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11-07
口语喵第 35 期 Day 6
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 6# I guess seeing films is my best way to relax. Personally, I love films. No matter how tired I am, wherever I am, in a cinema or at home, only if I see some films, I can get refreshed right away. Especially the romantic ones, like “One Day”, “Before Sunrise”. Those love stories make me touched, and they teach me a lot about how to cherish a close relationship. Immersed in a great film for about two hours, it seems like I am able to have a magic ability to forget anything unhappy, anything frustrating. There is a unique world in films, which could ease people’s tiredness. So I have to say, thanks for films!
2017-11-07 00:15:52 来自 口语喵
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1 楼
老蟹,语音嘞?
2017-11-07 20:28
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2 楼
magic ability or magical ability 傻傻分不清楚,查词典好像都可以
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2017-11-10 21:27
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3 楼
这好像是好早以前的了的说
我这里听不见语音哈
1.only if的话,放在这里我总感觉tone有点奇怪,还是建议改成as long as
2. Especially the romantic ones, like “One Day”, “Before Sunrise”.这句话,好像不能自成一句诶,建议和前面的合成一句
3.have a magic ability建议改成have magic
4.ease people's tiredness建议直接表达为ease people或者alleviate people’s tiredness
2017-11-13 16:46
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语音:脱稿篇很棒棒,语音语调都很棒,给你一个大拇哥
        我觉得念稿篇的感觉和语音语调都不如脱稿篇,虽然明显没有卡壳,以后可以直接发脱稿篇呢
2017-11-13 17:29
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