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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 10# 【作业一】
我们经常会在人流量大的场所看到一些乞丐,比如地铁口,火车站。有路过的人会主动给钱,有的人却完全不在意。针对这种情况,大家产生了疑问:现在的人与过去相比,是否愿意帮助别人了。我觉得不是这样,现在的人比原来更愿意帮助别人。
最近几年来自个人的捐款比以前几年多很多。捐款是一种帮助他人的表现方式。个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对帮助陌生人的热心程度。中国慈善捐助报告显示,个人捐款从2014年2016年连续三年大幅度上涨。此报告统计的是国内主流慈善机构和平台的捐款情况,并没有统计民间自发众筹款项。但是仅仅主流的趋势就已经反映了捐款数额比前几年多很多。因此从这方面来看,现在的人们更愿意帮助别人,
越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有素材报道。而好人好事的增多也说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。人们可以在社交平台上看到许多乐于助人的新闻。比如某爱心人士建立了孤儿院收养流浪儿,某明星成立了慈善基金会帮助先心病患儿等。类似的事件经常能在网易新闻或者新浪微博上看到。网易和新浪是大众最常用的社交平台,是人们获取资讯和了解社会的主要媒体。这些新闻在很大程度上可以反映社会现实。越来越多的报道说明好人好事增多了,从而说明大家更愿意帮助别人。
有些人认为现在也有好多利用别人的爱心谋取钱财的报道,导致人们不愿意去帮助陌生人。但是人们只是变得警惕了,而不是不愿意帮助。民间慈善机构可能不容易让人相信,但是主流的慈善机构仍然会收到大量的捐款。这说明人们仍然是愿意帮助别人的。
总之,从个人捐款数额的逐年增长和被报道的好人好事越来越多,我认为与原来相比,现在的人更愿意帮助别人。
【作业二】
We always see some beggars in crowed places, such as the enter of subway and the railway station. Some people who pass by will give money voluntarily, while others directly ignore them. This phenomenon raises a heated debate: Compared with the past, whether nowadays people are willing to help strangers. As far as I concerned, I agree that people are more willing to help strangers than before. I will illustrate my point of view by following reasons and examples.
In recent years, individual donations are more than in the past few years. Donating is a way to help others we don’t know. The changes in amount of individual donations show the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers. The China charity donation report shows that the total amount of individual donations has sharply gone up from 2011 to 2014. The report is the statistics of domestic mainstream charity institutions and donation platforms without public spontaneous fundraising items. But only mainstream current has reflected the amount of donations more than previous years. Therefore, in this respect, people are more willing to help strangers now.
Media recently report more good people and good deeds. Because of the increasing number of good people and good deeds, the media have more stories to release. Moreover, the increasing number of good people and good deeds definitely indicates that people are more willing to help strangers. We can read a lot of news about good deeds on the social platform. For instance, a caring person has established an orphanage to adopt homeless children and a star has established a charity foundation to help children with congenital heart disease. The similar events can be frequently covered on the NetEase News or Sina Weibo which are two of the most popular domestic social platform. To some extent, the news can reflect social reality. More and more reports show that the number of good people and good deeds grows, and then make it clear that more people are willing to help others.
Some people claim that with a great number of cheaters who take use of people’s benevolence to make money, people are unwilling to help strangers. However, this only shows that people become vigilant to help strangers. It is reported that mainstream charities still receive a large amount of donations more than the past, which illustrates that people are more willing to help strangers.
In summary, from what has been discussed above, we can conclude that in contrast to the past, people are more willing to help strangers, on account of the increasing number of individual donations and more news reports about good people and good deeds.
