons and examples.
In recent years, individual donations are more than in the past few years. Donating is a way to help others we don’t know. The changes in amount of individual donations show the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers. The China charity donation report shows that the total amount of individual donations has sharply gone up from 2011 to 2014. The report is the statistics of domestic mainstream charity institutions and donation platforms without public spontaneous fundraising items. But only mainstream current has reflected the amount of donations more than previous years. Therefore, in this respect, people are more willing to help strangers now.
Media recently report more good people and good deeds. Because of the increasing number of good people and good deeds, the media have more stories to release. Moreover, the increasing number of good people and good deeds definitely indicates that people are more willing to help strangers. We can read a lot of news about good deeds on the social platform. For instance, a caring person has established an orphanage to adopt homeless children and a star has established a charity foundation to help children with congenital heart disease. The similar events can be frequently covered on the NetEase News or Sina Weibo which are two of the most popular domestic social platform. To some extent, the news can reflect social reality. More and more reports show that the number of good people and good deeds grows, and then make it clear that more people are willing to help others.
Some people claim that with a great number of cheaters who take use of people’s benevolence to make money, people are unwilling to help strangers. However, this only shows that people become vigilant to help strangers. It is reported that mainstream charities still receive a large amount of donations more than the past, which illustrates that people are more willing to help strangers.
In summary, from what has been discussed above, we can conclude that in contrast to the past, people are more willing to help strangers, on account of the increasing number of individual donations and more news reports about good people and good deeds.
2017-11-10 09:30:52 来自 托福作文咩
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社会快速发展,发生了许多重大变化,于此同时人们也一样。有的人认为现在社会中,人与人之间的关系变得淡漠,不像过去那样热心温情了。然而在我看来,我认为现在的人比起以前更加愿意帮助陌生人。[br]近几年来,来自个人的捐款比过去更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最直接的表现方式,它在一定程度上体现了人们对帮助陌生人的热心程度。在如今的互联网时代,许多公益活动能够轻松进入人们的视野,捐款明细也都会公开在网络上。大量的数据都表明,如今的个人捐款数越来越多了。比前过去,现在的人们显然更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。好人好事越来越多,媒体才有了跟更多的报道素材,这也就意味着愿意帮助的别人也越来越多了。如今,各种善举的故事随处可见,不管是在网络上还是传统媒体中。例如大学生到偏远地区支教,辛勤老人每年存钱捐助希望小学,陌生人冒险解救溺水者等等。在媒体日益占据人们注意力的今天,他们所报道的内容很大程度反映了社会现实。显然,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]不过与此同时,也有一些利用人们的爱心、善心骗取钱财的骗局出现。有的人会觉得这让人们不敢再相信、帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性不代表他们不愿意帮助别人了。这也使得相关部门和组织对慈善组织更加严格,更加可靠。在找到可靠的途径之后,人们还是很愿意奉献爱心,帮助陌生人的。[br]综上所述,不管是现在与日剧增的个人捐款数量,还是越来越多的好人好事的报道,都清楚表明现在的人们比起以前更愿意帮助陌生人了。[br][br]As the society develop rapidly, it has a number of tremendous changes over decades. And so have citizens do. Some people think that comparing with the citizens in the pass, today they are less warm-hearted or enthusiastic. And the relationship between people becomes more and more indifferent. However, in my opinion, I believe that people today are more willing to offer help for strangers.[br]In recent years, the donations from individuals have been more than ever before. Donation is the most direct way for citizens to help strangers. To a certain degree, it demonstrates the extent of people's readiness to help strangers. In today's Internet age, people can access to public service activities easily. The detailed information about how to contribute can also be found on the Internet .The large number of data indicates that nowadays, the amount of personal donation becomes increasingly larger. Compared with the ones in the past, people are more willing to help strangers nowadays. [br]There are more and more stories about good behaviors being reported. The increasing number of good deeds provides media with more stories to release. Nowadays, various good deeds can be found everywhere, no matter on the Internet or in the traditional media. For instance, university students became volunteers in remote areas; a diligent old man donated his hard-earned savings to a hope primary school; a stranger risked his life to save a drowner. Today, media catch a majority of citizens' eyes. The contents) reported by media reflect the social reality to a great extent. Without doubts, current people have more readiness to help strangers than they used to do.[br]But meanwhile, there are some frauds taking advantage of people's kindness for money. Some people might think that it makes individuals unwilling to trust and help strangers any more. However, becoming vigilant does not mean being reluctant to offer help. And as a result of the frauds, some related apartments and organizations are more strict with the dependability of charity, making it more reliable. With credible organizations, people still love to show their kindness to strangers.[br]In sum, no matter the increasing amount of individual donation, or the good deeds reported more frequently, clearly reflects the fact that citizens today are more willing to help strangers than before.[br][br]
