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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 4# 【作业一】背景段
现代社会,经济越来越发达,交通越来越便利,国家之间开放程度也在提高,走出国门再也不算什么困难的事情。很多人年纪轻轻就有机会出国旅游,对于我来说,较之老了再出国,我更倾向于年轻的时候就出国旅游。
【作业二】总结段
综上,年轻人出国旅游可以增长见识,甚至改变他们的未来发展方向,而且出国旅行山长水远,需要一个好身体,所以我更加支持年轻的时候就出国旅行。
【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:只要经济和时间允许,我们都希望可以出去看看这个世界。
1.If money and time permit, we all wish to walk around.
2.Provided with enough money and time, we all wish to walk around.
【作业四】
【背景段】
In morden society, with the economic prosperity, convenient transport, and the improvement of countries’ opennes, it is not difficult to go abroad any more. A lot of people have chances to travel abroad at their young age. As for me, travelling abroad at a young age is my preference.
【总结段】
Above all, travelling abroad is helpful to widen young people’s horizon, even change their future, which also requires a vigorous body. So, I support travelling abroad at a young age firmly.
2017-11-02 17:24:36 来自 托福作文咩
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sorry,来晚了
【背景段】
1.the economic prosperity, convenient transport, and the improvement of countries’ opennes这三个并列成分形式应该是统一的哦,建议改成:with the prosperous economy, convenient transport and open policy,另外,openness敲错了哈哈
2.at their young age,我觉得是不是可以直接用at a young age,要不会不会在age的单复数上产生歧义?
【总结段】
1.第一句的定语从句用的有点怪怪的,让人很容易看不太懂,还是建议分成两个句子来写,然后中间加点连接的语句让过渡看起来更自然(e.g. on the one hand,...; on the other hand,...etc.)
2017-11-03 23:20
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评论 1 楼: 有道理有道理哈哈哈,不过openness这可是我照着金山词霸敲的啊
2017-11-03 23:32
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关键词 Travel to foreign countries young older[br]近来,随着经济的发展和交通的进步,越来越的年轻人选择出国旅游,这种现象引发了关于出国旅游更适合在年轻的时候还是年老之后的热烈讨论,在我看来,我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。 我的理由和例子如下。[br]总之,从年轻人的角度来说,出国旅游可以让他们开阔视野,这对他们的未来至关重要,从老年人的角度来说,他们的健康状况让他们难以承受出国旅游带来的体力和精力的消耗, 所以如果时间和金钱允许,我会在年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]If the money and time permit, I wish to walk around.[br]provided with enough money and time, I wish to walk around[br]Recently, with the rapid development of economy and improvement of transportation, growing young people are choosing to travel abroad. This phenomenon gives rise to a heated discussion about which time is better to travel to foreign countries, when you are young or old? As far as I am concerned, I prefer to travel abroad when I am young. My reasons and examples are listed as follows.[br]To sum up, from the point of the young people, traveling abroad can give them the opportunity to wide their horizon which is vital to their future. And from the aspect of the old, their bad health cannot afford the consumption of energy and strength in traveling abroad. Thus, provided enough money and time, I wish to travel foreign countries when I am young.[br]
【作业一】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和背景段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。[br]第一步:找出作文题目中的关键词。[br]第二步:根据关键词描述一个现象。[br]第三步:根据题目,给出自己的看法。[br]在年轻时我们有更好的身体条件和更多活力。强烈的好奇心是我们尝试新事物的强劲动力,所以这是最适合出国旅行的年龄段了。 另外,当我们年轻是出国旅行,不同国家的文化和习俗能够拓宽我们的视野。这对我们未来的成长有所裨益。[br]【作业二】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和总结段,仿写一个新的总结段。[br]总结段可包含两部分内容:1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。 [br]总的来说,与年老了再出国旅游相较,在年轻时我们有更好的身体条件。我们能够更好的去尝试更多刺激的项目并使旅程更加丰富多彩。再者,旅行是一个增长见识的好机会,这对我们未来的成长有所帮助。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:只要经济和时间允许,我们都希望可以出去看看这个世界。[br]1. If A permit, B wish to walk around.[br]2. Provided with enough A, B wish to walk around.[br]1. If economic condition and time permit, we all wish to walk around.[br]2. Provided with enough money and time, we wish to walk around.[br]【作业四】[br]请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。[br]We have a batter physical condition and much vigor in our young age. Immense curiosity is a great power to arouse us to try lots of new matter, thus it’s absolutely a suitable time to travel abroad. Additionally, different countries’ culture and convention can broaden our horizon by traveling abroad when we are young. It will benefit our growth in the future. [br][br]In summary, compare with traveling abroad in old age, we have a best body's condition in young age. We can try to enjoy more exciting events and the journey will be more colorful. What's more, travel abroad is a good chance to open our mind, it will benefit our growth in the future.[br]

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