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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 5# 【作业一】随着交通的国际化,人们生活水平的提高,旅游的范围不再局限于国内游,出国旅游的趋势日渐上升。但在面对在什么年龄出国旅游时,社会上的人们很快就形成了两派,一些人认为应该在年轻的时候出国旅游,另外一部分人持有相反的态度,认为老年是出国旅游更好。就我而言,我赞成前者。
我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游,因为对于二十几岁的年轻人来说,我们需要增长见识。出国旅游是一个可以了解其他国家的经济形态,科技发展状况,是增长见识的好机会。而二十几岁的年轻人更需要增长见识。比如,我哥哥大学本科是学采矿业的,但一次到美国的毕业旅行重新定义了他的人生,他看到了互联网的在未来发展的无限可能性,所以回国后他潜心于自学互联网,在有了一定的知识储备之后,他和几个志同道合的朋友在互联网行业中摸索几年之后,现在他们一起在北京开了家小公司,开发了一些手机应用,目前效益很可观。哥哥现在常常感叹要不是年轻时增长了见识,他也就没有重新定位自己的念头,现在也许还过着平淡无奇的生活。我认为年轻人正是接受新事物的最佳阶段,应该多出去走走,增长自己的见识
除此之外,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费精力和体力。年轻人在身体机能的各方面都占优势,年龄大了就会出现各种的不适。去年春节,我们全家大小在泰国度过的,去之前,我们把每天的行程都安排的很紧凑,可是计划赶不上变化,因为外婆一直都有高血压,当我们在酒店住下的时候,她就开始说头疼,直到第二天也没有好转,我们就不得不将行程推迟。而且当时中国处于低温低的冬天,泰国相对来说比较热,可能气候的突然变化也让外婆的身体有点吃不消。我本身就是一个喜欢到处游游走走的人,如果不趁着年轻,有良好的身体素质作为担保的时候出去感受不同的文化和生活方式,那么老了恐怕就有遗憾吧。所以我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。
有些人认为老了出去旅游更好,因为那时候有了一定的积蓄而且退休后比较清闲。但是年纪大了,面对新事物的反应能力和适应能力下降了,很难在国外舒适的度过。所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
总之,年轻人作为祖国未来建设的使命者,需要拓宽自己的视野,增长自己的见识,出国旅游无疑是一个很好的途径,同时,好的身体素质是一切活动是前提,正如毛泽东曾说过:“身体是革命的本钱”,因此我想重申我的观点,我更喜欢年轻时出去旅游。
【作业二】With the exploration of transportation globalization and elevation of living standards, tourism is no longer limited in domestic, the penchant of traveling abroad is exceedingly increasing. Whereas, when it comes to what age to do outbound tourism is better, individuals are promptly divided into two groups.Quite a few explicitly claim that traveling abroad at a young age is an optimal selection. Others, however, hold a strong opponent perspective who believe that doing that at a old age makes sense. As far as I am concerned, I completely subscribe to the former.
When it comes to when is better to travel abroad, at a young age or old age? i will definitely incline to the former. We are supposed to be equipped with plenty of experience and knowledge through our lives, especially in twenties. There is doubt that traveling to foreign countries is a good chance for young people to enrich their experiment and broaden their horizon in accordance with realizing the economic tendency of other countries and the development of science and technology. Take my older brother for example,my brother studied mining in university. It was an occasional opportunity of graduation trip to America that redefined his life. What he has seen was the possibilities of the development in the future of the Internet. After coming back homeland, he immersed himself into learning the Internet. With great knowledge reserve in the respect, he and his several like-minded friends have groped in the Internet industry for a few years. Now they are running a small company in Beijing, specializing in developing some mobile application. The benefit is very considerable. My brother often sighs that he would not have redefined his mind if he had not increased his knowledge in his youth and he might have lived a prosaic life. I think that young people are at the best stage of accepting new things and should go out more and see more.
