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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 5# 作业一:
现在,出国旅行已经不是很难的事情,越来越多的家庭以及个人或是团体选择出国游玩,体验异域风情。就我自己而言,我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。
对于阅历尚浅的年轻人来说,我们更需要增长见识。出国旅游可以了解其他国家的经济形态,科技发展状况,是增长见识的好机会。比如,我的一位学长,是学习漫画设计的,原本只专注于自己的专业,一次去日本旅游后,发现日本的许多商店设计都加入了漫画元素,非常的新颖,还非常的吸引人。回来后,他决心专攻室内设计,现在已经取得了不小的成就。他经常说,年轻时在国外的旅行让自己增长了见识,不然就不能发现更好的发展方向了。我认为年轻时缺乏经验与阅历,应该多出去走走,增长见识,这对我们的发展更有利。
其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩,年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。去年,我的父母去法国旅游,本来计划了一条很长的路线,在巴黎参观一些著名景点,然后乘火车去普罗旺斯等等,但是只在巴黎参观了卢浮宫,看了埃菲尔铁塔,就已经没有精力了,只能休息几天后就回来了。我自己也喜欢去各个国家旅游,欣赏不同的文化风韵,要是等到五六十岁再出国,恐怕就没有好的体力和精力可以承受这样的活动,所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
当然了,有些人认为年纪大了再出国旅游更好,因为那时候不用再为工作奔波,并且积攒下了些资金。但是我认为,年纪大了,身体已经接受不了长途劳累,容易引发一些疾病,能够在家里修身养性才是好的选择,所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
总的来说,出国旅行是一个增长见识的好机会,但是出国游玩也需要一个好的身体,而年轻人拥有好的身体素质也渴望增长见识,所以我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。
作业二:
currently, traveling abroad is not a difficult thing than before since the development of transportation. more and more families, the individuals or communities wish to walk around. as for me, traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.
firstly, compared with the older people, the young people lack more knowledge. Travel to foreign countries is a good change to learn exotic economics and the development of technology. For instance, my former senior, whose major was animation design. He used to focus on his major, but when he traveled to Japan, where he surprisingly found many shopping stores were designed or decorated with the elements of cartoon. It's amazing for adding animation into room design. Thus, he decided to study interior design and mix with his experience of animation, and now he made a great progress. Therefore, I guess that the young people lack experience and we need travel around more to increase our knowledge which will be benefit for our future.
secondly, traveling abroad requires good heath. interesting as it is, traveling to foreign countries will need consumption of energy and strength. as younger people can visit more places or play some extreme activities, the older have less advantages. last year, my parents went to France and planned a long tour that included visiting all the famous scenery spots and then went to beautiful Provence by train. Actually, they were very tied after just walking around Louvre, barely enough taking some pictures under the Eiffel Tower. Till finally they had no choice but to rest in hotel for the rest of days. I also enjoy touring abroad to feel different culture, but it will be a little difficult without full of energy and strength if I wait until fifties or sixties. Apparently, it is better to travel abroad when we are young.
however, some people claim that it is better to travel abroad when people get older, since then never mind the job and money. but older people don't have energy to travel a long distance and get tired easily, even maybe suffer from an illness in abroad. I'd like to stay home with my family if I were old. so traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.
in a nutshell, traveling abroad is benefit for us to improve our knowledge, but it also requires a good heath. since the young people is energetic and eager to explore the world, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young.
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For centuries, people have been moving from one part of the world to another. In the past, people traveled abroad by ship or regular train which needs a month of sundays. Today, we leap into an era of flights and high-speed trains which make sure us to walk around easier, comfier and faster if financial situation and time permits. [br]Compared with the elderly, people in twenties lack more outlook to expand. It is, without any doubt, a good chance to expand their vision by virtue of acquainting with the development of technology and form of economy in traveling other countries. The importance of broadening their horizons can never be too much emphasized. Taking my elder brother for example, he went about designing petrol-driven cars. Once he had an excursion to America from China when he were young, he suddenly saw a brand new Toyota Prius which was thought-provoking and enlightened him. In sight of the increasingly finite gasoline, novel PHEV ( plug-in hybrid electric vehicle ), even BEV ( battery electric vehicle , e.g. , Tesla model 3 in recent year, etc. ) break the boundaries of internal combustion engine and the demand for them is burgeoning. My brother anticipates the development of electric vehicle is promising. Determinedly, he opted to devote himself to EV. He end up designing a commercialized pure elelctric bus. He would not forget how much the indispensable experience helps him for sake of his success in EV. Consequently, I believe that it is advantage of people’s future to travel abroad early. [br]On the other hand, the importance of preparing your mind and body before traveling to foreign countries can never be too vital. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, actually, probably few of us have stopped to think about how vigor and stamina it will consume. It is no exaggeration to say, especially getting over the jetlag, not any elder person is vigorous and brisk enough to travel abroad, which is the fact of life the elderly should confront with. A miserable excursion runs contrary to the purpose of traveling abroad. Considering this, I prefer to travel abroad in young age.[br]But some people frown on traveling abroad at a young age as the elderly have more leisure time which enable them to dedicate their bank deposit to a foreign-excursion. Nevertheless, I would put a premium on spending everytime accompanying my older parents. As the old saying goes, not until we are parents ourselves do we realize what our parents did for us and what their lives were like. Hence, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young.[br]From what has been discussed above, a conclusion can be easily drawn that people should travel abroad at a young age. As for me, I would like travel all around the world from now.
