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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 9# 【作业一】
请结合上述观点、理由和背景段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。
第一步:找出作文题目中的关键词。
第二步:根据关键词描述一个现象。
第三步:根据题目,给出自己的看法。
1.关键词:now> past: helping the strangers
2.现象
引出主题:在这个高度文明的社会,人们更喜欢去帮助那些需要帮助的人。
他人观点:因此,一个讨论出现了,现在的人们是否比以前的人们更喜欢帮助陌生人。
3.看法
明确观点:毫无疑问地是,越来越多的陌生人被志愿者帮助这件事情确实是真实的。
过渡句: 我将会从下面的理由和例子来证明我的观点。
【作业二】
请结合上述观点、理由和总结段,仿写一个新的总结段。
总结段可包含两部分内容:1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。
1.对观点的重申
从上述的讨论我们可以看出,我们可以很明确地说明一个结论就是,当今人们确实更愿意帮助陌生人。
2.对理由的总结
从一个角度来看,来自个人的捐款比以前的时候要多很多。从另一个角度来看,越来越多的好人好事被报道。

【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我认为,现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。
1. I think A be more willing to help B than before.
2. In contrast to the past, I think A be more willing to help B.
I think people are more willing to help strangers than before.
In contrast to the past, I think people are more willing to help strangers.
【作业四】
请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。
作业一:
In such high-civilization society, people are willing to help those people who need help. Thus, a discussion has arisen: whether people nowadays are more willing to help the strangers than ever before. Undoubtedly, it is true that there is an increasing number of strangers helped by the volunteers. I am going to elaborate my point of view by following reasons and examples. (62 words)
作业二:
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that in contrast to the past, the number of people helping strangers nowadays do exceed the past number. On one hand, individual donation is at the peak of any other time. On the other hand, growing amount of good deeds is reported and shown to the public. (59 words)
2017-11-09 09:31:03 来自 托福作文咩
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注意审清题意,弄清楚论点:相较过去,现在人们是否更愿意帮助陌生人,而不是有更多的人帮助别人
整体的语言比较流畅,句式多样,衔接自然,很不错,继续努力!
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