In addition, a robust is the warranty of traveling abroad.Interesting as it is, outbound tourism will need consumption of stamina and vigor. There are explicit priorities in physiological functions among youngsters when comparing with senior citizens. There in no doubt that any condition occur at any time with age. It occurred to me that last year, all my family members spent the spring festival in Thailand.Before we left, a tight schedule had been drafted. Whereas, the project could not keep pace with the change. Since my grandmother was entangled by a kind of widely-known disease, called hypertension. As soon as we arrived at the local hotel, she got a headache until the next morning. What's worse, there seemed no sign of being better in her. We had no choice but to delay our agenda. More over, at that time, Thailand was relatively hotter than China, which was winter. I speculated that it might be another factor which made my grandmother could not adjust herself instantaneously. What my preference is to experience different cultures and life styles. Provided that I was not capable of traveling abroad when I was entitled with high quality body at my young age, it would remain regrets in my life when I look back at my old age. Consequently, I definitely hold the attitude that enjoy outbound tourism as young as possible.
Admittedly, Quite a few characters strongly hold the view that traveling abroad when are old is better on account of considerably available time and savings. Whereas, faced with whole new issues, folks will become blunt in reaction and adaptation with age. It is fairly hard for them to spend comfortable life outside country. Consequently, traveling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.
To summarize, taking up the mission of constructing the future country, youngsters are supposed to be endowed with broaden horizon, which can be achieved in accordance with outbound tourism. Simultaneously, a robust body is the precondition of traveling abroad. Finally, I desirably reiterate my standpoint that traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.
2017-11-03 10:04:32 来自 托福作文咩
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写的很好,连接词也运用的别有一番风味(感觉说的怪怪的),中文作文写得也很好,不像我中文作文从来写不好。背景段和里有段都写得特别好,运用的词也很恰当。帮帮哒。
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 As a most flourish industry, traveling abroad has become an integral part of human's life. Somebody take it for granted that since minors have limited time, it is more suitable for elders to go on a foreigh trip. Nevertheless, I believe we young people have further advantages in comparison with old people. There are several reasons and examples to illustrate my point of view.[br]Undoubtedly, it is imperative for young people to expand their scope of knowledge. Minors today ought to stand poised on the brink of technology and assimilate new knowledge. On no account can we choose a bored way at such an early age when you can challenge yourself. Thus, to some extent, having a trip is the best way to achieve it. Here is a concrete example. My uncle used to ba a white-collar arranged by his parents while he had graduated from university, just making living for family. Since he had experienced a long-distance trie alone, with a lot of events happened around him, he realized that he need to change his path by himself in this energetic age and stop his current work. Finally, with strenuouly stuggling, he made prodigious progress that he never imagined. Hence, being a traveler when you are young can bring you a lot of things.[br]  It is self-evident that we could enjoy traveling abroad only if there remains a vigorous body. As an tempororay outsider of the foreign country, you would definitely have a tight schedule in order to visit adequate places there. Nevertheless, if you are at advanced age that you do not have enough energy according to your plan, you probably feel depression and wasteful of limited time. Besides, it can also exert negative effects on the body of elders even illness, which is good for nothing for them. A reseach conducted by a group of medical professors reveals that old people get infected much easier in comparison with youth, not to mention a long-distance trip to foreigh country.[br]Admittedly, the people at an old age mostly get financial freedom that benefit traveling in comparison with minors. However, if you sick in foreign country because of sensitive immune sysytem, plenty of money will be good for nothing.[br]In a nutshell, I reierate my standpoint that it is much better for young people to travel abroad. It is not only because of energy, but also because of the expansion of knowledge.[br][br]