【作业一】[br]人们会遇到这种情况:一个老爷爷摔倒了,有的人伸出援手,有的人视而不见。我们曾经对帮助别人的行为赞赏有加,但是如今有些人却对陌生人保持警惕,因为怕热麻烦。当谈及到帮助陌生人时,我们是变得热心了,还是冷漠了? 我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。我将在一下段落中阐述我的观点。[br]首先,越来越多的人越来越关注并参加一些慈善活动,这些慈善活动可以给给予帮助的一方带来独特回报的感受。举个例子,我的学校有各种各样的志愿者活动,同学们也都很积极参加。更具体一点儿,学生每年都会到敬老院给老人举行文艺汇演逗老人开心,而学校也会给老人们分发营养品,等等。每每看到老人们脸上洋溢的微笑,我们这些施助者就会获得一种成就感,这种成就感又会促进我们更加热衷于慈善事业,并且鼓励更多的同学加入到慈善事业。在这种情况下,越来越多的同学加入到志愿者组织来帮助陌生人。所以,我认为越来越多的人在帮助陌生人。[br]其次,越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有了更多的报道素材。而好人好事增多了,说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。当人们打开微信时,会经常看到这样的新闻,饭店老板为环卫工人提供免费早餐、大学生村官涌向偏远农村、志愿者大军走进乡村支教……每隔两三天,人们所做的好人好事就会被推送出来,成为热门头条。可以说,微信新闻很大程度地反映了社会现实。当前,越来越多的好人好事在诸如微信新闻这样的媒体上得到报道,这个现象说明好人好事在增多,从而进一步表明,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]诚然,也有人认为,由于当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性并不表示人们不愿意帮助别人。当人们找到可靠的慈善组织后,依然会很乐意向真正的慈善事业捐献财物的。[br]综上所述,鉴于近年来越来越多的人致力于慈善事业,以及越来越多的好人好事得到了媒体的报道,正所谓,"赠人玫瑰,手留余香"。 我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【作业二】[br]People encounter such a normal scene: A grandpa falling down on the ground, some people do a favor while others show there indifference about that. We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of strangers, because they are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring them trouble. When it comes to helping strangers, do people become more warm-hearted or more indifferent? From my perspective, people are willing to help stranger. I will elaborate my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.[br]First of all, the increasing number of people attach more and more attention to and get involved in philanthropic and charitable activities which offer a unique rewarding feeling to those who give help. For example,there are various volunteer programs in my university and students are very actively involved.To be more specific, annually , students go to the nursing room to entertain those aged people with intriguing performance while the university contribute nutritious food to the aged, so on and so forth. Whenever we see the smile on the faces of those aged people,those who offer the help will undoubtedly acquire a sense of fulfillment, which will propel them to engage ourselves more enthusiastically and encourage more students in the cause of charity.Under this circumstance, it is popular with students to participate in the voluntary organization o help other strangers. Thus, I hold that more people are willing to help strangers.[br]In addition, the surging number of good people and good deeds has been reported by the media. As the number of good people and good deeds grows, the media has more stories to release. The increase indicates that there are more and more people who would like to help others. When people open their Wechat, such news often pop up on your screen: the owner of the restaurant offering free breakfast to sanitation workers, college-graduate village officials flocking to remote rural areas, an influx of volunteers going into underprivileged regions to relieve the shortage of teachers, etc. At two or three days intervals, these good people and good deeds are taken on as top headlines through Wechat which reflects the social reality in some way. At present, in wake of more and more good people and good deeds reported on media such as Wechat, this circumstance deeply implies that more people now who would like to help strangers than those in the past.[br]Admittedly, some people claim that people now are unwilling to help strangers as a result of a great number of frauds making use of people' s kindness. However, it can only indicates that people are alerted as helping strangers, but not means that people are unwilling to help them. If people find an reliable charity organization, such as some national or international organization, they will be happy to donate to bona fide charitable causes.[br]In a nutshell, in view of the increasing number of people devoted themselves to charitable activities as well as good people and good deeds reported by media. Just as an old saying goes, "The rose's in her hand,the flavor in mine." In contrast to the past, think people now are more willing to help strangers.[br][br]