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【作业一】[br]随着被欺骗的人的增多,一些人开始怀疑人们比以往更愿意帮助他人。在我看来,如今的人们要比以往更愿意向他们不认识的人伸出援助之手。我会通过在下文提供理由和例子来说明我的观点。[br]首先,近些年来来自个人捐赠的数量不断增长。实际上,作为帮助别人的普通方式,公众的捐款数量的变化反映了人们愿意帮助陌生人的程度。如今,越来越多的人愿意给他人伸出援助之手,这一点可以从近些年的新闻中反映出来。比如,当一位年轻的父亲通过网络希望为他患癌的女儿捐款时,许多人为他捐款。从这一点上看,我相信人们如今更愿意去帮助别人。[br]被媒体报道的好人好事的数量在一直提升。众所周知,正是好人好事数量的增多使得媒体有更多素材可以报道。近些年来,越来越多的好人好事通过各种各种的社交媒体如微信、微博等进入我们的耳中。比如,对我们而言听到许多个体捐款给别人、一些年轻的大学毕业生决定在边远贫困的农村做老师等新闻已经很平常。因此,在我看来,很明显如今人们更愿意去帮助他人。[br]当然,我不否认当前有很多骗子利用人们的同情心诈骗钱财,导致一些人变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。然而,实际上,愿意帮助他人的人仍是当今社会的主流。因此,我坚持认为人们如今更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]总之,如今的人们更愿意帮助他人,这不仅能够从个人捐赠数量的增加上反映出来,还能在媒体所报道的好人好事的增加上表现出来。[br]【作业二】[br]With the increasing number of people cheated by others, a doubt comes to many people’s minds that whether people today are more willing to help strangers than before. As far as I can see, people are more ready to give hands to others they don’t know. And I will elaborate my view by offering reasons and examples in the following paragraphs.[br]To begin with, the number of individual donations has been increasing in recent years. In fact ,as a common way to help others, the variation of the amount of the public’ donations reflects what extent people are willing to help strangers.nowadays, more and more people prefer to give a hand to others, which can be demonstrated by the news in recent years.For example, when a young father hoped to collect money for his daughter diagnosed with the cancer via the internet last year, many people donated their money for him on seeing the news. So from the point, I believe people today are more ready to assist with others.[br]The number of good deeds reported by the press has been increasing. As we all know, it is the growing number of something sweet that makes the media have more stories to release. In recent years, more and more news of good people and good deeds come into our ears via all kinds of social media like WeChat and micro blog. For example, it is not rare for us to hear that many individuals send money to others, or some young graduates decide to be a teacher in the remote and poor country and so on. So as far as I can see, it is rather obvious that people nowadays are more preferable to help others.[br]Of course, I don’t deny that with a great number of cheaters’ getting money by making use of others’ sympathy, some people become unwilling to help strangers. However, in fact, people tending to assist with others are still the mainstream of today’s society. So I insist on the view that people today are more likely to help strangers.[br]In a word, people nowadays are more preferable to bring the warm to strangers,which is not only can be reflected by the increasing amount of individual donations,but also can be showed by the increase of number of good deeds reported by the media.
It will inevitably encounter people of begging entertainer when we take the subway. Some people will give them money and some turn a blind eye to it. Focusing on whether people become colder or warmer, people’s statement are different from each other. I believe that people now are more willing to help strangers than before.[br]The amounts of donation from individuals in recent years are more than the past. Donation is the most common way for people help strangers. The change of the amounts of individual donation demonstrate to what extent people are willing to help strangers. China Charity Report that the amounts of individual donation are decreased continuously from 2011 to 2013, while it increased rapidly from 2014 to 2016. This report summed up the situation of donation in main charitable organization. Although didn’t count on the donation of private crowd raising organization, the main donation trend already shows the individual donation in recent years is more than previous years. This change suggest that people are willing to donate their money to help strangers.[br]More and more good people and good deeds have been reported by media. The increasing number of good personalities and good deeds provides mess media with more stories to release, which suggest that people who willing to help others are increasing too. When we open the wechat, we can usually see those news, such as citizens build a love porridge shed for the beggar, college village officers flock to remote rural areas, the volunteers support the education in remote areas, the girls with a kneeling posture feed for begging elderly.....every several days the good deeds would be showed out to be the headlines. As we all know, Wechat is the most frequently used social platform and it gradually become the major media for people getting information and understanding social hot events. It could be argued that the news on Wechat suggest the social reality to a great extent. Nowadays, more and more good people and good deeds are reported by media like Wechat news, which illustrate that the good people and good deeds are increasing. That is to say, people are more willing to help others than before.[br]Some people may think that with a great number of cheater use people's love to defraud money, people are unwilling to help strangers. However, people who become more vigilant doesn’t mean that they are unwilling to help others. If people find a reliable charity organization, they will still dedicate their love. Just as the previous example says, the amount of individual donation received by major charity organization is increasing rapidly. Thus, People are more willing to help strangers.[br]In conclusion, owing to the increasing amounts of individual donation as well as more and more good people and deeds are reported by media. I think that people now are more willing to help others.
