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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 8# 【作业一】
有些人认为现在也有好多利用别人的爱心谋取钱财的报道,导致人们不愿意去帮助陌生人。但是人们只是变得警惕了,而不是不愿意帮助。民间慈善机构可能不容易让人相信,但是主流的慈善机构仍然会收到大量的捐款。这说明人们仍然是愿意帮助别人的。
【作业二】
当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。
1. With a great number of cheaters who use people’s benevolence to seek money, people are unwilling to help strangers.
2. People are unwilling to help strangers for a great number of cheaters who use people’s benevolence to make money.
【作业三】
Some people claim that with a great number of cheaters who use people’s benevolence to make money, people are unwilling to help strangers. However, I think this only shows that people become vigilant not unwilling to help strangers. Civilian charities may not easy to believe, but mainstream charities still receive a large amount of donations, which illustrates that people are willing to help strangers.
2017-11-08 09:53:12 来自 托福作文咩
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注意论点是人们比过去更愿意帮助陌生人,注意比较 
句法结构存在错误 
避免无效的论述,保证语言简洁精准
2017-11-09 11:37
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评论 1 楼: 好的,谢谢老师!
2017-11-09 12:15
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【作业一】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的让步段。[br]第一步:给出反方的观点和理由。[br]第二步:给出坚持自己看法的理由。[br]的确,有很多骗子利用人们的爱心进行钱财的骗取,导致人们不再愿意帮助陌生人了。但是拥有警惕性并不意味着 他们不愿意帮助别人,当人们找到合适的平台,走正规程序,所有信息得到证实后,人们还是很乐意帮助陌生人,正如前面例子所说,媒体效应使得人们对帮助他人的倾向更加明显,而且数量也明显增多。[br]【作业二】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:当前有很多骗子利用人们的爱心诈骗钱财,导致人们变得不再愿意帮助陌生人了。[br]1. With a great number of fraud taking advantage of individuals' compassion, characters are unwilling to help strangers anymore.[br]2. Folks are unwilling to help strangers for a great number of cheaters utilizing their sympathy.[br][br]【作业三】[br]请将你在作业二中写的让步段翻译成英文。[br]Indeed, with a great number of fraud taking advantage of individuals' compassion, characters are unwilling to help strangers anymore. Whereas, possessing alertness doesn't mean that people are not in favor of others. As long as supplicants find the formal platform as mentioned above, and submit accurate and valid information, there is no doubt that quantities of citizens are accommodating. More importantly, the effects of medias have a strong relationship with people's willing. Therefore, the increasing number of zealous individuals is conspicuous.[br]

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