The society and surroundings are developing and changing every day drastically. What else is changing along with these is the subtle relationship among people --- care or indifference, warm or cold? Therefore, an interesting discussion has arisen currently: if nowadays people are more willing to help people they don’t know than the past? Different people hold different sides. From my point of view, people are more willing to help strangers than before. I am going to elaborate my point in the following paragraphs.[br]Firstly, people are more willing to help others because individual donation in current years has rocketed comparing to that in the past years. Due to the developed online charity platforms such as Tecent Public Benefit and Alibaba Charity, which are the two largest internet charity platforms in China, individual donating is getting more and more accessible and easy. It is reported that the sum of the donation on the internet increased sharply in the last year and helped numerous people who are in need of money to get medical assistance. People not only donate by themselves but also spread the help news on social media to call on more people to do so. Also as I know every time we buy something on TMall, the e-store will donate part of the income to charity organization.[br]Secondly, more good deeds reported by media today also say that people are more willing to help strangers now. With the powerful and influential expansion of public media, the effect of good deeds spread widely. The media reports play a role of catalyst to drive and encourage more people to help others and adversely more good deeds give media more positive resources to report. It’s a loop which demonstrate the fact that nowadays people are more likely to give a hand to strangers than before. There are considerable examples which support my point of view. When we scan daily news we can see there are reports such as free food and water for our city cleaners, barber shops give free haircut for elderly, or free charge, free gloves, free umbrellas and so on. [br]Admittedly, there are viewpoints that with a great number of cheaters using people’s worm hearts to defraud money, the public are unwilling to help strangers anymore. However, if seeing from another angle, this just makes people more concerned about the reality of the helping news, the processing of the events and also the exact using of the donation. This promotes the development of charities, and makes people more willing to help strangers. [br]Let’s put it in a nutshell, from what I have discussed above, we can easily draw the conclusion that both the amount of the donation as well as the good deeds are increasing largely comparing to the data years before. These phenomena are the best evidence to support my viewpoint which is nowadays people are more willing to help the people they don’t know than people were in the past. [br]
开头段:随着社会的发展,人们生活水平得到了很大提高。当陌生人遇到困难时,人们会给予力所能及的帮助。我认为,现在的人们确实更愿意帮助陌生人了。[br]Our living standards have been totally improved along with the development of our society. When someone is in troubles, people will provide assistance within their capability. Personally speaking, nowadays, people do have greater willingness to help strangers now. (38words)[br]慈善捐款中来自个人的捐款近年来有了明显的上涨。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的表现方式,个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对陌生人帮助的人心程度。数据显示,中国红十字会历年接收的全款数额持续呈上涨趋势,并且,2014年以来尤其明显,专家认为,这样的趋势会持续下去。除了这样的主流捐款平台,众筹捐款也得到了越来越多的支持。不论从官方数据还是民间反响来看,都表明,人们比原来更愿意贡献自己的钱财来帮助陌生人。[br]The proportion of individual donations in charitable dollars have been increasing for the past few years. Because individual donations are the most common way for people to help a stranger, hence, this increase indicated the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers. The variation on the size of individual donations demonstrate to what extent of people are willing to help strangers. What’s more, researches on the data of the Chinese Red Cross have represented that, both the share and amount of individual donations have been growing at a respectable pace, particularly, from 2014 till now. Additionally, the relevant experts assuming that the upward trend would continue. Apart from major platforms, crowd funding funded by non-governmental donations also has receive a greater support. Whether governmental donations or the non-governmental has testified to the increasing of people's readiness to help strangers. (139words)[br]不论是新闻报纸等传统媒介还是新媒体,好人好事的报道都有明显增多。这是因为有更多的人愿意投身慈善,报道才有素材来源。以我们学校校园报纸为例,近年来的报道显示,报名去山区支教的应届毕业生越来越多。并且,除了学校组织的山区支教等活动,还有很多校园社团自发组织的为孤寡老人送温暖的志愿活动也登上了版面。新媒体上,自助营救和自发捐款的相关报道也多了很多。正是因为有越来愈多的人愿意帮助陌生人,媒体才有更多的素材报道。