【作业一】[br]请根据周一到周四的训练,认真修改之前的内容,写一篇完整的中文作文。作文可以包括一个背景段、两个理由段、一个让步段和一个总结段,也可以包括一个背景段、三个理由段和一个总结段。[br]【作业二】[br]Nowadays, with the improving of quality of peoples life, travelling abroad is getting more and more prevailing. If money and time permit, we all wish to walk around. Comparing with travel to foreign countries when we are old, my preference would definitely go to travel abroad when we are young. I am going to elaborate my point of view by the following reasons and examples.[br]For young people, we need to expand our knowledge field. Traveling abroad gives us a wonderful opportunity to see the outside world and broad our horizon. Take Chinese business giant Jack Ma, the founder of a big internet company Alibaba, as an example, travelling to the USA in his young age changed his life and the thousands and millions of Chinese people’s life. He foresaw the infinite potentials of internet. So after he came back to China, he built up a world famous internet company, Alibaba, which changed nowadays life profoundly in many ways. He mentioned in one of his speeches that if he didn’t go abroad when he was young, he would never achieve what he has achieved today, maybe he was still an ordinary teacher. It is travelling aboard in his young age that made him become who he is today.[br]Travelling to foreign countries needs a healthy body. For example, my grandma came to Shanghai, the city where I am studying in, more than 1000 kilometers from my hometown, to visit me when I was a freshman 2 years ago. I suddenly noticed that she was so old when I went to the airport to pick her up. After a 2-hour flight, she looked extremely worn out and sleepy. So we had 2 days rest in a hotel before I showed her around in Shanghai. There was no doubt that she could easily get tired from a long walk and even some tourist sites weren’t open for an elderly who is beyond 65. It is just in China, let’s imagine if old people go aboard there will be more difficulties and challenges they are confronted to, such as long-time flight, time differences, which all will frustrate and exhaust people easily. So we can draw the conclusion that travel abroad when we are young and energetic.[br]In fact, there are quite numerable people who believe that travelling to foreign countries when we are older is better. I admit that after so many year’s accumulation, people have more money to support their trips when they are in their 50s or 60s. And also free time isn’t a problem comparing to young people who are still in the period in which they need to work hard to get promoted or develop a better career. However, as far as I am concerned, due to the age and health situation, older people can’t enjoy the trip as much as young people do. Besides, when confronted to a tricky problem abroad, the old may not deal with it as easily and efficiently as the young. [br]To put it in a nutshell, my point of view is that travel to foreign countries when we are young rather than we are older. It is not only because going overseas provides a good opportunity to broad sights and obtain new knowledge for young people but also good health and a robust body are indispensable fundaments to travel to foreign countries. [br]
1.随着人们生活水平的提高,出国旅游成为越来越多人的选择,因为出国旅游既能让人们放松心情又能让人们开到不一样的世界。有些人认为老年更适合出国旅游,但是我认为年轻的时候更适合出国旅游。我的理由如下:[br]2.对二十几岁的年轻人来说,我们更需要增长见识。知识是提升我们自身技能,把握机会的的有效途径, 作为年轻一代的我们拥有充足的精力和创造力,应抓着这样的关键时刻出国旅游去学习,增长知识,为自身发展创造机会。比如,学建筑的哥哥正是因为去埃及,希腊,法国等过去旅游后,领略到了当地建筑的特色,才激发了他在建筑上的无限灵感,回国后建造了许多著名的建筑并拿了很多大奖,促进了他在建筑行业的进一步发展和提升。要不是出国旅游带来的灵感,哥哥也不会在建筑上有如此大的造诣。因此,我认为年轻时候应该多出去走走,增长见识、开拓眼界、累积经验和阅历,这样对我们未来的发展有利。[br]3.出国旅游需要好的身体。只有身体好,有足够的体力和精力,我们才能玩的更尽兴。去年夏天,我们一家人一起去法国旅行,经过几个小时的飞机,到达目的地时候年长的叔叔就已经困得不行。在后面的几天旅行中,我们爬山,观景,叔叔也只是在第一天玩的还算尽兴,到后面几天体力就跟不上。第三天时候我们坐在缆车上四处观赏风景,叔叔在旁边睡着了,完全没有精力去看风景。年轻的时候可以多出去走走,多去体验一下不同的经历,而到年老的时候在出国,可能身体无法承受。因此年轻的时候出国旅游最好。[br]4.不否认一些人认为年纪大的时候有更多的经济基础,出国旅游不会有任何经济负担,能够玩的更尽兴。但是我认为相比个人的发展来说,其他的因素都不重要,因为尽管可能出国旅游会耗费年轻人的所有资产,但出国能够让我们增长见识,收获更多的发展机会,而这些很利于个人发展,更别说增加薪水,和晋升。因此我认为年轻的时候出国旅游更好。[br]5.总之,我认为年轻的时候出国旅游更好,因为相对老年期,年轻人更需要出国旅游来增长见识,另外他们有更好的身体和精力出国旅游。所以说,大家还是趁着年轻赶紧出国去旅游吧![br]翻译:[br]With remarkable progress of our living standard, traveling abroad is becoming more and more popular among people, as walking around can not only make them relaxed but also open their eyes. Some people claim that old people should definitely travel abroad due to their much free time. However, as far as I am concerned, I contend that it is better for young people to travel abroad. There are a couple of reasons and examples that support my viewpoint.