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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 6# 【作业一】我同学的爸爸患上了癌症,可是她家庭条件不好,于是她就在微信平台上参与了一个叫做水滴筹的活动,大家纷纷帮着转发,同时她得到了社会上许多人陌生人的捐款,不到一个星期的时间,就筹到了手术费。
【作业二】来自个人捐款的最近几年比前几年多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人的最直接也是最常见的行为,个人捐款的数额体现了捐款人的热心程度。这让我想起了一个近期的事情,我同学的爸爸患上了癌症,可是她家庭条件不好,于是她就在微信平台上参与了一个叫做水滴筹的活动,大家纷纷帮着转发,同时她得到了社会上许多人陌生人的捐款,不到一个星期的时间,就筹够了手术费。这让我们惊讶又惊喜,没想到这会上有这么多陌生人能伸出援助之手,个人捐款的趋势似乎在慢慢主导着这个社会,这说明现在的人们更愿意去舍其小财救人于水深火热中。
【作业三】The amount of individual donation demonstrates to what extent folks are willing to help strangers
The number of individual donation shows the extent of public's readiness to help strangers.
【作业四】The increasing tendency of individual donation is more conspicuous than several yeas ago. There is no doubt that donation is the most direct and common behavior to transmit empathy and benevolence. Simultaneously, the amount of individual donation demonstrates to what extent folks are willing to help strangers. It occurs to me that one of my classmates was is trouble, whose father caught cancer. For her poor family, It was like a thunder from the clear sky, Owing to the platform, called water droplets to raise, which operates on the Wechat, she submitted her father's diagnosed evidence, detailed materials to the organization. All students and teachers were involved to forward the massage promptly. Fortunately, thing went well out of expectation, the surgery fee was sufficient within one week, which made us astonished as well as surprised. With large quantities of characters stretching out a helping hand, the disposition of personal donation is gradually becoming the mainstream in days and age.What this phenomenon reflects is that public incline to contribute wealth to assist people who are in a tight corner.
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作业一】
来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。众筹与捐助的网站和APP越来越多,使用这些公益互助平台的用户也越来越多。这标志着人们进行捐助的途径越来越多。微信朋友圈中有许多朋友经常转发一些筹款的求助信息,这个夏天我前往甘肃宕昌支教,在网上开展了一个爱心众筹项目,在社会爱心人士的帮助下我成功筹集了20000人民币,为贫困学子带去了书籍和衣服。[br]【作业二】[br]捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的方式,捐款人数的变化可以反映出整个社会对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。随着网络技术的进步,越来越多的众筹与捐助APP出现,使用这些公益互助平台的用户也越来越多。光轻松筹一家网站就有1.7亿多用户,帮助了220万需要帮助的人。你也经常可以在微信朋友圈中看到朋友转发筹款的求助信息,我和朋友们也经常捐助一些。我的一个高中同学得了大病,通过轻松筹APP在短时间内获得了成千上万人的帮助,得到了及时治疗,现在他又幸运地回到快乐的校园生活。[br]【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对帮助陌生人的热心程度。现在随着科技和互联网
1.A demonstrate to what extent B be willing to help strangers.
2.A show the extent of B’s readiness to help strangers. [br]1.The increase of the personal donation demonstrates to what extent people are willing to help strangers.[br]2.The rise of the money of the individual donations show the extent of public readiness to help strangers.
【作业四】[br]Individual donation is the most common means to help others and the population of individual donations demonstrate to what extent people are willing to help strangers. With the rapid development of Internet technology, many crowdfunding platforms and apps spring up. More and more users increased sharply at the same time. It is amazing that 170 million customs are provided service by only one crowdfunding net named Qing Songchou which helping around 2.2 million people in need. You can also get the information that friends put on the crowdfunding net to help people in trouble and we often lift a finger. One of my classmate raise enough money from all corners of country for his high costs of therapy just in a short time through the Qing Songchou. Fortunately, he came back to his college campus with many blessings now.