[br]The increasing number of benefactions reported by the media have been reported in both traditional media–television, radio, newspaper-and new media. This due to there are more real stories to release, which means that more people are willing to devote into charity. Take my university as example, researches have shown that the amount of reports in volunteer students to a rural area have an obviously growth. In addition, more clubs take part in a spontaneous work of helping with lonely elderly people. Voluntary donations news and rescue assistance having been pile up in new media. As the number of good deeds grows, the media have more stories to release. (109words)[br]也有人认为,由于当前有很多慈善诈骗,导致人们变得更加有警惕性,所以不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性并不表示人们不愿意帮助别人。当人们找到可靠的慈善组织后,依然会很慷慨地奉献爱心。正如前面的例子中所说,近几年主流慈善机构得到的个人捐款数量逐年大幅上涨。因此,人们是越来越愿意帮助陌生人的。[br]Some people think that people are vigilance and unwilling to help strangers for a greater number of charity scams. But such vigilance does not equal to people’s frustrations at charity. People are more likely to help others after finding a reliable organization. As researches illustrated, individual donations from mainstream charities have been increased for the past few years. Hence, people are willing to help strangers in practice. (67words)[br]所以,从个人捐款数值增长和相关报道增多两个方面来看,人们确实变得更加乐于助人了。[br]In a word, people are becoming more willing to help others in terms of both the number of individual contributions and the number of related reports. (26words)[br]
【作业一】[br]请根据周一到周四的训练,认真修改之前的内容,写一篇完整的中文作文。作文可以包括一个背景段、两个理由段、一个让步段和一个总结段,也可以包括一个背景段、三个理由段和一个总结段。[br]漫步街头时,我们时常会遇到行乞卖艺的人。有的人伸手给了钱,有的人却视而不见。这一现象在公众间引起了有关人们是变冷淡了还是温暖的广泛讨论。我认为,现在的人其实比以前更愿意帮助陌生人了。[br]来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的表现方式,个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。中国慈善报告显示,个人的慈善捐款从2011年至2013年连续3年下跌,而从2014年至2016年连续3年大幅度上涨。此报告统计的是国内主流慈善机构和平台的捐款情况,虽然并没有计入其他民间众筹组织的捐款,但是主流的捐款趋势已经反映出个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。这个变化说明了人们比原来更愿意贡献自己的钱财来帮助陌生人。[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有了更多的报道素材。每当人们打开报纸或新闻APP,会经常看到这样的新闻:市民为乞讨者送上一碗热汤面,将其送至救助站。人们为素不相识的犯病而又没钱的人送上救命钱。年轻人义务反顾去偏僻的山区支教。这些字眼每隔几天就能在新闻上看见。这个现象说明好人好事在增多,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]也有人认为,由于当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是,人们变得有警惕性并不表示人们不愿意帮助别人。当人们找到可靠的慈善组织后,依然会很慷慨地奉献爱心。正如前面的例子中所说,近几年主流慈善机构得到的个人捐款数量逐年大幅上涨。因此,人们是越来越愿意帮助陌生人的。[br]综上所述,鉴于近年来个人的捐款数量逐年递增,以及越来越多的好人好事得到了媒体的报道,我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【作业二】[br]请将你写的中文作文翻译成英文,完成后注意仔细修改文章。[br]Waking on the street, we usually meet someone who beg or perform for a living. Some people give them a hand, and the others chose not to see. This phenomenon arouses wide argument about people turn to indifferent or warmth among the public. But in contrast to the past, I think people are more willing to help strangers.[br]During this several year, personal donations are more than the last few years. Donation is the exceedingly common way of help strangers. The change of personal contribution show the extent of the public’s readiness to help strangers. The China Charity Report show that the personal donation was constantly reduced during three years, from 2011 to 2013. But it continue to increase drastically from 2014 to 2016. The report contain the statue of contribution of the main inner charity institutions and platforms. Although the donation of other NGO are not included in the report, but the main trend demonstrate that personal donation are more than the last few years. This change shows that people are willing to help strangers than before by donation.[br]Nowadays, Lots of good deeds are reported by media. As the number of good deed grows, media have more stories to release. Every time opening newspaper or news’ app, we always can see some news like this, citizens send a warm noddle to beggar and send him to relief station; people donate to a stranger that is poor for curing his disease, the young go to remote mountain area for volunteer education. These words can be seeing in news every few day. This phenomenon show that good deeds are increasing now and people more willing to help stranger than before. [br]Admitted, some people claim that with a great number of cheaters who take the public’s kindness to get money and it will cause that people are unwilling to help strangers. But, increasing vigilance is not mean that people are unwilling to help others. When they find some secure charity institutions, they will still donate by this kind of organizations generously. As the example above, the main charity institution receives the donation increasing each year. Therefore, the public is more willing to help strangers.[br]In a nutshell, the personal donation is increasing year by year and a growing number of good deeds are reported by media. Therefore, I think people are more willing to help strangers than before.[br]

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