【作业一】[br] 随着人们生活观念的改变,人们不仅仅满足于呆在家里或只在国内旅游,而想尝试出国旅游。但是新的问题又来了,人们关于年轻时出国旅游还是年老是出国旅游进行了激烈的讨论。有的人认为年老时出国旅游更好,但是,仁者见仁智者见智,我宁愿在年轻时出国旅游。我的理由个和例子如下。[br] 首先,对二十几岁的年轻人来说,我们更需要增长见识。出国旅游可以了解其他国家的经济形态,科技发展状况,是增长见识的好机会。而二十几岁的年轻人更需要增长见识。比如,我有一个朋友,她的专业是艺术。她从大学毕业后就想当一名中学教师。一次偶然的机会,她去了美国旅游,参观了当地的艺术展览馆和博物馆。然后她觉得她不知道的东西还太多,她的能力也远远不够。因此,她决定在大学毕业后继续去国外深造,并提高自己的能力。她说,如果不是她增加了她的阅历,也许她一生都会只当一名中学教师,而没有机会成为实现不一样的自己。我认为年轻时缺乏经验与阅历,应该多出去走走,增长见识,这样对我们未来的发展有利。[br] 其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩,年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。我的奶奶很想出国旅行,但是她走不了远路,又患有高血压,糖尿病,每天都要吃药。我奶奶年纪大了,经不起折腾。因此,她为了避免出现意外,只能放弃出国旅行的打算。所以说出国旅行最好趁年轻的时候去,因为老年人体力和精力都不如年轻人,还可能身患疾病,这是阻碍旅游的一个很重要的因素。[br] 有些人认为我们年纪大了再出国旅游更好,因为那时候不需要工作,空闲时间多,但是对我来说,年纪大了会更希望在家里做一些休闲的活动,比如下棋,写书法,养宠物。而且年老了体力不好,去国外旅行不太安全,所以我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。[br] 总得来说,我更愿意年轻时出国旅游。因为年轻时的我们需要增长见识,出国旅游是很好的途径。而且,出国旅游也需要好的身体。就自己而言,年轻时候的身体状况会更好,所以我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]【作业二】[br]Along with the change of people's lifestyles, more and more people not content to just stay at home or travel domestically, but wants to travel abroad. Here comes the new subject under discussion, which is about wheather to travel abroad when we are young or when we are older.Some people may think that it’s better to travel abroad at an older age. While, everyone thinks in his way. Traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.[br]For young people on their twenties or so, we require increasing our knowledge. Travaling abroad help us know more about the economic form, science and technology development situation in other countries, which is a good chance to broaden horizons. For instance, I have a friend whose major was art. She had wanted to be a middle school teacher after graduated from university. By chance, she traveled to America and visited the art galleries and museums in local areas. Then she found that there were still too many things that she still didn’t know and her ability was also far from enough. Consequently, she decided to continue to study abroad and improve her ability after graduating from college. She said if it was not she increased her sight at that time, maybe she would be a middle school teacher in her whole life and have no chance to be a different herself. I believe that we lack of experience when we were young. So we should walk around all over the world and broaden our knowledge, which would benefit for our future development.[br] [br]Besides, traveling abroad require good physical condition. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume strength and energy. Young man who have good health could have great fun, but old people are not so convenient to travel abroad. My grandma wanted to travel abroad, but she can’t walk a long way and she had suffered hypertension and diabetes, which needed to take medicine everyday. My grandma is too old to stand the racket. So in order to avoid accident she had have to give up the intention of traveling abroad. Therefore, It is better to travel abroad when young, since the strength and energy of old people are far from younger star, not to mention old people may suffer disease, which is an important factor of hinder travel.[br]Some people may be thought that it’s better to travel abroad when we become old people. Because at that time we don’t need to work anymore and have more leisure time. However, as for me, I prefer doing some leisure activities such as play chess, write calligraphy, keep pets and so on. What’s more, the physical strength of old people are not so good, so traveling abroad is insecure. Thus I prefer to travel abroad when I am young[br]In general, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young. Because our young people need to broaden our sights and traveling abroad is a good way. What's more, traveling abroad require good physical health. As for myself, The physical condition in young people would be better than older. So I would like to travel abroad when I am young.[br]