[br]Young people who are about twenty years old crave more for knowledge than the old do. It is well known that knowledge is an effective way for us to promote our capabilities and grasp opportunities, and it is the prime time that we have enough energy and strength to go outside to learn more and create more chances for our development. For example, my brother who majors in architecture has won many awards, since went abroad and traveled to several countries, like Egypt, Greece, France and so forth. He enjoyed the beautiful and magnificent structures there and was provided lots of inspirations on architectures. He could not have ever made great progress on his field if he did not travel abroad. Therefore, I think we should go abroad to enhance knowledge, broaden our horizons and amass more experience which will do favor for our development.[br]Traveling abroad requires a healthy body. Only in good shape, can we have enough energy and strength to have fun. Last summer, our whole families went to France to have a vacation. After several hours’ traveling on the plane, my elder uncle was pretty sleepy when we arrived at the destination. And at the first day of the trip, he could enjoy it, but his rest traveling got absolutely spoiled due to the lack of energy. All along the way, we climbed the mountain, enjoyed the beautiful sceneries, swimming, etc. Instead, my uncle was too tired to do anything but was asleep. Young age can provide us more energy and chances to travel abroad and to have various experiences. On the contrary, we might have no energy and strength to go abroad. Thus, it is better for us to travel abroad when we are young.[br]Admittedly, we can totally enjoy/completely be drawn to our vacation when we travel abroad at old age without any burden, because they are wealth enough after several years of hard work. However, on balance, the issues above seem to be minor factors in comparison with their future development, because they can gain more knowledge and opportunities which benefit their future development/intending life in increasing salaries, getting promoted and self-improvement. In this way, traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.[br]To put it into a nutshell, traveling abroad when we are young is better. Since compared with the old, young people not only are more eager for knowledge by traveling abroad but also are energetic enough for traveling abroad. [br]
作业一:[br]现在,出国旅行已经不是很难的事情,越来越多的家庭以及个人或是团体选择出国游玩,体验异域风情。就我自己而言,我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。[br]对于阅历尚浅的年轻人来说,我们更需要增长见识。出国旅游可以了解其他国家的经济形态,科技发展状况,是增长见识的好机会。比如,我的一位学长,是学习漫画设计的,原本只专注于自己的专业,一次去日本旅游后,发现日本的许多商店设计都加入了漫画元素,非常的新颖,还非常的吸引人。回来后,他决心专攻室内设计,现在已经取得了不小的成就。他经常说,年轻时在国外的旅行让自己增长了见识,不然就不能发现更好的发展方向了。我认为年轻时缺乏经验与阅历,应该多出去走走,增长见识,这对我们的发展更有利。[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩,年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。去年,我的父母去法国旅游,本来计划了一条很长的路线,在巴黎参观一些著名景点,然后乘火车去普罗旺斯等等,但是只在巴黎参观了卢浮宫,看了埃菲尔铁塔,就已经没有精力了,只能休息几天后就回来了。我自己也喜欢去各个国家旅游,欣赏不同的文化风韵,要是等到五六十岁再出国,恐怕就没有好的体力和精力可以承受这样的活动,所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]当然了,有些人认为年纪大了再出国旅游更好,因为那时候不用再为工作奔波,并且积攒下了些资金。但是我认为,年纪大了,身体已经接受不了长途劳累,容易引发一些疾病,能够在家里修身养性才是好的选择,所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]总的来说,出国旅行是一个增长见识的好机会,但是出国游玩也需要一个好的身体,而年轻人拥有好的身体素质也渴望增长见识,所以我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。[br]作业二:[br]currently, traveling abroad is not a difficult thing than before since the development of transportation. more and more families, the individuals or communities wish to walk around. as for me, traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.[br]firstly, compared with the older people, the young people lack more knowledge. Travel to foreign countries is a good change to learn exotic economics and the development of technology. For instance, my former senior, whose major was animation design. He used to focus on his major, but when he traveled to Japan, where he surprisingly found many shopping stores were designed or decorated with the elements of cartoon. It's amazing for adding animation into room design. Thus, he decided to study interior design and mix with his experience of animation, and now he made a great progress. Therefore, I guess that the young people lack experience and we need travel around more to increase our knowledge which will be benefit for our future.[br]secondly, traveling abroad requires good heath. interesting as it is, traveling to foreign countries will need consumption of energy and strength. as younger people can visit more places or play some extreme activities, the older have less advantages. last year, my parents went to France and planned a long tour that included visiting all the famous scenery spots and then went to beautiful Provence by train. Actually, they were very tied after just walking around Louvre, barely enough taking some pictures under the Eiffel Tower. Till finally they had no choice but to rest in hotel for the rest of days. I also enjoy touring abroad to feel different culture, but it will be a little difficult without full of energy and strength if I wait until fifties or sixties. Apparently, it is better to travel abroad when we are young.