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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 5# 现代社会,经济越来越发达,交通越来越便利,国家之间开放程度也在提高,走出国门再也不算什么困难的事情。很多人年纪轻轻就有机会出国旅游,对于我来说,较之老了再出国,我更倾向于年轻的时候就出国旅游。
我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游,因为对二十几岁的年轻人来说,我们更需要增长见识。在旅行途中,遇见不同的人、接触不一样的事,会使人们变得更开阔。我很喜欢的一个美籍华裔旅行者名叫谷岳,他大学毕业以后在一家著名的金融企业工作,但是没过多久,热爱旅行的他就毅然决定变卖所有家产,开始自己的环球旅行。他走过很多地方,品尝了各具风味的美食,接触到与众不同的风俗文化,并感受到各种思维方式的魅力。在旅行的过程中,适应力极强的他变得更加包容、睿智。在认准旅行是自己此生最热爱的事情以后,现在的他已经成为了一名职业环球旅行家。
出国旅游需要好的身体。因为路途遥远舟车劳顿,十分辛苦,身体好的人适应力强,不容易导致那么疲惫,而且睡一觉就能很快恢复体力。出国旅游一般都是乘坐飞机,往往都会占用一天时间使人非常疲惫。比如,北京飞到纽约最快也要13个半小时。长时间在飞行状态,坐在狭小密闭的空间里,会令人腰酸背痛,产生烦闷。如果身体好的话,适应这种情况的能力便强很多。
有些人觉得岁数大了再出国旅游比较好,那时候有了一定的经济积累。而我还是更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅行,毕竟年轻的时候更需要走出国门看一看,让自己的人生有更多种可能,而不需要吃好的住好的才行。所以,一定要趁着年轻就去出国旅游!
综上,年轻人出国旅游可以增长见识,甚至改变他们的未来发展方向,而且出国旅行山长水远,需要一个好身体,所以我更加支持年轻的时候就出国旅行。
In the morden society, with the prosperous economy, convenient transportation, and open policy, it is not difficult to go abroad any more. A lot of people have chances to travel abroad at a young age. As for me, travelling abroad at a young age is my preference in comparison with at an old age.
I prefer to travel abroad at a young age,because young people crave for enriching knowledge and experience more than the elder do, especially in their twentieth. Meeting different people and seeing varied landscapes during a trip are an excellent way to give people an open mind. My favourite traveller named Yue Gu is a good example exactly. After graduating from the university, he worked for a financial department with high salary. Unexpectedly, he just quited the job and started to travel around the world. He visited a lot of places, even some little corners on the earth, tasting special, delicious food and snacks, contacting multicultures, and communicating with people who have unique ways to think deeply. In the course of travelling, he is able to adapt to almost every lifestyle, which makes him more considerate also intelligent. Since regarding travelling as his life goal, he has been a professional traveller now.
What’s more, It is necessary to have a vigorous body for travelling abroad. In terms of the long distance, our bodies and spirits suffer a lot. A man who has a strong body is able to adapt to this condition well. It is not that easy to make him feel tired, and having a sweet dream is the best way to refresh that kind of people. Additionally, people usually fly to foreign countries, and it costs the whole day on the way which drains strength totally. For example, it takes 13.5 hours at least to fly to the New York city from Beijing. Body will ache when people are stuck in their narrow seats for a long time. But if the body is firm enough, there is no doubt to get out of the dilemma easily. That’s to say, although travelling abroad is of great fun, it will consume energy and strength. So I insist that people should travel abroad as soon as possible!
Some people may hold the view that it is better to travel abroad when getting older due to the accumulation of money then. However, travelling abroad at a young age is preferable for me. After all, people need to travel abroad to widen their horizon and create more possibilities for their life as soon as possible, instead of enjoying good meals and living in ritzy hotels.
To sum up, travelling abroad is helpful to widen young people’s horizon, even change their future.Of course, it also requires a vigorous body. So, I support that travelling abroad at a young age firmly.
