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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 4# 【作业一】背景段
现代社会,经济越来越发达,交通越来越便利,国家之间开放程度也在提高,走出国门再也不算什么困难的事情。很多人年纪轻轻就有机会出国旅游,对于我来说,较之老了再出国,我更倾向于年轻的时候就出国旅游。
【作业二】总结段
综上,年轻人出国旅游可以增长见识,甚至改变他们的未来发展方向,而且出国旅行山长水远,需要一个好身体,所以我更加支持年轻的时候就出国旅行。
【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:只要经济和时间允许,我们都希望可以出去看看这个世界。
1.If money and time permit, we all wish to walk around.
2.Provided with enough money and time, we all wish to walk around.
【作业四】
【背景段】
In morden society, with the economic prosperity, convenient transport, and the improvement of countries’ opennes, it is not difficult to go abroad any more. A lot of people have chances to travel abroad at their young age. As for me, travelling abroad at a young age is my preference.
【总结段】
Above all, travelling abroad is helpful to widen young people’s horizon, even change their future, which also requires a vigorous body. So, I support travelling abroad at a young age firmly.
2017-11-02 17:24:36 来自 托福作文咩
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sorry,来晚了
【背景段】
1.the economic prosperity, convenient transport, and the improvement of countries’ opennes这三个并列成分形式应该是统一的哦,建议改成:with the prosperous economy, convenient transport and open policy,另外,openness敲错了哈哈
2.at their young age,我觉得是不是可以直接用at a young age,要不会不会在age的单复数上产生歧义?
【总结段】
1.第一句的定语从句用的有点怪怪的,让人很容易看不太懂,还是建议分成两个句子来写,然后中间加点连接的语句让过渡看起来更自然(e.g. on the one hand,...; on the other hand,...etc.)
2017-11-03 23:20
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评论 1 楼: 有道理有道理哈哈哈,不过openness这可是我照着金山词霸敲的啊
2017-11-03 23:32
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【作业一】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和背景段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。[br]第一步:找出作文题目中的关键词。[br]第二步:根据关键词描述一个现象。[br]第三步:根据题目,给出自己的看法。[br]现在人们生活水平的提高,更加追求丰富的精神世界,出国旅游也越来越流行。而且出国旅游对年轻人来说是最大的锻炼。对我来说,我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]【作业二】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和总结段,仿写一个新的总结段。[br]总结段可包含两部分内容:1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。 [br]【总结段】[br]总得来说,我们生长在一个多元化的世界,年轻人更需要增长见识,促进成长,出国旅游是很好的途径。而且,出国旅游也需要强壮的身体支配完成旅程来获取最大的收获。就自己而言,年轻时候的身体状况会更好,所以我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。[br][br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:只要经济和时间允许,我们都希望可以出去看看这个世界。[br]1.If A permit, B wish to walk around.[br]2.Provided with enough A, B wish to walk around.[br]If the financial and time permit, we all wish to walk around.[br]Provided with enough financial and time, we all wish to walk around. [br]【作业四】[br]请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。[br]Nowadays with a new higher-level of people's living standards, many people are willing invest more money and time to rich their spiritual life, travel abroad is also increasingly popular. It is a great exercise for young people travel abroad. For me, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young.[br]In general, we live in a very competitive world, young people are demanded to own a wider horizon which promoting their growth. Aand travel abroad is a good way for it. Moreover, traveling is required a strong body that support us to enjoy more types of activities. On my own, the youths’ physical condition will be better than older people, so I prefer to travel abroad at my young age.[br]

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