[br]however, some people claim that it is better to travel abroad when people get older, since then never mind the job and money. but older people don't have energy to travel a long distance and get tired easily, even maybe suffer from an illness in abroad. I'd like to stay home with my family if I were old. so traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.[br]in a nutshell, traveling abroad is benefit for us to improve our knowledge, but it also requires a good heath. since the young people is energetic and eager to explore the world, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young.
Nowadays, China's economy has developed far postively than ever and gradually became a influential nation in the world. From the metropolises along the coastline to the inner central and western cities, more and more people have been gradually metropolitan. Moreover, getting the visas and traveling abroad are becoming much easier for the common people. It becomes a popular phenomenon to be on a trip to Europe, America, Australia even as far as Africa.[br]Compared to the senior, the youth lacks more opportunities to travel abroad to broaden their mind and expand their horizon. Taking a journey or exchange to the other countries, one could get into contact with the latest scientific technology and economic improvements. It is no better chance than this to open up one’s eyes to look into the world. Furthermore this impact is especially significant to the youth, whom are at the crucial stage of their whole career. For example like Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba, he strived and grasped the chance to visit Australia in his early 20s. It is the first time he has the opportunity to get in touch with the exterior world and he realized the importance of the internet addressing on the information exchange and merchandise trade. This trip has overturned Jack Ma’s life, for which he realize he needs a brand new thinking and view. When he came back to China, he used the internet technology combining with his extraordinary business capacity to establish the online shopping empire Alibaba, an Internet legend. Although the epoch produced the hero, Ma’s gargantuan success is inseparable from this abroad traveling. Therefore the youth should crave for the experience abroad much more than the senior do, in order to enrich their life observation.[br]Secondly, traveling abroad needs a healthy body. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will definitely needs consumption of great vim and energy. The youth could try all most every single activity in the tourist sites, whereas the senior could only turn to the moderate and energy-saving projects. Last year, I took my mum on a tour to Japan. Though she acknowledged that the Japanese cuisine is so palatable and appetizing, due to her weak stomach she had no choice but to avoid the majority of the uncooked sushi and sashimi. And I could tour the whole Disney land and joined almost every program for the entire day without feeling exhausted, while my mum could only just do some shopping in mall then stay in the hotel taking rest. Witnessing the sad limitation of age, I realize that, one should definitely seize the opportunity to travel abroad in their early age instead of facing the health limitations when they are aged.[br]Some critics may claim that the senior would have more available time and money for traveling abroad. But for the youth, striving to work in order to save money and vocation for the traveling expense is also a motivation for their career. One famous couple from Japan, their dream is traveling all over the world. So they have been working more than 12 hours per day and keeping the minimum expense for 5 years. Then finally they have collected more than 100,000 dollars to afford their travel. Then they quit their job and started their tour, while updating their journey on tweeter simultaneously. Now they own more than millions of followers.[br]As a conclusion, due to not only the significance of opening up one's mind and expanding one's horizon to the youth, but also the youth's physical health which could sustain better and fit in the new environment faster, I would defend for the opinion that one should travel when they are young if time and expense permit.