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口语喵第 35 期 Day 5
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 5# Well, in my point of view, I prefer to live in a modern building rather than a traditional building. Firstly, it is more convenient for residents in modern buildings. Like, modern buildings are equipped with tap-water and sewer system, especially people can use toilets in their own houses, which is unbelievable in a traditional building. Secondly, modern buildings are always surrounding with green plants and colorful flowers. Residents can go for a walk after dinner, and sometimes they may take photos of this view. What an enjoyable life! In a word, I think living in a modern building is preferable for me.
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2017-11-05 14:26:55 来自 口语喵
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1.发音:有个单词有点小问题:preferable ['prefərəbl]
2.语法:be surrounding with sth.--->be surrounded with sth.
3.念稿篇我觉得这次时间把握的敲好,但是脱稿篇前半篇里表达观点的地方语速稍稍有点慢,中间有些地方的停顿显得不是很自然,建议尽量省去“嗯”“啊”的片段,一个稍微比较好用一点的方法就是:后面的词一瞬间有点忘了的话,就先把嘴边的这个单词的音拉长,给想出后面的词拖一点时间,感觉可能会比“嗯”稍稍好一点。
感觉进步敲大了,怀挺!下个周继续一起努力💪
2017-11-05 17:17
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