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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 7# For me, I would choose the former one.
After a long term at school, students do need a relax and they should experience something different from textbooks or homework.
I mean, students couldn’t just focus on grade. Many abilities in our lives are important, too.
Taking my cousin for example, she spent two weeks on relaxation and got a job in the bakery.
She told me that it was really tired, but she knows how to communicate with a stranger and how to deal with some works about packaging.
Think about it, if my cousin just take a class during summer vacation, she wouldn’t learn about that.
So, have a relax then go out for a job, they will find a whole new world.
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2017-11-07 09:58:01 来自 口语喵
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啊啊啊啊啊,连读好难
2017-11-07 10:04
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Day 7
语音输出:
基本发音没什么问题
语速稍慢需要加强
语音语调尚可
但是连读现象没有处理好,很多可以失爆和叠合的地方都没有发音
比如 spent two weeks 这里,可以只发一个 t 的音;wouldn’t learn 这里,可以进行 t 的失爆。
逻辑方面没什么问题。有原因解释也有举例论证。
语言表达:
前面没什么问题,后面的表达可以做一些升级,比如
I mean, students couldn’t just focus on grade (their academic performance). Many abilities in our lives are important, too. (It’s also important to cultivate some life skills.)
Taking my cousin for example, she spent two weeks on relaxation (she took a rest for two weeks at first) and (then) got a job in the bakery.
She told me that it was really tired, but she knows (learnt about) how to communicate with a stranger and how to deal with some works about packaging.
Think about it, if my cousin just take (took) a class during summer vacation, she wouldn’t learn about that.
So, have a relax then go out for a job, they will find a whole new world.
2017-11-09 09:58
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评论 2 楼: OK!谢谢老师,表达确实需要改进!
2017-11-09 19:46
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