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口语喵第 35 期 Day 4
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 4# Well, I have to say, I am really good at making my grandparents happy. Maybe it's useless for other people, but for my famliy it is my advantage. Due to my grandparents are not young any more, and my grandpa’s hearing is awful, they have little communication with my cousins. However, every time I come to their home, I would be a good listener to my grandma’s stories, sometimes about the past, sometimes about their recent life. Plus, I would also have fun with them, like making innocent jokes of them, or imitating their accent with a high-flown style. Guess what, I can get their laughter everytime! Life is short, I really value the enjoyable time with my family, so the skill of making my grandparents happy is worth to be cheirshed for me.
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2017-11-02 15:58:39 来自 口语喵
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我来啦!!1.逻辑/语音:依旧没察觉出有太大问题。。
2.语言:
建议:第一句里for my family改成for me
           第三句里come to their home改成visit them
                          a good listener to my grandma's stories表达有点怪怪的,有点像story在说话
3.建议:脱稿篇可以在停(wang)顿(ci)的时候加进去一些类似like, you know kind of, well之类的表达让那段不很尴尬
              时间都有点长了哦,建议再删减一下稿子

2017-11-02 16:21
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评论 1 楼: 哈哈哈不露声色有技术的忘词!
我也觉得长,这几天都是😿到考试的时候可能大脑一片空白什么都说不出来了
2017-11-02 16:50
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评论 2 楼: 抱)放轻松会说的更好,我两次上考场都是全场只有我一个人在说,放开了反而就不觉得尴尬了,反而表达的更好,加油加油
2017-11-03 09:46
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