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口语喵第 35 期 Day 8
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 8# When talk about an activity with my family when I was young, the first word which comes up to my mind is cycling. You see, it was really wonderful to ride a bicycle during a lovely spring afternoon in a countryside. We talked, sang and laughed, doing our best to enjoy the sport and the beautiful season. I was so proud of my father because he was good at cycling and taught me many techniques. What’s more, in the mid of our trip, we always had a picnic in a park. You may not imagine how delicious my mother’s handmade food was! That’s the best way for family members to get close to each other.
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2017-11-08 22:39:20 来自 口语喵
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故事跟句子写得都很好,很通顺。
读的时候有的单词嘴要张开,大声念。感觉 “r”的儿音再清楚一点会更好
练习的时候试着用“/”先断句,让句子有快慢跟重读。
别的都挺好哒,加油~
2017-11-08 23:16
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