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11-09
口语喵第 35 期 Day 9
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 9# Yes, of course, I agree with this statement. Well, the first reason is that everyone admires beautiful things. There is no doubt that people should chase fashion. Clothes are the mirror of people’s aesthetic standard and their characteristics. Fashionable clothes show a tendency of society’s value. We can touch the leading edge through fashionable clothes. And secondly, fashion is a huge industry. Only more and more people attach the importance to their clothes, can fashion, this industry improve. Besides, I think people should choose what to wear according to their income, instead of paying too much for fashionable clothes.
2017-11-09 16:32:10 来自 口语喵
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We can touch the leading edge through fashionable clothes.这句话说的好像不太完整
还有最后一句的让步,显得观点好像变成中立了,不知妥当否
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2017-11-10 21:05
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我!来!啦!
语音:我这里听不到声音啊啊啊
我感觉这次的文本没有啥大问题
1.mirror-->mirrors
2.最后一句我建议最好换一句,或者删掉,第一是有点中立,第二是就算中立,也达不到支持前面中心论点的作用,稍稍有点跑题
2017-11-13 16:34
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语音:老蟹我真的建议你直接录脱稿,脱稿完全解放了你很多词完美的发音,很有感觉和调调
2017-11-13 17:36
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评论 3 楼: hhhh我咋那么爱你呢~
2017-11-13 17:59
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