【作业一】[br]有大量例子显示来自个人的捐款数量逐渐增多,请举一个相关的例子。[br]我的一个同学得了癌症,需要大量的钱进行治疗,但是他家没有足够的钱来治病。经过社会媒体的报道,虽然大家都不曾相识,有很多陌生人纷纷捐款,顺利的进行了治疗。根据调查显示,越来越多的人选择向需要帮助的陌生人捐款。[br]【作业二】[br]请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么现在比以前有更多的人愿意帮助别人。[br]来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。捐款是人们帮助陌生人最常见的表现方式,个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。我的一个同学得了癌症,需要大量的钱进行治疗,但是他家没有足够的钱来治病。经过社会媒体的报道,虽然大家都不曾相识,有很多陌生人纷纷捐款,顺利的进行了治疗。根据调查显示,越来越多的人选择向需要帮助的陌生人捐款。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:个人捐款数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。[br]1.A demonstrate to what extent B be willing to help strangers.[br]The change in the mount of personal donation demonstrate to what extent people are willing to help strangers.[br]2.A show the extent of B’s readiness to help strangers. [br]The change in the mount of personal donation show the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers.[br]【作业四】[br]请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。[br]In recent years, donations from individuals are much more than before. The most common way to help others is give money to them. The change in the mount of personal donation show the extent of people’s readiness to help. For example, last year, my classmate had got the cancer so that he needs mounts of money to cure. And his family can not afford enough money to make the operation. But thanks to some society mediums report, some persons who are never to know each other before take money to help him through the difficulty. Now he is come back to our school. According to the survey, more and more people are likely to help strangers by donation.[br]
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【观点】[br]现在的人比以前更愿意帮助陌生人。[br]【理由】[br]来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年更多。[br]【作业一】[br]根据一些众筹的网站和如社交媒体平台腾讯公益、轻松筹等的官方数据显示,近几年来,越来越多的人在平台上捐款。[br]【作业二】[br]首先,帮助别人可以有很多方式,而捐款就是其中最直接和有效的方式之一。个人捐款的数额的变化体现了大家对于帮助陌生人的热心程度。根据一些众筹的网站和社交媒体平台如腾讯公益、轻松筹等的官方数据显示,近几年来,越来越多的人在平台上捐款。也就是说,当人们从各种渠道了解到募捐信息时,会忍不住想要伸出援手,提供自己微薄的支持和帮助,相较以前,人们更加地热心帮助别人。[br]【作业三】[br]The amount of individual donations demonstrated to what extent people are willing to help strangers.[br]The amount of individual donations showed the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers.[br]【作业四】[br]To begin with, there are many ways to help others in today's life. Donation is one of the most direct and efficient methods. The amount of individual donations demonstrated to what extent people are willing to help strangers. For instance, the authority data from some charitable websites and social mediums such as TenCent charity common weal, Easy-Raised etc., which showed that more and more people have donated money on the platforms in recent years. In other words, when people learn about fundraising information from various channels, they can not help but want to lend a helping hand and provide their own modest support and assistance. People are more enthusiastic about helping others than before.[br]
作业一[br]据报告,2017年网上捐赠平台数目,和捐赠金额大幅上涨。很多换重病的人通过网上捐赠平台,捐款人不仅主动捐款,还在社交平台转载,召集更多人参与捐助,所以病人可以在短短几天内就收到足够的捐款,及时得到救治。[br]作业二[br]来自个人的捐款最近的几年比前几年多。当我们不了解陌生人的具体需求时,捐款是一种常见且有效的帮助陌生人的方式了。而捐款方式的多样性和捐款金额也反映了大家对于陌生人的关心程度。据报告,2017年网上捐赠平台数目,和捐赠金额大幅上涨,很多患重病的人通过网上捐赠平台获捐,捐款人不仅主动捐款,还在社交平台转载,召集更多人参与捐助,所以很多病人可以在短短几天内就收到足够的捐款,及时得到救治。网络捐款平台数目的上涨反映了人们对于为陌生人捐款需求和愿望的增多,这也直接导致了捐款金额的上涨。同时大量受助人在很短时间可以募集足够捐款,得到救治也反映出捐款群体的庞大。总而言之,大家现在更愿意帮助陌生人了。[br]作业三[br]The change of personal donation demonstrates to what extent people are willing to help strangers.[br]The change of personal donation show the extent of people's readiness to help strangers.[br]作业四[br]Individual donations in these years are much more than it in the previous years. When we don’t know the specific necessary of strangers, donation is a common and practical way to help them. The diversity of ways and amount of money show the extend of people’s willingness to give a hand. It is reported that the donation and its platforms have increased rapidly and plenty of seriously ill people get money and cured in 2017. People not only donate actively and spread the news on the internet to appeal more people to donate. As a result, nearly all patients can obtain enough money in several days and be treated in time. The increase of the platform reflects the more needs and desires to assist strangers in public, which also leads the rise of money. At the same time, the reason why patients can get lots of money in short time is the scare of donors are big. In conclusion, people are more likely to help strangers.
【1】中国红十字会进行了一次大规模的统计,将近十年平均个人捐款额均折现到今年,我们可以明显的观察出个人捐款的份额的增长量在呈现每年递增的状态,虽然这也和近几年的经济复苏有一定关系,但个人捐款增长量足以抵消通货膨胀,此外我们发现除了个人捐款增加了,捐款的人数同样增加了。[br]【2】来自个人的捐款最近几年比前几年增长了很多。而个人捐款就是对陌生人关爱的体现,个人捐款额增加了,自然说明现在的人更愿意帮助陌生人。中国红十字会进行了一次大规模的统计,将近十年平均个人捐款额均折现到今年,我们可以明显的观察出个人捐款的份额的增长量在呈现每年递增的状态,虽然这也和近几年的经济复苏有一定关系,但个人捐款增长量足以抵消通货膨胀,此外我们发现除了个人捐款增加了,捐款的人数同样增加了。所以我们可以轻易得出,现在的人比以前更愿意牺牲自己的钱财转而去帮助别人了。[br]【3】Personal donations demonstrate to what extent people are willing to help strangers.[br] Personal donations show the extent of people’s readiness to help strangers. [br]【4】Personal donations have increased much more these years than that in several years ago. Because personal donation is exactly the way people care about stranger, the increment of it can reflect people are more warmhearted to strangers. This year, Chinese Red Cross Society made statistics about the average discounted personal donations in recent ten years. It’s obviously that the increment of it has increased a lot each year. Though it might have something to do with economic recovery, the increment of personal donation is great enough to offset inflation. What’s more, from the study, we can tell that except from the increasing average personal donation, more people are likely to make a donation. So, we can come to an conclusion that people nowadays are more willing to sacrifice their fortune to help people in need.

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