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【作业一】[br]请根据周一到周四的训练,认真修改之前的内容,写一篇完整的中文作文。作文可以包括一个背景段、两个理由段、一个让步段和一个总结段,也可以包括一个背景段、三个理由段和一个总结段。[br]【作业二】[br]Nowadays, with the improving of quality of peoples life, travelling abroad is getting more and more prevailing. If money and time permit, we all wish to walk around. Comparing with travel to foreign countries when we are old, my preference would definitely go to travel abroad when we are young. I am going to elaborate my point of view by the following reasons and examples.[br]For young people, we need to expand our knowledge field. Traveling abroad gives us a wonderful opportunity to see the outside world and broad our horizon. Take Chinese business giant Jack Ma, the founder of a big internet company Alibaba, as an example, travelling to the USA in his young age changed his life and the thousands and millions of Chinese people’s life. He foresaw the infinite potentials of internet. So after he came back to China, he built up a world famous internet company, Alibaba, which changed nowadays life profoundly in many ways. He mentioned in one of his speeches that if he didn’t go abroad when he was young, he would never achieve what he has achieved today, maybe he was still an ordinary teacher. It is travelling aboard in his young age that made him become who he is today.[br]Travelling to foreign countries needs a healthy body. For example, my grandma came to Shanghai, the city where I am studying in, more than 1000 kilometers from my hometown, to visit me when I was a freshman 2 years ago. I suddenly noticed that she was so old when I went to the airport to pick her up. After a 2-hour flight, she looked extremely worn out and sleepy. So we had 2 days rest in a hotel before I showed her around in Shanghai. There was no doubt that she could easily get tired from a long walk and even some tourist sites weren’t open for an elderly who is beyond 65. It is just in China, let’s imagine if old people go aboard there will be more difficulties and challenges they are confronted to, such as long-time flight, time differences, which all will frustrate and exhaust people easily. So we can draw the conclusion that travel abroad when we are young and energetic.[br]In fact, there are quite numerable people who believe that travelling to foreign countries when we are older is better. I admit that after so many year’s accumulation, people have more money to support their trips when they are in their 50s or 60s. And also free time isn’t a problem comparing to young people who are still in the period in which they need to work hard to get promoted or develop a better career. However, as far as I am concerned, due to the age and health situation, older people can’t enjoy the trip as much as young people do. Besides, when confronted to a tricky problem abroad, the old may not deal with it as easily and efficiently as the young. [br]To put it in a nutshell, my point of view is that travel to foreign countries when we are young rather than we are older. It is not only because going overseas provides a good opportunity to broad sights and obtain new knowledge for young people but also good health and a robust body are indispensable fundaments to travel to foreign countries. [br]
【作业一】[br]随着人们生活水平的提高以及交通的发展,出国旅游已经逐渐在我们的生活中流行起来了。有些人更喜欢年轻时出国旅游,另外一些人喜欢年老时旅游。就我而言,我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。[br]出国旅游需要好的身体。虽然出国旅游十分有意思,它可以带给人很多乐趣,但同时它也很消耗体力和精力。年轻人可以很疯狂地玩,但大部分老年人只能体验很少的东西。比如,去年我们全家出国旅游。因为我们很兴奋很开心,所以我们打算每天花很多时间到处走走。但是奶奶却很让我们失望,因为她身体不好,所以为了照顾她,我们总是要休息。作为一个精力充沛的年轻人,我很想尝试不同的东西,但是考虑到奶奶的身体,我不得不放弃我的娱乐活动。我的良好的身体支持我去完美的旅游,但老人太弱了以至于不能体验很多。所以我觉得年轻的时候去出国旅游是很好的。[br]对二十几岁的年轻人来说,我们更需要增长见识。出国可以发现其他国家优秀的地方,从而让自己弥补自己的不足,让自己有更多人生选择。原本我的姐姐天天不努力学习,而是虚度光阴的。有一次她出国旅游时,发现了很多先进的东西,她觉得这里很好。所以当她回国后,她开始努力学习并取得了很大的进步。最后她出国上学并得到了一个很好地工作。出国长见识让她有了动力提升自己去追求更好的生活,从而对她的人生起到了很大的作用。我认为年轻缺少经验,对世界缺少认识,为了提高自己,这是很必要的去多出去走走以增长见识。[br]一些人认为我们年纪大了在出国旅游更好,因为那个时候有更多的时间也有更多的钱来支持我们的旅行。但是年纪大了身体不好,而出国旅游消耗很多体力和精力,所以年纪大时出国旅游很不方便。所以我更愿意在年轻时出国旅游。[br]总而言之,年轻人更需要增长见识,而出国旅游恰好是一个适当的方法。另外,出国旅游需要良好的身体,一般来说,年轻人的身体要比老年人好得多。所以我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游[br]【作业二】[br]With the remarkable development of our living standard, now traveling to foreign coutries has been gradually popular among people. Some people prefer to travel abroad when they are young, while some like traveling abroad when they are old. As far as i'm concerned, I would rather travel abroad at a young age.