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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 8# I'd like to talk about a trip to the sea with my parents.
It would be about 10 years ago. We, the family of three, went to a beach in northeast China. It was spring and the weather was pretty warm. I was so excited because I loved swimming and I had never swum in the sea.
After getting exhausted in the sea waves, I relaxed on the beach, feeling the see breeze touching my face. The beach had few tourists at that time. So we were able to get away from the hustle and bustle in the city. It was just about family, love and good times spent together.
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2017-11-08 14:06:32 来自 口语喵
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I'd like to talk about a trip to the sea with my parents.
It would be about 10 years ago. We, the family of three, went to a beach in northeast China. It was spring and the weather was pretty warm. I was so excited because I loved swimming and I had never swum in the sea.
After getting exhausted in the sea waves, I relaxed on the beach, feeling the see(sea) breeze touching my face. The beach had few tourists at that time. So we were able to get away from the hustle and bustle in the city. It was just about family, love and good times spent together.
没问题,老哥。就是句式有点单调,除了because那里全是简单句。
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