【作业一】[br]我们经常可以在路上看到一些乞讨的人,但是很少有人会去帮助他们。与此相反,有时候在报纸上看到很多人会捐款帮助有需要的人。对此,有些人认为人们更愿意帮助其他人,另外一些人认为人们不喜欢帮助他人。在我看来,人们是更愿意帮助他人的。[br]来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的表现方式,个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。在过去,人们总是呼吁别人捐钱但他们自己却什么也没有做。但是现在,我周围的很多人愿意捐钱给别人,让需要帮助的人过上更好的生活。我也是一样,每当有捐款活动,我经常去帮忙并捐一些我的零花钱,虽然并不多。通过观察人们的行为变化,我们很容易看出来人们捐款的趋势在上升,也说明了人们更愿意贡献金钱来帮助陌生人。[br]越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有了更多的报道素材。而好人好事增多了,说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。最近我们几乎每天都可以在报纸、电视或者手机中看到各种各样的好人好事。例如大学生志愿者进农村支教、平凡老人用捡垃圾的钱资助贫困大学生、乞丐归还钱包等等。我们都知道,报纸、电视或者手机是人们获取资讯、了解社会热点事件的主要手段。可以说,我们从新闻媒介中获得的信息很大程度地反映了社会现实。当前,越来越多的好人好事在媒体上得到报道,这个现象说明好人好事在增多,从而进一步表明,现在愿意帮助别人的人比之前增多了。[br]有人认为,由于当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是人们有警惕性不代表人们不会帮助别人。人们会更加小心的识别骗子和需要帮助的人。此外,政府可以严格制定相关的法律法规来保障人们的捐款安全。所以我相信人们会越来越愿意帮助他人[br]综上所述,鉴于近年来个人的捐款数量逐年递增,以及越来越多的好人好事得到了媒体的报道,我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【作业二】[br]We always see some beggars in the park but a few people give them a hand. On the contrary, we often heard that someone donate money for those who are poor and in need. For this, someone think people are more willing to help strangers while the other think people don't like to help strangers. In my opinion, it is more probably that more and more people tend to help strangers.[br]People donate more money today than people did in the past. Donation is the common ways to help strangers because the change of person's donation shows the extent of people's readiness to help strangers. In the old days, most people always appealed to everyone to contribute money, while they didn't do anything. But now, more and more people are willing to contribute money to assist strangers in need in living better life. So am I. Everytime there are donation events, I often contribute my pocket money. By observing the difference in the behavior of people, we can find esaily that there is an increasing tendency for people to donate monry, and that people prefer to help strangers with money. [br]Recently, more and more good deeds have been reported by media. The increasing number of good deeds provides media more stories to release and shows that the number of people willing to help others is growing. Everyday we almost find some news that people help others in newspaper, on television and online, such as volunteer teaching in poor area, ordinary old man donating money to undergraduate in poor and beggar giving back missing wallet and so on. We all know newspaper, television and internet are primary ways to collect all kinds of informations, so what we know from media highly reflect truth. More and more good deeds have been reported by media, which tells us the number of good deeds is growing, and that more people are willing to help others.[br]Some people think that with a great number of cheaters who defraud money by people's kindness, people are unwilling to help others. However, people keep alert, which is not meaning that people don't like to help others, and is meaning that they will carefully distinguish cheater and those who are in need and continue his contribution. In addition, it is better that goverment strictly makes regulation to protect donation. So i believe more and more people are willing to give a hand for strangers[br]In a word, becuase of the increasing number of contribution and more good deeds reported by newspaper, i think people are more willing to help strangers than before.