[br]Currently, traveling abroad has been a fashion around in the world. Growing individuals like to go abroad to relax and expend their vision about the world. Thus, an interesting discussion has arisen: how would you choose to travel to foreign countries when you are young compared to when you are older? Traveling abroad at a young age is perferable for me. There are quite a few factors and examples to illustrate my point of view.[br]Firstly, compared with older people, young people lack more insight. Traveling abroad can help us to know the ecnomic form and development of science and technology in other countries. Young people require to improve their knowledge and expend their horizons through traveling. I'm a theological student in China. Once I always read some theological books that had been translated into our own language. Later, I got a chance to travel to Europe, when I visited a big church in Roma, I found a library collected a great amount of theology books owned neoteric mind that I had never read. I realized that there are more in-depth reseach overseas, which encouraged me to study English so hard that I can learn more theology knowledge to serve Chinese church better. As a result, it is beneficial to your future life to travel abroad when you are young.[br]Secondly, Traveling abroad requires the healthy body. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume much physical strength and energy. When we are young, we have enough strength to go everywhere. However it is inconvenient for older people to go somewhere, such as climbing mountains and long walking. My uncle has had more free time since his retirement. One day, he went to Switerland to climb a mountain. He kept walking all day ,which used up his energy, and he got a serious illness when he came home. Therefore, there are some limitations for traveling abroad when we are older.[br]It can not be denied that older people own a lot of money and time, even some old people own good body that they can try different activies like young people. Nevertheless I cliam that if people start to travel younger, they will get more experiences that makes life wealth and fantastic.[br]From what has been discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that, traveling abroad when you are young is better when you are older. It is not only because young people have enough energy, but also it can expend our horizon and is good for our future. Just as a Chinese proverb goes, a man who travels far knows more.
【作业一】[br]请根据周一到周四的训练,认真修改之前的内容,写一篇完整的中文作文。作文可以包括一个背景段、两个理由段、一个让步段和一个总结段,也可以包括一个背景段、三个理由段和一个总结段。[br]【作业二】[br]Nowadays, with the improving of quality of peoples life, travelling abroad is getting more and more prevailing. If money and time permit, we all wish to walk around. Comparing with travel to foreign countries when we are old, my preference would definitely go to travel abroad when we are young. I am going to elaborate my point of view by the following reasons and examples.[br]For young people, we need to expand our knowledge field. Traveling abroad gives us a wonderful opportunity to see the outside world and broad our horizon. Take Chinese business giant Jack Ma, the founder of a big internet company Alibaba, as an example, travelling to the USA in his young age changed his life and the thousands and millions of Chinese people’s life. He foresaw the infinite potentials of internet. So after he came back to China, he built up a world famous internet company, Alibaba, which changed nowadays life profoundly in many ways. He mentioned in one of his speeches that if he didn’t go abroad when he was young, he would never achieve what he has achieved today, maybe he was still an ordinary teacher. It is travelling aboard in his young age that made him become who he is today.[br]Travelling to foreign countries needs a healthy body. For example, my grandma came to Shanghai, the city where I am studying in, more than 1000 kilometers from my hometown, to visit me when I was a freshman 2 years ago. I suddenly noticed that she was so old when I went to the airport to pick her up. After a 2-hour flight, she looked extremely worn out and sleepy. So we had 2 days rest in a hotel before I showed her around in Shanghai. There was no doubt that she could easily get tired from a long walk and even some tourist sites weren’t open for an elderly who is beyond 65. It is just in China, let’s imagine if old people go aboard there will be more difficulties and challenges they are confronted to, such as long-time flight, time differences, which all will frustrate and exhaust people easily. So we can draw the conclusion that travel abroad when we are young and energetic.