[br]A good body is essential to traveling abroad which is very interesting beacuse it is of great fun, while it consumes strength and energy. The young can enjoy the travel, but most of the older only feel a little. For instance, my famliy went abroad last year. With excitement and happiness, we planed to spend much time going around. Unexpectedly, my grandmother was too weak to walk all day and we had to relaxed with her to take care of her well. As a energetic young person, I prefer to see more. However, considering my grandmother, I must look after her instead of having fun. My healthy body support me to travel and old people are so weak that they can't feel a lot. So I think it is wise to travel abroad when we are young. [br]As young people, we crave for knowledge more than older people do. Going abroad can help us learn the advantages of other country to cover the shortage in order to have more life choices. In the past, my sisier had spent muich time in relaxing instead of working hard. When she traveled abroad, she was surprised by something she had never seen, which motivated her to study hard and made a great progress. Then she was successfully admitted by a excellent university and got a nice job. She was motivated by learning about other country to pursue better life and changed herself a lot. I think that lacking of experience and the understanding of world, young people need to go around and widen horizon to enhance theirselves.[br]Some people argue that it is better to travel abroad at a young age, beacause we have enough free time and money to support our travel. Nevertheless, traveling abroad consumes lots of strengths and energies, and with a old and weak body, the old can't perfectly enjoy travel. For this reason, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young.[br]In a word, young people need more knowledges to improve them, and traveling abroad is properly helpful for them. What is more, nice traveling abroad is based on a good body. Generally speaking, the young are healthier than the old. Therefore, I prefer to travel to foreign countries at a young age
Nowadays, with the increasing developed transportation, it is more convenient for us to travel abroad. This phenomenon comes an interesting discussion: Which do you prefer? Travel to foreign countries when you are young or when you are older. From my perspective, my preference is traveling abroad when I am young. My viewpoint is based on the following reasons.[br]As for our young people, we carve for insights more than the aged. Traveling abroad, making us learn about other countries' development of technology and other nations' good qualities, is a good opportunity to expand our horizon and change the attitude toward life. And, the young people lack more insights so that they need to inject new thoughts into their mind. For example, my brother, an ordinary undergraduate, had a unsatisfactory grade, lacking motivation of study. Nevertheless, when he was a junior, he went to Tokyo for travel. At there, he observed the phenomenon that regardless of however painstaking the life is , Japanese is always leaving no stone unturned in striving to life and sparing no efforts to endeavour to work hard. There qualities inspired him. Consequently, he knocked himself out on study by and by. Now, he has got the master's admission of a famous university in the U.S. He often tell us that without the travel to Tokyo, there is no doubt that he must be a member of Neets. The new thoughts and increasing insights lead to his success. Therefore, form my viewpoint, we should get around to travel aboard when we are young and it will be very beneficial to our future.[br]Besides, healthy is necessary for traveling abroad. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of our energy and vigor. When we are young, there is no doubt that we have sufficient energy and vigor. And it is inevitable that the older you get, the worse your health is. Last year, my family were headed for Japan for skiing. From the start, all members of my family enjoy the shiing downhil. The speed made us felt that we float in the air. Nevertheless, after several hours,parents worn out and they left for nearby hotels by and by. we continued to enjoy skiing, while they boringly watched TV at the hotel. When we travel abroad, we are likely to do some stimulating activities. Therefore, we are in desperate of a healthy body. Thus, My preference is traveling abroad when I am young.[br]Some people hold the view that it is better to travel abroad when we are old. Because, at that time, we will be more likely to have sufficient money and more free time we can take advantage of. However, the older we are, the worse health condition we will suffer. And, inevitably, there is almost no possibility that we can take part in some exciting activities without any physical obstacle. Therefore, traveling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.[br]In a nutshell, as for our young people, we carve for insights more than the aged. And traveling abroad is apparently a good approach. Besides, A healthy body is also necessary for traveling abroad. As for me, undoubtedly, it is easier to maintain in good shape when I am young. Therefore, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young. [br]