In modern society, a large number of people, in order to get money without work, disguise as the disables or make up a miserable experience to gain citizens' sympathy. After the fact is exposed to the public, people become increasingly aloof to those ones who beg for help. Thus some people claim that nowadays people are more indifferent to strangers than ever before. From the point of my perspective, I believe those are insufficient to draw this conclusion. My view is based on the following reasons and examples.[br]One of the most important changes is that the money donated by individuals is far more than several years ago. Endowing money is the commonest means to help strangers. The change of money donated by individuals shows the extent of people's readiness to help strangers. Nowadays, there are increasing charity websites and apps popping up contributing to the diversity of donating approaches. And what's more, the data of those websites and apps reveals that the majority of the money is from single persons and the money grows with each passing year. Those changes undoubtedly testify that in comparison with previous ones, people today are more willing to help strangers.[br]In addition, nowadays the increasing number of touching souls provides media with more stories to release. This phenomenon indicates that there are more citizens willing to give a hand to others in trouble. When you browse the news via social app, usually you will get the information such as people set up tents to provide food for homeless people, volunteers march to the remote countryside to educate the children in there and so on. Every week this report would hit the title of the newspaper. Those media are the main approach for us to obtain information. The frequent news in those authoritative media means there are more people want to do a favor to strangers.[br]There are also quite a few persons hold that with a great number of cheaters who use the kind of citizens to obtain money from them, folks are unwilling to help others. But actually, people getting more alert doesn't mean that they are not prone to help strangers. Given that public find the authoritative charity, they will be generous as always. As indicated in the above examples, currently the money donated personally is growing farther. So people are more willing to help strangers than ever before.[br]To put it into a nutshell, in contrast to the past, I think nowadays people are more willing to help strangers in trouble. The modern society witnesses the growing amount of the money donated by persons and the frequent focus on kind individuals giving a hand to strangers needing help. All those lead to the fact people are virtually more likely to do strangers a favor.[br]
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我认为现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【理由一】[br]首先,帮助别人可以有很多方式,而捐款就是其中最直接和有效的方式之一。个人捐款的数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。根据一些众筹的网站和社交媒体平台如腾讯公益、轻松筹等的官方数据显示,近几年来,越来越多的人在平台上捐款。也就是说,当人们从各种渠道了解到募捐信息时,会忍不住想要伸出援手,提供自己微薄的支持和帮助,相较以前,人们更加地热心帮助别人。[br]【理由二】[br]现在越来越多的好人好事被媒体报道。由于好人好事增多了,媒体才有素材报道。而好人好事的增多也说明愿意帮助别人的人增多了。人们可以在社交平台上看到许多乐于助人的新闻。比如爱心人士在偏远贫困山区捐建希望小学,某明星成立慈善基金会帮助白血病患儿,这些事情经常能在网易新闻主页上或者新浪微博上看到。网易和新浪是大众最常用的社交平台,是人们获取资讯和了解社会的主要媒体。这些新闻在很大程度上可以反映社会现实。越来越多的报道说明好人好事增多了,从而说明大家更愿意帮助别人。[br]【背景段】[br]随着经济迅猛的发展,我们的生活水平有了很大的提高。 当有人陷入困境需要帮忙的时候,人们会在自己的能力范围内提供帮助。 就个人而言,如今,人们更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【总结段】[br]总而言之,现在人们越来越愿意帮助别人。 所有这一切在个人捐款数量和相关报告数量方面体现。[br]I think people are more willing to help strangers than before.[br]To begin with, there are many ways to help others in today's life. Donation is one of the most direct and efficient methods. The amount of individual donations demonstrated to what extent people are willing to help strangers. For instance, the authority data from some charitable websites and social mediums such as TenCent charity common weal, Easy-Raised etc., which showed that more and more people have donated money on the platforms in recent years. In other words, when people learn about fundraising information from various channels, they can not help but want to lend a helping hand and provide their own modest support and assistance. People are more enthusiastic about helping others than before.(114words)[br]Recently, more and more good people with good deeds had been reported by some of Medias. Thanks to the increasing number of good people with good deeds, media have more stories to release. Moreover, the increasing number of good people and good deeds definitely indicates that people are more willing to help strangers. People can read a lot of news that people help others on the social platform. For instance, a caring people has donated to build the Hope Primary School in the poverty areas and a super star has founded a charity foundation to help children with leukemia, these similar events can frequently be seen on NetEase News home page or Sina Weibo hot new blank. NetEase and Sina are two of the most popular domestic social platforms, where people can access to information and learn about society. To some extent, the news can reflect social reality. More and more reports show that the number of good people and good deeds grows, and then make it clear that more people are willing to help others. (179words)[br]Our living standards have been remarkable improved along with the rapid economic development. When someone getting in trouble that requires assistances, other people will provide their assistance within one’s capability. As far as I am concerned, nowadays, people do have greater willingness to help strangers. (45words)[br]In other words, people are increasingly willing to help others now. All this is reflected in the number of individual donations and the number of related reports. (27words)[br]

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