[br]In fact, there are quite numerable people who believe that travelling to foreign countries when we are older is better. I admit that after so many year’s accumulation, people have more money to support their trips when they are in their 50s or 60s. And also free time isn’t a problem comparing to young people who are still in the period in which they need to work hard to get promoted or develop a better career. However, as far as I am concerned, due to the age and health situation, older people can’t enjoy the trip as much as young people do. Besides, when confronted to a tricky problem abroad, the old may not deal with it as easily and efficiently as the young. [br]To put it in a nutshell, my point of view is that travel to foreign countries when we are young rather than we are older. It is not only because going overseas provides a good opportunity to broad sights and obtain new knowledge for young people but also good health and a robust body are indispensable fundaments to travel to foreign countries. [br]
【作业一】[br]开头段:现在,随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人倾向于出国旅游。于是,出现了下列这样一种讨论:有的人支持年轻的时候出国,有的人支持年长的时候出国。而我,更倾向于前者,也就是出国的时候在一个年轻的年纪。我将会从下面几个理由来论证我的观点[br]理由一:增长见识有助于明确我们未来想做的职业。明确地说,我们如果能够了解不同国家的人,他们对于某种职业的态度,我们可以对这个职业有更深的理解。我有一个叫Jobs的叔叔,他很喜欢做西餐菜,但是他不知道一个真正的西餐大厨应该怎么做菜,但是有一次,他去了趟美国,参观了美国的餐厅里面的厨房,并且和厨房里面的厨师交流了一番。这对他后来成为西餐大厨有深刻的影响。[br]理由二:出国旅游为了省钱,都会一下去很多个景点。如果我们没有一个好的身体,我们没有办法去那么多的景点,也就完成不了我们的行程。这让我想起来了,我的奶奶有一次跟我们一起去日本,我们去爬富士山,富士山(mount Fuji)上的景色非常地漂亮,但是由于奶奶的身体不好,没有办法爬山,所以也就错过了这样的景色,最后只能够听我们说这个景色有多漂亮。[br]让步段:诚然,我并没有否认如果老年出国旅游没有任何的一点好处。例如,如果老年出去玩的话,他们可以对旅游地点有更深入的了解,可以比年轻人更能体会当地文化背景和习俗。但是,这个观点跟上述观点比起来太过薄弱了。我还是觉得年轻人出去玩会更好,因为他们会更有精力和体力,来维持他们的旅游。[br]结尾段:总而言之,经过仔细地平衡与分析,即使年老的时候出国能够对旅游景点有更深的认识,但是,我可以很长远地说,人们可以从年轻的时候出国收益得更多,不仅是年轻人需要增长见识,更加是年轻的时候有个好的身体。[br]【作业二】[br]Recently, with increasing quality of peoples’ lives, there is a trend that people will prefer traveling abroad rather traveling in domestic sites. Thus, an interesting discussion has arisen: some people harbor a perspective that it is reasonable to travel abroad at a young age while others claim that travel abroad when they are old is a perfect choice. As far as I am concerned, I will absolutely say that travelling abroad is of preference for me. I am going to elaborate my point of view by following reasons. (88 words)[br]What’s more, improving our horizons is absolutely an advantage of traveling abroad which can help us clearly know about our decent jobs. Specifically, we can have a deeper understanding in our favorite jobs by talking with other country people who have the same works. Only in this method, can we take a further step in a correct direction. Take my uncle for an example, who has a strong feeling that he is supposed to be a western-food chef, once he went to the United State and visited the restaurant here, giving him a complete and better understanding in how to be a great chef. (104 words)[br]Since we are likely to save as much money as we can in the trip, our schedule will be relatively busy. Thus, if we do not have a healthy physical condition, we are unable to see so many landscapes in such few days, leading failure to fulfill our busy schedule. In addition, owing to lack of a strong enough body, we will have no energy and stamina to travel some extremely beautiful but dangerous places. For instance, it does remind me of an unforgettable experience with my grandma in Mount Fuji, a beautiful mountain in Japan. My grandma is almost 80 years old and climbing Mount Fuji is too difficult for her so that she can only be told by us how beautiful at the peak of the Mount Fuji; however, she cannot feel it in person. (137 words)[br]Admittedly, I am not saying that there is no any advantage to travel abroad in one’s old age. For instance, if you travel abroad at an old age, you will have a deeper understanding of the sites you visited since you have more experience than the young do. However, on balance, the advantage pales in comparison with the advantage that travel at a young age, giving them more energy and enthusiasm to travel in a foreign country. (77 words)[br]In a nutshell, having carefully analyzed and balanced, although traveling at an old age are likely to have a deeper understanding to the cites we visited, I can further say that people can profit more from traveling when they are young, which can not only broaden their horizons but also help them get an improvement in their knowledge. (58 words)[br]