[br]Currently, traveling abroad has been a fashion around in the world. Growing individuals like to go abroad to relax and expend their vision about the world. Thus, an interesting discussion has arisen: how would you choose to travel to foreign countries when you are young compared to when you are older? Traveling abroad at a young age is perferable for me. There are quite a few factors and examples to illustrate my point of view.[br]Firstly, compared with older people, young people lack more insight. Traveling abroad can help us to know the ecnomic form and development of science and technology in other countries. Young people require to improve their knowledge and expend their horizons through traveling. I'm a theological student in China. Once I always read some theological books that had been translated into our own language. Later, I got a chance to travel to Europe, when I visited a big church in Roma, I found a library collected a great amount of theology books owned neoteric mind that I had never read. I realized that there are more in-depth reseach overseas, which encouraged me to study English so hard that I can learn more theology knowledge to serve Chinese church better. As a result, it is beneficial to your future life to travel abroad when you are young.[br]Secondly, Traveling abroad requires the healthy body. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume much physical strength and energy. When we are young, we have enough strength to go everywhere. However it is inconvenient for older people to go somewhere, such as climbing mountains and long walking. My uncle has had more free time since his retirement. One day, he went to Switerland to climb a mountain. He kept walking all day ,which used up his energy, and he got a serious illness when he came home. Therefore, there are some limitations for traveling abroad when we are older.[br]It can not be denied that older people own a lot of money and time, even some old people own good body that they can try different activies like young people. Nevertheless I cliam that if people start to travel younger, they will get more experiences that makes life wealth and fantastic.[br]From what has been discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that, traveling abroad when you are young is better when you are older. It is not only because young people have enough energy, but also it can expend our horizon and is good for our future. Just as a Chinese proverb goes, a man who travels far knows more.
Along with remarkable social progress, people's living standard has improved a lot. More and more individuals would like to travel abroad, which arouse a heated discussion: should people travel to foreign countries when they are young or older? People based on different past experience and financial ability may hold various opinions. Some people asserts that we should travel abroad at an older age, at that time we will become richer. While I think the opposite is right. I will give my reasons as follows.[br]Young people crave for knowledge more than young people, which are good to both character development and future career. For example, my friend Jay confused about his direction of employment after graduation. In order to have a relax, he traveled to Sough America. During that time Jay learned a lot from conservation system of wild animals and that really helped him find his direction of employment. After coming back home, he find a satisfied job smoothly. Jay felt grateful that he traveled abroad at a young age, making it possible that he broadened horizon and increased lots of knowledge. Otherwise, he might still live in distraction and confusion.[br]Although travelling abroad is of great fun, it will consume stamina and energy. Without good physical condition, people cannot enjoy travelling. For example, once my family traveled to Sough America together. After more than 10 hours in a plane, my grandma felt uncomfortable with her heart. We were very worried about her so hardly had the plane landed, we sent her to the local hospital. Unfortunately, we cannot enjoy our well-planned journey. I think this case fully validate my point of view that health is the basement of travelling abroad. So it is better to travel abroad at a young age which is a golden period in one's life.[br]Admittedly, someone may assert that people should travel abroad at an older age, saying that at that time we will have better financial foundation. While plausible as it sound, it does not hold water. People will take increasing responsibility with age, such as taking care of older parents and the education payment for children, which would cost a large amount of money. So young people based on greater freedom and less responsibility should take chance to travel abroad.[br]As I discussed above, I strongly contend that we should travel to foreign countries at a young age. Not only because we are more healthy at that time, but also can we enjoy more freedom.

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