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口语喵第 35 期 Day 8
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 8# When I was a child, I enjoyed camping with my parents. Well, spending a weekend camping gave us a chance to refresh ourselves from tiring marble buildings and asphalt streets in the city. It was wonderfully terrific to be in the nature and see cute wild animals, like dears, rabbits, birds, you name it. In addition, camping taught me many life skills, say how to fish, start a fire and navigate without a compass, how can you say that they won’t be of crucial usefulness one day in the future? You see, not only though it could we get some important skills, but also we can destress ourselves and get to know each other better.
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2017-11-08 20:10:13 来自 口语喵
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tiring marble buildings,好像现代建的比较多的是 tiring concrete buildings
最后一句:though 改 through, destress ourselves感觉好奇怪.. 改为 we  ourselves can destress 会不会好点
they won’t be of crucial usefulness one day in the future 这句读的时候可以再强烈一点
写的内容不错,很自然


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